Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 20 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: First I just wanna say congrats to @Jackson cuz you’ve been playing these games since even before I started way back in PH7 and it’s nuts we get to tie as winners on this one you consistently smashed each round and I was sweating trying to predict how this would go. I do have to admit my R6 song partially exists cuz I wanted to at least tighten up the lead you had on me (There were multiple concepts but this one I was thinking “yeah maybe this could beat Jackson”) you’re a great competitor and songwriting friend and just for my thoughts… I’ve been trying to win an ATRL songwriting game for the longest I’ve gotten eliminated via non submission more than ranking out im pretty sure? So I’m happy I got to finally write a finale song first of all. And for that to be the round’s #1/help me win the season? Cherry ( ) on top. This song almost didn’t happen and I was so conflicted about what to write (I almost went for Nothing), but in the end, I knew I had to finish with this particular song and submit it. I’m glad I did! Thank you of course to the judges for the amazing season/format. now that I’ve snagged my white whale and finally won a season, do I hang up my competitor hat, or do I go for a solo win next? ?Time will tell! Thank you to everyone who submitted and made this game so lively and great. 15 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: OMGGGGGG A 10 thank you wow You absolutely deserved this win through and through, and I think the constancy in your scoring from R1-R5 alone is testament to that, but all we were really missing was that one 9+ entry to blow us away and you did that and more with a perfect 10. Speaking of white whales, you've managed to snatch not only a tournament win for yourself, but an elusive perfect 10 score! Something I believe only your fellow co-winner @Jackson has achieved way back in 2017 with Diamond Hit's Song of the Season "Stardust", and he almost achieved again (along with @Augmented) with their tied smash hits “Reykjavik” and “When Tradition Falls” respectively. Final season chart coming shortly!
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 14 minutes ago, fountain said: Of course! Written for the queer pride challenge and tied for second highest scoring song of the season, Augmented - When Traditional Falls: Reveal hidden contents When Tradition Falls V1: When Tradition falls I’ll be standing at its centre Detached from two realities The prayers or “the agenda” V2: When Tradition falls, Unbind the knots that silenced my voice Let each word rise above the choir Hear my speech break through the noise Pre: A lonely melody escapes my lips, A broken motif ready to be heard To sing “I’m free” to unknown faces the crowd engaged by every word. Chorus: “My voice was once reduced to whispers, My soul was once buried by fears The tears I cry fall not in sadness Merely from joy which now appears” V3: This lonely heart stands in the rubble The first in line to renounce his faith The prayers at night won’t be forgotten I’ll use their strength to keep me safe. V4: This lonely heart now gets its choice To finally pick a love desired Not wrestling with hate and sin To choose a man he once admired. Pre 2: A lonely melody escapes my lips, A broken motif ready to be heard To sing “I’m yours” to a wanted lover And hear those words sung in return. Chorus2: “My love was once reduced to ashes So desolate and beyond repair Now I will nurture its new life An age where love shall win so fair” Bridge: With this newly found perspective I’ll raise my head towards the skies And now I see what I have missed By keeping them bowed to echoed lies Those muted tones of sepia hues Which once cast over these broken lands Is painted with an arch of colour That spans from heaven down to the sands. Final Chorus: “My song will now reach out to others My family will hear its call They’ll understand my final statement I made my choice when Tradition falls” Lemme bump this fantastic song you all should read
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 Golden Hit: Season 1 📀 Final Season Chart Rank Writer Song Title Score Peak Round 1 8thPrince “I'm Practicing Happiness” 10 1 6 2 Augmented “When Tradition Falls” 9.833 1 4 Jackson “Reykjavik” 3 TruGemini “Sweet Release” 9.75 1 5 5 lex “A Long Night In May” 9.65 2 5 6 Achilles. “Crush” 9.533 2 6 7 Jackson “Il Diavolo e Dio” 9.467 1 3 8 Augmented “Lost” 9.45 3 5 Hug “Maid of Windemere” 10 Remmy “Paper Airplane Crashes” 9.333 3 6 11 Achilles. “The End of the World” 9.233 2 3 12 hurricane326 “Foothills” 9.15 5 5 13 Achilles. “In The Closet” 9.133 3 4 14 GentleDance “You’ve Settled” 9.1 3 3 15 GentleDance “Rupture” 9.033 1 1 lex “Weekenders” 4 3 17 hurricane326 “Trees” 9 4 6 18 Augmented “Blurred” 8.967 5 6 19 Jackson “DEEPFAKE” 8.9 1 2 Euterpe “A Nymph’s Campfire Tale” 5 3 Euterpe “Timeless” 4 4 8thPrince “Cherry” 6 5 23 8thPrince “Fraternite” 8.767 2 2 24 DatChickDoe “Days Spill On Like Blood” 8.733 6 3 8thPrince “Cephalopods” 5 4 TruGemini “June 5th, 2044” 6 6 27 Prisoner “Wind Chimes” 8.7 2 1 Euterpe “Candlelight” 3 2 Hug “To Make a Man…” 6 4 EpicSongFan “Frozen in Time” 7 5 Jackson “Peak” 7 6 32 Legend E “Maria” 8.65 8 5 33 Arrows “I Hope You're Satisfied Now” 8.633 7 3 GentleDance “I Know” 7 4 lex “I Want It All” 36 Legend E “White Flag” 8.6 3 1 Jessie “The Sense of an Ending” 8 3 38 Julia Fox “The Last Time I Saw You (Ivan’s song)” 8.533 8 6 39 Euterpe “Infinite Flame” 8.5 9 6 40 mxtthewdelrey “The Lease” 8.467 9 3 41 8thPrince “Whipping Post” 8.433 10 3 42 hurricane326 “Fight” 8.367 11 3 DatChickDoe “Rainbow of Night” 9 4 44 Euterpe “Seven Stripes” 8.35 9 5 45 Remmy “Flowerbloom” 8.333 4 1 JoeAg “Awestruck by the Noise We Create” 10 4 Hug “Edgelord & Savior” 10 6 lex “Done” 49 Jackson “You Almost Knew My Name” 8.3 10 5 50 8thPrince “Wind Rather Than Sun” 8.267 5 1 Achilles. “Persephone (Another World)” hurricane326 “Into the Blue” 4 2 mxtthewdelrey “proud to be yours” 11 4 JoeAg “Cherry Girl” 12 6 55 hurricane326 “My Man” 8.233 12 4 56 lex “Warm Winter Wind” 8.2 7 1 Achilles. “A Long Time Coming” 5 2 JoeAg “Woman in the Charmed Garden” Legend E “Joke” 12 3 60 Hanami-Blossom “Skydiving Raindrops of Honey” 8.167 8 1 Augmented “The Aisle” 13 3 Prisoner “Crying in the back of a cab, and you're not.” 63 RobDeWittBukater “Stranded in Your Arms” 8.133 9 1 Remmy “Nonstop Hardcore” 15 3 65 Hug “mm” 8.1 16 3 EpicSongFan “Mask” 13 4 67 hurricane326 “On a Sea of Glass” 8.067 10 1 GentleDance “They Just Had to Tell Me” 7 2 69 Prisoner “The Wind Spirit” 8.05 11 5 70 Hug “RAVAGED” 8.033 11 1 71 Arrows “careful, boy” 8 12 1 mxtthewdelrey “No Train Out” 12 5 73 OreGuy “Simple As Red” 7.967 17 3 Legend E “I'll Get To You” 13 6 75 Prisoner “Drift Away” 7.933 8 2 76 Jackson “Bike Lane” 7.9 13 1 Prisoner “The Candle” 14 6 78 ughgabriel “sequoias on fire” 7.867 14 1 Arrows “Out Of The Blue” 9 2 80 JoeAg “Maladjusted” 7.8 18 3 Prisoner “Futile” 14 4 RobDeWittBukater “Lovers in June” 13 5 83 DatChickDoe “Romantic Villain” 7.733 15 6 84 Euterpe “Ley Lines” 7.7 15 1 Julia Fox “Things I Did When I Was Little” 15 4 86 Tylerbv “Reason to Stay” 7.667 10 2 OreGuy “Choose Now!” 16 4 88 Achilles. “Graveyard (Land of Opportunity)” 7.65 14 5 89 Augmented “Keeps You Talkin” 7.633 11 2 Hug “Hug” Better Mistakes “You Have Changed Me” 19 3 Remmy “Pulse” 17 4 Tylerbv “It Gets Better” 4 94 Tylerbv “Sail Away” 7.567 16 1 EpicSongFan “Feeling You” 13 2 TruGemini “Fill” 20 3 Tylerbv “Running in Circles” 98 EpicSongFan “Scorching Memory” 7.5 17 1 99 Arrows “Do You Have A Secret?” 7.367 19 4 100 DatChickDoe “Blue Is How I Live Without You” 7.333 14 2 EpicSongFan “Illusion of Lovin' You” 22 3 102 Julia Fox “No Woman Is No Art” 7.3 15 2 103 OreGuy “Ways to Bring You Down” 7.267 16 2 104 OreGuy “Gum” 7.233 16 6 105 mxtthewdelrey “you cheat, you lose” 7.167 17 2 D e v o n “I or U” 17 6 107 Legend E “Talk of the Town” 7.133 18 2 108 Remmy “Don't Let a Man Tell You What to Do” 7.1 19 2 109 Better Mistakes “Blah, Blah, Blah… **** You!” 7 18 6 110 luckystrike “picking petals” 6.967 18 1 OreGuy “Forever Young” 18 1 Insanity “Distraction” 23 3 Better Mistakes “Her Eyes Are Blue and Mine Are Brown” 20 4 114 Augmented “Navy Mind” 6.933 20 1 boubour “Need To Know” 116 TruGemini “Dive” 6.9 22 1 117 Julia Fox “endrophy” 6.833 24 3 118 Lorenzo22 “Teenage Love Story” 6.8 20 2 119 Jessie “Ex-Flame” 6.767 23 1 Jessie “Ecstasy All Night” 21 2 lex “Nights on the Run” RobDeWittBukater “Password” 123 Julia Fox “Holy Ground” 6.7 24 1 124 Astro “Hypochondriac” 6.633 25 1 125 TruGemini “Zone” 6.6 24 2 126 JoeAg “you in those depths” 6.567 26 1 Legend E “It's My Time to Go” 21 4 128 D e v o n “On my way” 6.5 22 4 129 DatChickDoe “Black Rain” 6.25 15 5 Julia Fox “27” 131 mxtthewdelrey “If I Leave This Earth” 6.167 27 1 132 Remmy “Scary Movie” 5.95 17 5 133 DatChickDoe “Mud” 5.933 28 1 134 Better Mistakes “Dancing With My Tears” 5.767 25 2 135 Better Mistakes “Plastic Heart” 5.733 29 1 136 Lorenzo22 “Keep Me Warm” 5.533 30 1 137 Better Mistakes “Watch The World Burn” 5.5 18 5 138 Insanity “Just Try” 5.233 26 2 139 D e v o n “Session 32” 5.167 27 2 140 Insanity “Temporary Fix” 4.9 31 1 141 boubour “Lonely” 4.667 28 2 142 D e v o n “in de woods” 2.833 32 1
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 27 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: First I just wanna say congrats to @Jackson cuz you’ve been playing these games since even before I started way back in PH7 and it’s nuts we get to tie as winners on this one you consistently smashed each round and I was sweating trying to predict how this would go. I do have to admit my R6 song partially exists cuz I wanted to at least tighten up the lead you had on me (There were multiple concepts but this one I was thinking “yeah maybe this could beat Jackson”) you’re a great competitor and songwriting friend and just for my thoughts… I’ve been trying to win an ATRL songwriting game for the longest I’ve gotten eliminated via non submission more than ranking out im pretty sure? So I’m happy I got to finally write a finale song first of all. And for that to be the round’s #1/help me win the season? Cherry ( ) on top. This song almost didn’t happen and I was so conflicted about what to write (I almost went for Nothing), but in the end, I knew I had to finish with this particular song and submit it. I’m glad I did! Thank you of course to the judges for the amazing season/format. now that I’ve snagged my white whale and finally won a season, do I hang up my competitor hat, or do I go for a solo win next? ?Time will tell! Thank you to everyone who submitted and made this game so lively and great. This honestly felt like such a repeat of Diamond Hit where the two of you had slayed the season in your own individual ways and were coming into the final as the front runners you’ve both made it so hard to pick somebody to root for because you’re both so good! I’m so happy with this outcome and I hope you are too. 8th, you put your own flare into everything you write and have submitted many of the most creative and thought provoking songs of the season. As always you’ve impressed us throughout and never missed a beat in any of the challenges! Your skill as a writer is incredible and I’m so happy to see you as a winner
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 43 minutes ago, Jackson said: OMG, I love this! TBH I was actually manifesting this earlier today while chatting with a couple people in the game but I didn't expect it to actually happen. Major congratulations @8thPrince!! You've been a legend in this game for years and didn't even need this win to cement your status, but it's so deserved and I'm so genuinely happy for you . Plus you probably got a 10 for your final song which is absolutely insane. I can't think of a more deserving person for the win BTW, if anyone wants to read my song for this round or any song I've submitted for this game ever (minus the two I'm missing, RIP), here's a link to them all. I've been working on this for a while so this it seemed like a good time to post When @fountain leaked the messages we were all cackling. The fact a tie was not only technically possible at this point after so many different scores and varying opinions, and yet ACTUALLY happened was insane, we were so shook. Literally 0.1 point different in any round and it wouldn't have worked out this way. You wholeheartedly deserved this win for “Reykjavik” alone imo, which I also think should have been a perfect 10, but you really did serve excellence all throughout this tournament and although it wasn't always appreciated consistently ("Bike Lane" might be an indie classic sleeper hit, I fear), your 1-2-3 punch was unparalleled. Congratulations on being only the second writer to win two ATRL songwriting tournaments, following @Prisoner's wins of Song of the Season 2 and 4! I'm glad you were able to compile the majority of your old material. There's something so special about that.
Augmented Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 WAIT not me and @Jackson both having 2 songs in the Top 10 of the overall songs
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 5 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: @fountain can you post my song for this round Of course here is thee “a ******* perfect score of 10” song I’m Practicing Happiness VERSE 1 Close enough to go unnoticed, strange enough to still be found My own body’s like a t-shirt that’s inverted inside out Moving at the same tempo as the people, but exposed in the crowd When I’m anxious or frustrated I bite on my fingertips It’s almost like I want to escape from this fragile skin Can’t find the words to unravel it so I dip my pen in the wounds, again and again PRECHORUS I heard all artists are tragic Their hands forced by their ghosts So I searched for warmth by gripping to that whipping post I stopped trying to find hope that always evaded me Slipping through my fingers like light weaving through the trees CHORUS All along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness. VERSE 2 The world never had to knock as I tried to hold that door back Voices trickled through the keyhole and still flowed through the gaps Slinking under the door frame, my face twisted by their warm laughs PRECHORUS People are foreign to me But I’m a stranger to them Was saying I don’t belong self-conceit or defense? Connection is like the orbit I traced while adrift: At what point does the circle and communication begin? CHORUS I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives Separate like a blank page striped with parallel lines But maybe while I scribbled down words that bridged that divide I was trying to reconcile those two different sides POSTCHORUS I’m starting to learn there’s more than one way to live So nowadays when I shut myself in It’s not because I’m sad I’m just practicing my own version of happiness BRIDGE Restrained in the bound binders Penned on the littered loose leaf: I can’t say any of it completely captures the real me Even on those days I was completely shut away Surely there were times where I was smiling REFRAIN All this time, I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives… CHORUS But all along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness OUTRO Little by little, I’m practicing happiness. This song was an entry for the All prompt in the final round and you can read how it applied to the prompt and the background to the song here: Title drop from R3 and imagery repurposed from R1 in the first prechorus, similar outline/space theme in the first and last chorus recontextualized from R2, similar theming from R5 in the 2nd chorus, and more visceral imagery as inspired by R4 in the first verse. This song was written as a sort of metacommentary on writing/artistry, on how being devoted to art can be both alienating yet personally/interpersonally satisfying.
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 Just now, hurricane326 said: Wait I placed top FOUR overall? I take a two-hour nap and come back to that? Awesome! Actually since we have a tie for #1, that technically puts you in third! It’s very much deserved, you’ve done a fantastic job this season
Remmy Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 PAC top 10 overall and Scary Movie avoided the bottom 10 ahhh I know that's right!
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 8 minutes ago, D e v o n said: It's a tie?! congratulations Ahh love seeing your avi
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 6 minutes ago, fountain said: Of course here is thee “a ******* perfect score of 10” song I’m Practicing Happiness Hide contents VERSE 1 Close enough to go unnoticed, strange enough to still be found My own body’s like a t-shirt that’s inverted inside out Moving at the same tempo as the people, but exposed in the crowd When I’m anxious or frustrated I bite on my fingertips It’s almost like I want to escape from this fragile skin Can’t find the words to unravel it so I dip my pen in the wounds, again and again PRECHORUS I heard all artists are tragic Their hands forced by their ghosts So I searched for warmth by gripping to that whipping post I stopped trying to find hope that always evaded me Slipping through my fingers like light weaving through the trees CHORUS All along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness. VERSE 2 The world never had to knock as I tried to hold that door back Voices trickled through the keyhole and still flowed through the gaps Slinking under the door frame, my face twisted by their warm laughs PRECHORUS People are foreign to me But I’m a stranger to them Was saying I don’t belong self-conceit or defense? Connection is like the orbit I traced while adrift: At what point does the circle and communication begin? CHORUS I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives Separate like a blank page striped with parallel lines But maybe while I scribbled down words that bridged that divide I was trying to reconcile those two different sides POSTCHORUS I’m starting to learn there’s more than one way to live So nowadays when I shut myself in It’s not because I’m sad I’m just practicing my own version of happiness BRIDGE Restrained in the bound binders Penned on the littered loose leaf: I can’t say any of it completely captures the real me Even on those days I was completely shut away Surely there were times where I was smiling REFRAIN All this time, I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives… CHORUS But all along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness OUTRO Little by little, I’m practicing happiness. This song was an entry for the All prompt in the final round and you can read how it applied to the prompt and the background to the song here: Hide contents Title drop from R3 and imagery repurposed from R1 in the first prechorus, similar outline/space theme in the first and last chorus recontextualized from R2, similar theming from R5 in the 2nd chorus, and more visceral imagery as inspired by R4 in the first verse. This song was written as a sort of metacommentary on writing/artistry, on how being devoted to art can be both alienating yet personally/interpersonally satisfying. Literally couldn't help but stop and read this masterpiece again, ugh @8thPrince's ******* MIND.
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 Just now, hurricane326 said: @AuroraWhich tropical cyclone did you use for my Rose token? I'm trying to figure it out but it's stumping me I honestly don't know, I just searched "hurricane" in Google Images and filtered by transparency and selected the first one.
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 I think everyone has a lot to be proud of this season, not just the winners or the Top 10... every single one of you, especially those who submitted consistently throughout all six rounds. As you may have noticed in the rankings, those who submitted more definitely ended up in the higher ranks overall. Of course life comes first and sometimes it's out of our control, but if you decide to participate in a future season, I'd highly recommend submitting for all rounds, even if you're not sure it's your best work ever. The proof is in the (proverbial, golden) pudding! Speaking of rankings, the compiled season averages are coming right up for the stat fanatics!
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 Golden Hit: Season 1 📀 Final Season Average Chart Rank Writer Round 1 Round 2 Round 3 Round 4 Round 5 Round 6 Average 1 @8thPrince 8.267 8.767 8.433 8.733 8.9 10 8.85 @Jackson 7.9 8.9 9.467 9.833 8.3 8.7 8.85 2 @Achilles. 8.267 8.2 9.233 9.133 7.65 9.533 8.669 3 @hurricane326 8.067 8.267 8.367 8.233 9.15 9 8.514 4 @Euterpe 7.7 8.7 8.9 8.9 8.35 8.5 8.508 5 @Augmented 6.933 7.633 8.167 9.833 9.45 8.967 8.497 6 @lex 8.2 6.767 9.033 8.633 9.65 8.333 8.436 7 @Hug 8.033 7.633 8.1 8.7 9.45 8.333 8.375 8 @Prisoner 8.7 7.933 8.167 7.8 8.05 7.9 8.092 9 @Legend E 8.6 7.133 8.2 6.567 8.65 7.967 7.853 10 @Remmy 8.333 7.1 8.133 7.633 5.95 9.333 7.747 11 @DatChickDoe 5.933 7.333 8.733 8.367 6.25 7.733 7.392 12 @Julia Fox 6.7 7.3 6.833 7.7 6.25 8.533 7.219 13 @TruGemini 6.9 6.6 7.567 0 9.75 8.733 6.592 14 @EpicSongFan 7.5 7.567 7.333 8.1 8.7 0 6.533 15 @JoeAg 6.567 8.2 7.8 8.333 0 8.267 6.528 16 @Better Mistakes 5.733 5.767 7.633 6.967 5.5 7 6.433 17 @mxtthewdelrey 6.167 7.167 8.467 8.267 8 0 6.344 18 @OreGuy 6.967 7.267 7.967 7.667 0 7.233 6.183 19 @GentleDance 9.033 8.067 9.1 8.633 0 0 5.806 20 @Arrows 8 7.867 8.633 7.367 0 0 5.311 21 @Tylerbv 7.567 7.667 7.567 7.633 0 0 5.072 22 @RobDeWittBukater 8.133 6.767 0 0 7.8 0 3.783 23 @Jessie 6.767 6.767 8.6 0 0 0 3.689 24 @D e v o n 2.833 5.167 0 6.5 0 7.167 3.611 25 @Insanity 4.9 5.233 6.967 0 0 0 2.85 26 @Lorenzo22 5.533 6.8 0 0 0 0 2.056 27 @boubour 6.933 4.667 0 0 0 0 1.933 28 @Hanami-Blossom 8.167 0 0 0 0 0 1.361 29 @ughgabriel 7.867 0 0 0 0 0 1.311 30 @luckystrike 6.967 0 0 0 0 0 1.161 31 @Astro 6.633 0 0 0 0 0 1.106
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 (edited) Golden Hit: Season 2 announcement! @Aurora and I have been so happy with this first season and so proud of Golden Hit that of course we have been thinking ahead to the future too. The community that this game has had and the creative outlet that it has been is absolutely beautiful, and that’s something we are striving to keep here. The next season of Golden Hit will be fundamentally the same: no eliminations, everybody has a place in this game to write and grow from beginning to end. We believe in this format and after the success that this first season has been, and the many examples during the game of how beneficial this format is, we can’t wait to bring it back. Sooner rather than later, in fact… Golden Hit will be returning for its second season later this summer in the latter half of August! We really hope to see as many of you lovely people as possible again and of course once again thank you for supporting our first season, and here’s to many more in the future! Edited July 2, 2022 by fountain
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 10 minutes ago, hurricane326 said: Nevermind it's Hurricane Andrew from 1992, taken by GOES-8 just after entering the Gulf of Mexico after annihilating Homestead, Florida The knowledge.
diamondsky Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 (edited) 33 minutes ago, fountain said: Of course here is thee “a ******* perfect score of 10” song I’m Practicing Happiness Reveal hidden contents VERSE 1 Close enough to go unnoticed, strange enough to still be found My own body’s like a t-shirt that’s inverted inside out Moving at the same tempo as the people, but exposed in the crowd When I’m anxious or frustrated I bite on my fingertips It’s almost like I want to escape from this fragile skin Can’t find the words to unravel it so I dip my pen in the wounds, again and again PRECHORUS I heard all artists are tragic Their hands forced by their ghosts So I searched for warmth by gripping to that whipping post I stopped trying to find hope that always evaded me Slipping through my fingers like light weaving through the trees CHORUS All along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness. VERSE 2 The world never had to knock as I tried to hold that door back Voices trickled through the keyhole and still flowed through the gaps Slinking under the door frame, my face twisted by their warm laughs PRECHORUS People are foreign to me But I’m a stranger to them Was saying I don’t belong self-conceit or defense? Connection is like the orbit I traced while adrift: At what point does the circle and communication begin? CHORUS I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives Separate like a blank page striped with parallel lines But maybe while I scribbled down words that bridged that divide I was trying to reconcile those two different sides POSTCHORUS I’m starting to learn there’s more than one way to live So nowadays when I shut myself in It’s not because I’m sad I’m just practicing my own version of happiness BRIDGE Restrained in the bound binders Penned on the littered loose leaf: I can’t say any of it completely captures the real me Even on those days I was completely shut away Surely there were times where I was smiling REFRAIN All this time, I told myself others and I lead incompatible lives… CHORUS But all along I only traced the outline of what’s missing Filling in negative space with color and pretending Stitched together vignettes other people had been in Brushing off reality, shrouded in its afterimage POSTCHORUS Days my body slumped against the door and let nobody in Convincing myself this is the life I want to live Days I swore I wasn’t sad Only practicing my own version of happiness OUTRO Little by little, I’m practicing happiness. This song was an entry for the All prompt in the final round and you can read how it applied to the prompt and the background to the song here: Reveal hidden contents Title drop from R3 and imagery repurposed from R1 in the first prechorus, similar outline/space theme in the first and last chorus recontextualized from R2, similar theming from R5 in the 2nd chorus, and more visceral imagery as inspired by R4 in the first verse. This song was written as a sort of metacommentary on writing/artistry, on how being devoted to art can be both alienating yet personally/interpersonally satisfying. Amazing lyrics. @8thPrince coming through with the talentry Love in particular that second line, “My own body’s like a t-shirt that’s inverted inside out.” such a specific/strange image yet somehow I completely relate to it? also love the second chorus / refrain line about incompatible lives Edited July 2, 2022 by lex
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 10 minutes ago, fountain said: Golden Hit: Season 2 announcement! @Aurora and I have been so happy with this first season and so proud of Golden Hit that of course we have been thinking ahead to the future too. The community that this game has had and the creative outlet that it has been is absolutely beautiful, and that’s something we are striving to keep here. The next season of Golden Hit will be fundamentally the same: no eliminations, everybody has a place in this game to write and grow from beginning to end. We believe in this format and after the success that this first season has been, and the many examples during the game of how beneficial this format is, we can’t wait to bring it back. Sooner rather than later, in fact… Golden Hit will be returning for its second season later this summer in the latter half of August! We really hope to see as many of you lovely people as possible again and of course once again thank you for supporting our first season, and here’s to many more in the future! We can't wait to see what the future holds in store for Golden Hit. Season 2 is going to be a lot of fun! Enjoy the break and come back in late August with a clear mind and some rejuvenated creativity!
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 1 minute ago, Aurora said: We can't wait to see what the future holds in store for Golden Hit. Season 2 is going to be a lot of fun! Enjoy the break and come back in late August with a clear mind and some rejuvenated creativity! Yes, and we shall enjoy the break ourselves too 142 songs later, we did it! Couldn’t have done it without you of course. Thanks for being an amazing cohost and helping bring this back to life. Can’t wait to do it again!
diamondsky Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 23 minutes ago, fountain said: Golden Hit: Season 2 announcement! @Aurora and I have been so happy with this first season and so proud of Golden Hit that of course we have been thinking ahead to the future too. The community that this game has had and the creative outlet that it has been is absolutely beautiful, and that’s something we are striving to keep here. The next season of Golden Hit will be fundamentally the same: no eliminations, everybody has a place in this game to write and grow from beginning to end. We believe in this format and after the success that this first season has been, and the many examples during the game of how beneficial this format is, we can’t wait to bring it back. Sooner rather than later, in fact… Golden Hit will be returning for its second season later this summer in the latter half of August! We really hope to see as many of you lovely people as possible again and of course once again thank you for supporting our first season, and here’s to many more in the future! Wooo I’ll definitely be joining I hope most of everyone here does too
Galah Posted July 2, 2022 Posted July 2, 2022 17 minutes ago, fountain said: Yes, and we shall enjoy the break ourselves too 142 songs later, we did it! Couldn’t have done it without you of course. Thanks for being an amazing cohost and helping bring this back to life. Can’t wait to do it again! Likewise, friend.
fountain Posted July 2, 2022 Author Posted July 2, 2022 7 minutes ago, lex said: Wooo I’ll definitely be joining I hope most of everyone here does too Yessss would love to have you join again
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