https://on.soundcloud.com/DuZ8HNykAtMzFTAd7
 

What do we think? It was inspired by the lore of keanu reeves character john wick haha. 

Lyrics:

I’m the judge the jury the executioner

Be care to cross me I take no prisoners 

excommunicado, I’m on the run,

Their coming after me, I better grab my gun

No alliances, I can’t trust noone 

I choose violence, it’s always always way more fun

 

Cause I got a billion dollar bounty on my head 

And a couple 100 hit men on my trail 

So Im always thinking 10 steps ahead 

My thirst for vengeance will always prevail   

 

And they they keep drooping like flies

Under neon lights 

Victim to my knife but such is life

Dropping like flies under neon lights

I gotta out run out kill the backstabbing spies

 

I’m the judge the jury the executioner

Pass me the bottle, I need a shot of hard liquor 

I have a drive that will never run out, my motorcycle is now on route

I got a flight to catch, a killer itch to scratch  

I’m sure there’ll be another batch    

 

Cause I got a billion dollar bounty on my head 

And a couple 100 hit men on my trail 

So Im always thinking 10 steps ahead 

My thirst for vengeance will always prevail 

 

And they they keep drooping like flies

Under neon lights 

Victim to my knife but such is life

Dropping like flies under neon lights

I gotta out run out kill the backstabbing spies

 

And I’ll never run never run out of bullets

Never out of bullets

Oh I’ll never run never run out of bullets 

Sniper eyes, quick shot they’re going down

Long days longer nights I’m taking down

Sniper eyes, quick shot they’re going down

Long days longer nights I’m taking down

 

Cause I got a billion dollar bounty on my head 

And a couple 100 hit men on my trail          

But Im always thinking 10 steps ahead 

My thirst for vengeance will always prevail 

 

And they they keep drooping like flies

Under neon lights 

Victim to my knife but such is life

Dropping like flies under neon lights

I gotta out run out kill the backstabbing spies

 

Those who cling to death live, those who cling to life, die

Those who cling to death live, those who cling to life, die

Edited May 21, 20233 yr by vinster13

better than i expected sis! It’s cute

It sounds like a low Bubbling Under charting song.

 

But for real: It's decent. The beat is okay. The lyrics are decent, a little corny. The vocal, it's giving Fireflies...which I don't completely mind, it's a little moody and whiny which I like. But honestly, I think I might've liked this more and it would've been elevated if it was slowed down, made to come across more spacey and less "boppy". 

3 minutes ago, Big Bad Wolf said:

It sounds like a low Bubbling Under charting song.

 

But for real: It's decent. The beat is okay. The lyrics are decent, a little corny. The vocal, it's giving Fireflies...which I don't completely mind, it's a little moody and whiny which I like. But honestly, I think I might've liked this more and it would've been elevated if it was slowed down, made to come across more spacey and less "boppy". 

I was kinda thinking the same thing like slowing it down and rerecording it but idk it was done and the idea was there haha. I’ll keep that in mind if I ever get around to finishing it. Glad u liked it a little bit!!