Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Oop haven't started yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 4, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 4, 2017 One more verse and I'm done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Will n e one read mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Nearly finished. @ceremonials sure, although I won't respond immediately (probably still within the hour, though). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Update: started my song and it's another politically influenced bop! @ceremonialswhat Jake said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 It wouldn't let me forward so invited you to the convo, hope that works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 yas can't wait to gang up on you OK I just read through my verse/prechorus/chorus for the first time and I was slain more than I thought I would be, let's just hope the rest goes as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 10 minutes ago, ceremonials said: It wouldn't let me forward so invited you to the convo, hope that works Lemme read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 4, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 4, 2017 who wants to read what i have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 4 minutes ago, jpow said: who wants to read what i have? ONLY IF YOU READ MINE REAL FAST jk I'll still read yours tho give it to me now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 I'm open to read and give advice to anyone, but I won't respond until my song's done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 6 minutes ago, Jackson said: I'm open to read and give advice to anyone, but I won't respond until my song's done Let me know when you're done, I might send you mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Oooooh I'm liking my song so far. Most of my songs are depressing af but my song for this round sounds like something I'd actually listen to in real life. Gonna proof-read it some more and then I'll submit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonchild Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 On 1/25/2017 at 5:00 AM, Cupid said: Where is my bf @Moonchild Living life and chilling. How y'all doing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 7 minutes ago, UFO said: Oooooh I'm liking my song so far. Most of my songs are depressing af but my song for this round sounds like something I'd actually listen to in real life. Gonna proof-read it some more and then I'll submit yasss b Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cupid Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 6 minutes ago, Moonchild said: Living life and chilling. How y'all doing? Oh hey boo miss ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Finished my song, now just trying to think of a title Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 6 minutes ago, SaintWest said: yasss b It's dark, edgy, tragic, sexy and a tiny bit crazy. I chose Birthright Ent. btw Gonna send in my mixtape demo in a few mins get ready ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 (edited) Who wants to rihview my entry real fast? Edited February 4, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Username Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 I need feedback on this Is it a fun mess or just a mess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 PHOTOPHOBICDiamond Hit Charts Week Song Genre Peak Pure Score 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. "Welcome to My World" "For the Gods" "Vilomah" (with Citrus) "Lost At Sea (Island)" "Berlin" "Lilac Fields" Alternative Country Alternative Rock Folk Folktronica Folk Alternative Country #2 #4 #1 #4 #1 ? 8.25 8.25 9.125 8.27 9.0 ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 4 minutes ago, Tymps. said: I need feedback on this Is it a fun mess or just a mess This has me vogueing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Spoiler L I L A C F I E L D S wake with the moon records verse I had another dream last night, where golden sunlight drenched my skin And dancing through the lilac fields I felt youth coursing through my limbs In memories of summer bliss, everything was simple then Travelling the rolling hills till starlight pulled us home again prechorus But passion turns to ignorance Loving to indifference Political belligerence turned havens into hell Now wonders of my glory days Are ruins of a better place And fragments of my memories are all that I have left chorus When I was a bit younger The skies were brilliant blue I wish the wicked hands of time were just as good to you When I was your age, darling The valleys filled with snow Now deserts fill the remnants of the world you should have known verse I'm told I'm just a fool to think that my own kind would threaten me Sirens caution louder but but their ignorance is deafening Maybe I'm naive believing every child should see the Earth Through the lens of innocence, and not the dreams of conquerors prechorus But passion turns to ignorance Loving to indifference Political belligerence turned havens into hell Now wonders of my glory days Are ruins of a better place And fragments of my memories are all that I have left chorus When I was a bit younger The skies were brilliant blue I wish the wicked hands of time were just as good to you When I was your age, darling The valleys filled with snow Now deserts fill the remnants of the world you should have known bridge Even if you never see the beauty I once knew I'll tell you all my stories till their beauty lives in you prechorus But passion turns to ignorance Loving to indifference Political belligerence turned havens into hell Now wonders of my glory days Are ruins of a better place And fragments of my memories are all that I have left chorus When I was a bit younger The skies were brilliant blue I wish the wicked hands of time were just as good to you When I was your age, darling The valleys filled with snow Now deserts fill the remnants of the world you should have known LILAC FIELDS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Jackson stealing my colors concept that I stole from Halsey and Taylor, wow Am I shocked? No Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Username Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 Just now, SaintWest said: This has me vogueing. Well this is RPDR Lip Sync Round But LMAO I transposed it so high and now my mouth is so dry from all the belting, I like never ever ever try to belt that high Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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