tournament Golden Hit: Season 1 📀 Congrats to 8thPrince and Jackson!! 🏆🏆

[OreGuy]

congrats @GentleDance   and @Prisoner, you guys are turning IT this early wheew

[fountain]

Congrats everybody this was an incredibly close round, so many great scores all around! I hope you are all so proud because I know the judges are!

 

Round 2 will be coming shortly once GentleDance has had their much deserved moment!

[Galah]

A truly deserving Top 3, and my personal Top 3 also! (Not necessarily in that order). Y'all did so well. And congrats on @GentleDance on your masterfully impressive writing debut and the first 9+ scoring entry of the season! That's not easy to achieve.

[fountain]

Oh btw make sure to stay in the thread as Round 2 will feature a sign up component! 

[GentleDance]

3 minutes ago, Legend E said:

Congrats @GentleDance 

 

1 minute ago, OreGuy said:

congrats @GentleDance   and @Prisoner, you guys are turning IT this early wheew

 

Thank you

 

I'll share what I wrote, I was reluctant at first, I didn't have much confidence in my writing... and I'll hurry to sleep, it's 5am around here

[Hanami-Blossom]

Well done everyone, regardless of what the rankings are!

 

I know everyone put their energy into this and there's endless amounts of learning and growth available to us all

[Legend E]

do we actually get cute lil tokens or is that only for the top 3 of the entire season?

[GentleDance]

RUPTURE

 

 

[Verse 1]

Bound and released

Dragging our decaying bodies

Through decaying fancies

And decaying sceneries

Oh, I know, you never go to strangers

You’ll just be unearthing

Some dusty ventures

 

 

[Verse 2]

They must be missing your company

Go tell them about the joys of your astronomy

Tell them the weather around me is still murky

And my mind is still so worldly

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

 

[Verse 3]

And I envy you

The groundless fantasies you lay to

You talk of elysian fields and past glories

And I’ll sleep to my earthly recurring worries

 

 

[Verse 4]

You’ll look to the constellations for consolation

And I’ll just be barefoot in the yard

Forgetting sense and intention

Glaring very hard

At your rosemary and lavender

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

 

[Verse 5]

I could tell those days of warfare

When you’d double-check the pressure on your spare

Those astral calendars by which you swear

Sometimes tell you to beware

Be aware everywhere, you must prepare!

 

[Verse 6]

Now, I just want to sit very still

Watching your centaur temper sliding downhill

Another hot December

You spent matching earthen matters

To the seasons in your ledger

Too far from the damp mounds

Of our home grounds

And the discounts

And the approving gaze

And the lonely grave

Of that uptown street vendor

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

congrats everyone    

 

@fountain now that the results have been posted can you confirm or deny if I was intentionally placed #27 due to my song's theme

[GentleDance]

1 minute ago, Aurora said:

A truly deserving Top 3, and my personal Top 3 also! (Not necessarily in that order). Y'all did so well. And congrats on @GentleDance on your masterfully impressive writing debut and the first 9+ scoring entry of the season! That's not easy to achieve.

I'm extremely grateful, it imbues me with so much confidence

[Augmented]

Well done everyone 

Also thank you guys for all the time you spent scoring and reviewing every song! 
Really excited to prove myself and hopefully grow stronger lyrically in the next rounds 

[mxtthewdelrey]

2 minutes ago, GentleDance said:

[Verse 5]

I could tell those days of warfare

When you’d double-check the pressure on your spare

Those astral calendars by which you swear

Sometimes tell you to beware

Be aware everywhere, you must prepare!

 

[Verse 6]

Now, I just want to sit very still

Watching your centaur temper sliding downhill

Another hot December

You spent matching earthen matters

To the seasons in your ledger

Too far from the damp mounds

Of our home grounds

And the discounts

And the approving gaze

And the lonely grave

Of that uptown street vendor

oh my  this is exquisite

[Hanami-Blossom]

4 minutes ago, fountain said:

Oh btw make sure to stay in the thread as Round 2 will feature a sign up component! 

[fountain]

1 hour ago, Aurora said:

Maybe we should delay results more often with the activity and hints y'all are getting, whew.

 

We really do appreciate your patience and support, so here's a little teaser of the Hit Tokens the Top 3 placing writers will earn after this round's results show! I will contact the winning writers to see what image they would like embossed. I wonder if anyone will collect all three during the season?

 

3 minutes ago, Legend E said:

do we actually get cute lil tokens or is that only for the top 3 of the entire season?

indeed! Aurora posted a preview of what they will look like here

 

 

 

 

 

 

[fountain]

4 minutes ago, GentleDance said:

RUPTURE

 

 

[Verse 1]

Bound and released

Dragging our decaying bodies

Through decaying fancies

And decaying sceneries

Oh, I know, you never go to strangers

You’ll just be unearthing

Some dusty ventures

 

 

[Verse 2]

They must be missing your company

Go tell them about the joys of your astronomy

Tell them the weather around me is still murky

And my mind is still so worldly

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

 

[Verse 3]

And I envy you

The groundless fantasies you lay to

You talk of elysian fields and past glories

And I’ll sleep to my earthly recurring worries

 

 

[Verse 4]

You’ll look to the constellations for consolation

And I’ll just be barefoot in the yard

Forgetting sense and intention

Glaring very hard

At your rosemary and lavender

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

 

[Verse 5]

I could tell those days of warfare

When you’d double-check the pressure on your spare

Those astral calendars by which you swear

Sometimes tell you to beware

Be aware everywhere, you must prepare!

 

[Verse 6]

Now, I just want to sit very still

Watching your centaur temper sliding downhill

Another hot December

You spent matching earthen matters

To the seasons in your ledger

Too far from the damp mounds

Of our home grounds

And the discounts

And the approving gaze

And the lonely grave

Of that uptown street vendor

 

 

[Chorus]

Wait on your auspicious conjuncture

I’ll just pace the earth

Sensing the impending rupture

 

a masterpiece, a classic, a cultural reset, a rupture

[Legend E]

Just now, fountain said:

indeed! Aurora posted a preview of what they will look like here

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh wow oh wow

[fountain]

3 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said:

congrats everyone    

 

@fountain now that the results have been posted can you confirm or deny if I was intentionally placed #27 due to my song's theme

I can neither confirm nor deny, but I suppose fate works in mysteries ways like that 

[Hanami-Blossom]

*commercial break*

[fountain]

Final round 1 rankings coming in a moment, and then Round 2 right after!

 

Again, Round 2 will feature a sign up component, so if you want first dibs stay tuned 

[Achilles.]

Congrats on your historic debut GentleDance!

[mxtthewdelrey]

6 minutes ago, fountain said:

I can neither confirm nor deny, but I suppose fate works in mysteries ways like that 

"If I Leave This Earth" did not only place #27 but it was also my 27th franchise entry. Fate is quite Beautiful, don't you think?

 

Platinum Hit 9

1. Girls World Talkshow

2. Prayer Pose

3. Harvey

4. ***** McFlurry

5. Thinking About You, Girl

6. A CRY (P.H.9.)

7. One (The Happiest Place)

 

Diamond Hit

8. One Thud / Towel Rack

9. Your Song

 

Platinum Hit 10.5

10. W | E | T

11. Floor Song

12. Plymouth (My Talk With Annie)

13. Vape With Me Postman - The Story of My Life

14. I Can’t Kill You

15. Thinking About Legmeat 3THREE, Girls (1.88)

 

Platinum Hit 11

16. A Little Hope

17. Black Dog

18. misjudged

19. Progress

20. Bitter After Dark

21. From Above

22. Everything Hurts in the Autumn

23. Mouth Where My Money Is

24. Abandon

25. Sulphur

26. Choose One

 

Golden Hit

27. If I Leave This Earth

 

 

[GentleDance]

2 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

Congrats on your historic debut GentleDance!

Thank you 

[Hanami-Blossom]

I need to reset my sleep patterns after this game is done But I WILL stay in the thread for the Round 2 sign-ups like it is Black Friday.

 

Me in parallel universes will have to do all the sleeping in the meantime.

[Galah]

 

 

Rank	Writer	Song Title	Score
1	@GentleDance	“Rupture”	9.033
2	@Prisoner	“Wind Chimes”	8.7
3	@Legend E	“White Flag”	8.6
4	@Remmy	“Flowerbloom”	8.333
5	@8thPrince	“Wind Rather Than Sun”	8.267
	@Achilles.	“Persephone (Another World)”
7	@☆lex	“Warm Winter Wind”	8.2
8	@Hanami-Blossom	“Skydiving Raindrops of Honey”	8.167
9	@RobDeWittBukater	“Stranded in Your Arms”	8.133
10	@hurricane326	“On a Sea of Glass”	8.067
11	@Hug	“RAVAGED”	8.033
12	@Arrows	“careful, boy”	8
13	@Jackson	“Bike Lane”	7.9
14	@ughgabriel	“sequoias on fire”	7.867
15	@Euterpe	“Ley Lines”	7.7
16	@Tylerbv	“Sail Away”	7.567
17	@EpicSongFan	“Scorching Memory”	7.5
18	@luckystrike	“picking petals”	6.967
	@OreGuy	“Forever Young”
20	@Augmented	“Navy Mind”	6.933
	@boubour	“Need To Know”
22	@TruGemini	“Dive”	6.9
23	@Jessie	“Ex-Flame”	6.767
24	@Julia Fox	“Holy Ground”	6.7
25	@Astro	“Hypochondriac”	6.633
26	@JoeAg	“you in those depths”	6.567
27	@mxtthewdelrey	“If I Leave This Earth”	6.167
28	@DatChickDoe	“Mud”	5.933
29	@Better Mistakes	“Plastic Heart”	5.733
30	@Lorenzo22	“Keep Me Warm”	5.533
31	@Insanity	“Temporary Fix”	4.9
32	@D e v o n	“in de woods”	2.833

 

[fountain]

Round 2 on page 42