https://on.soundcloud.com/2fQBmGzbqmCGTf11A

8/10

7/10

 

I think you could slow down the tempo by 2 to 4 BPM. 

 

Perhaps add in a tamborine or open hi-hat with a "4 on the floor" pattern during the chorus.

 

Just curious; What DAW are you using? the synths kinda sounds like the stock Logic Pro X synths. off topic but I wanna buy the Nexus vst so badly but it is like $250 lmfao.

Edited September 18, 20232 yr by Junipero

it's giving femme fatale writers camp demo

8/10.

 

I like the instrumental quite a lot, and your singing style suits you better than 95% of ATRL singers. I wish you would lay low on the 808s in the verses though, I think they take away from the uniqueness of the overall instrumental.

12 hours ago, feelslikeadream said:

8/10

 

8 hours ago, KatyPrismSpirit said:

it's giving femme fatale writers camp demo

Iconic 

5 hours ago, ithinkheknowsoutsold said:

8/10.

 

I like the instrumental quite a lot, and your singing style suits you better than 95% of ATRL singers. I wish you would lay low on the 808s in the verses though, I think they take away from the uniqueness of the overall instrumental.

I can lower them when I get around to finishing it for professional release 💞

10 hours ago, bliaz said:

7/10

 

 

8 hours ago, Junipero said:

I think you could slow down the tempo by 2 to 4 BPM. 

 

Perhaps add in a tamborine or open hi-hat with a "4 on the floor" pattern during the chorus.

 

Just curious; What DAW are you using? the synths kinda sounds like the stock Logic Pro X synths. off topic but I wanna buy the Nexus vst so badly but it is like $250 lmfao.

I am using ableton and whatever’s in that library but I always tweak **** to my liking. I really wanna buy melodyne but I keep telling myself I don’t need it