Achilles. Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Submitted my song! I think it's my best one yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Spoiler The Neon Demon [verse 1] pitch black nights coated with litmus lights were the cadle to my darkest vice a glowing hut, a neon paradise which woke the rage of poisonous ice [pre chorus] my fate is running through my shining veins and i carry the warning of a deadly omen so i'm moved by the sounds of dancing flames cause i'm still a victim of the hell that i've chosen [chorus] human by skin and demon by soul a being that holds radioactive blood the neon demon reigns in here a toxic heart behind crystal eyes bears with a spirit that was crystalised the neon demon consumes your fear this is the land of martyrs in comfort but martyrs won't know more [verse 2] fluorescent dust and luminous shots will fade away all of my hazy thoughts inside the purple smoke and radiant stroke which will be the last line that i cross [pre chorus] my fate is running through my shining veins and i carry the warning of a deadly omen so i'm moved by the sounds of dancing flames cause i'm still a victim of the hell that i've chosen [chorus] human by skin and demon by soul a being that holds radioactive blood the neon demon reigns in here a toxic heart behind crystal eyes bears with a spirit that was crystalised the neon demon consumes your fear this is the land of martyrs in comfort but martyrs won't know more my entry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 (edited) TILL Spoiler [VERSE 1] A sea of solemn faces Crowded ‘round outside her door She knew the nightmares in her dreams Had taken on a new form Crows circled above the scene As a neighbor broke the news He handed her the newspaper With a headline that clearly read [VERSE 2] “YOUNG NEGRO MURDERED YESTERDAY NO OLDER THAN FOURTEEN HE WHISTELED AT A WHITE WOMAN HARASSED HER AT THE SCENE NOW THREE DAYS PASSED, HIS BODY FOUND BRUTALIZED AND GRUESOME SOME SAY IT WAS A CRIME OF HATE BUT WAS THIS THUG SO WHOLESOME?” [CHORUS] Till we see tomorrow Each day there’ll be more graves Till we see tomorrow Mothers will cry over remains Till we see tomorrow Till they open up their eyes Mothers will lose their children The body count will only rise [VERSE 3] Seconds passed, which felt like years That moment she’d remember How could she live if this was true? How could she hold it together? The pastor ran up the steps The wood beneath him creaking And caught the mother as she fell To the floor proclaiming [VERSE 4] “They took his sweet face and twisted it And ruined his luscious curls A picture’s worth a thousand words But that ain’t my baby boy I know he’s not guilty of those crimes He’s not guilty of that case He’s just guilty of his race [CHORUS] Till we see tomorrow Each day there’ll be more graves Till we see tomorrow Mothers will cry over remains Till we see tomorrow Till they open up their eyes Mothers will lose their children The body count will only rise [OUTRO] He would’ve been an old man today And now the truth’s revealed One woman’s vicious lie sealed a fate A coffin’s long been sealed And now the mother crippled with age Prays for her end to come For she’s seen that nothing’s ever changed She’s seen it again and again Edited February 5, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz Get in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Shook by quite a few of these entries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 (edited) 4 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: wait you did THAT.... Not the qween of clapbacks and drags complimenting me. Edited February 5, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 This week leaving me utterly wigless woo poor Dr Seuss week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 5, 2017 Author Share Posted February 5, 2017 Well, lemme make the doc and send em out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: Well, lemme make the doc and send em out Angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 5, 2017 Author Share Posted February 5, 2017 Fat Rat Records: @funnellegs - Tiny Hands/Dear Sister @Corsola - Stained Glass @jpow - Paranoia @8thPrince - Erased BrightRight Ent.: @Kunst - Lately @Aurora - Katrina @ughgabriel - The Neon Demon @TheCheetahwings - Drown You Out @UFO - Blanket Wake With The Moon Records: @Jackson - Lilac Fields @Achilles. - Eyes Shut @SaintWest - Till Angry Mom Records: None lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Poor Angry Mom, high key glad because I have no idea how I would judge a generic pop song fairly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Not my label ending up with the most submissions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 When u remember there's the same number of entries this week as last week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Where's your entry, fat? @ceremonials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 5 minutes ago, Corsola said: Last week had comeback submissions so no oh **** u rite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 i just submitted n. hope its not too late. but i kinda do hope it is at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Wow at it already being the Top 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 yas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 I'm looking at the PH9 tables and the update messed them up, I'm triggered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 24 minutes ago, Temporal said: Poor Angry Mom, high key glad because I have no idea how I would judge a generic pop song fairly. Literally why I didn't pick this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 Quote Just so you guys know, I'm sending a troll entry in the finale if I happen to make it without scoring a #1 - Hugamari, post 15,236 of Platinum Hit 9 Wow at Huga LYING and punching poor CountryBritney OUT #HugamariIsOVERParty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 3 minutes ago, Temporal said: Wow at Huga LYING and punching poor CountryBritney OUT #HugamariIsOVERParty Not my fault that even my troll entries are amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 No reviews yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 5, 2017 Author Share Posted February 5, 2017 You're such trash I hate you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 5, 2017 Author Share Posted February 5, 2017 1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said: Fat Rat Records: @funnellegs - Tiny Hands/Dear Sister @Corsola - Stained Glass @jpow - Paranoia @8thPrince - Erased BrightRight Ent.: @Kunst - Lately @Aurora - Katrina @ughgabriel - The Neon Demon @TheCheetahwings - Drown You Out @UFO - Blanket Wake With The Moon Records: @Jackson - Lilac Fields @Achilles. - Eyes Shut @SaintWest - Till Angry Mom Records: None lol @ceremonials - Relic - Fat Rat Records Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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