ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted June 5, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted June 5, 2022 @Remmy are we slaying or are we flopping? Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tylerbv Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 10 minutes ago, fountain said: Running in Circles? I can post it if you like Eh i wont care at this point. Praise sunday wine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 5, 2022 Author Share Posted June 5, 2022 18 minutes ago, Tylerbv said: Eh i wont care at this point. Praise sunday wine Β here it isΒ Β Tylerbv - Running in Circles Β --- verse 1 --- if i'm being honest i don't want to be honest but i have to admit that somehow you're all i've ever wanted Β you look at me like i'm worthy but you can't see how it hurts me the road to happiness used to be so straight but these days it's too curvy Β --- pre-chorus --- i know you can't see what you're doing to me because if you knew how much i needed you you'd be gone Β you think what we're doing is perfect but if you told me i could love someone else you'd be wrong Β --- chorus --- i don't know how we got here but i'm never going back cause when you look at me i forget the things i lack Β and you could love me and we could become a fairytale but i don't think your lover would want me there so i'll just pine from afar dancing alone in the dark Β i don't have the strength to leave cause you're my reason to breathe Β so i'll keep on running in circles every day Β --- verse 2 --- you can't see that i'm crying cause each time you leave, i'm dying i wish i had the words to say it but i know i'll just keep hiding Β and i'll never let you see i drain every bottle 'til i can finally sleep hoping i can get some sweet release but you'll still be waiting in my dreams Β --- pre-chorus --- i know you can't see what you're doing to me because if you knew how much i needed you you'd be gone Β you think what we're doing is perfect but if you told me i could love someone else you'd be wrong Β --- chorus --- i don't know how we got here but i'm never going back cause when you look at me i forget the things i lack Β and you could love me and we could become a fairytale but i don't think your lover would want me there so i'll just pine from afar dancing alone in the dark Β i don't have the strength to leave cause you're my reason to breathe Β so i'll keep on running in circles every day Β --- bridge --- you'll never, ever get to know you're the only one who ever makes me happy cause it's not fair to show you that you break my heart when you're not with me Β i know deep down you love me, but you can't be here and your world will never be the same as mine but i know i'd move the stars across the sky if it would make you smile Β you know i love it when you smile Β --- post-bridge pre-chorus --- sometimes i wish you could see what you're doing to me cause maybe if you knew how much i needed you you'd come along Β i think everything about you is perfect and if you told me i'd survive without you you'd be wrong Β --- chorus/outro --- i don't know how we got here but i'm never going back cause when you look at me i forget the things i lack Β and you could love me and we could become a fairytale but i don't think your lover would want me there so i'll just pine from afar dancing alone in the dark Β i don't have the strength to leave cause you're my reason to breathe Β so i'll keep on running in circles every day i'll keep running in circles i'll keep running in circles because you make my heart full i'll keep running in circles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 Not to be shady but is the third judge ever going to review anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 5, 2022 Author Share Posted June 5, 2022 11 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Not to be shady but is the third judge ever going to review anything? I mean good question, but yes, have seen a preview of themΒ Β Β Letβs Spoon is coming to its end in the next few days (and just finished its nightmare 24 hour challenge which is literally a challenge that takes place over 24 hours, rather than just having a time limit of 24 hours) so Element will have more opportunity from there out, and I believe he is planning on retroactively reviewing the missed rounds tooΒ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Euterpe Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 Ready to be in the bottom after @Element tanked my score for outside the game reasons.Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Element Posted June 5, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted June 5, 2022 22 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Not to be shady but is the third judge ever going to review anything? yes!! i am actually writing comments this week!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 6 minutes ago, Element said: yes!! i am actually writing comments this week!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 5, 2022 Author Share Posted June 5, 2022 2 hours until results Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lex Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 Iβm on my phone and sheβs struggling but @fountain@Aurorathank you for the reviews and kind wordsΒ Β itβs not letting me quote rn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lex Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 46 minutes ago, fountain said: 2 hours until results PerchedΒ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 6, 2022 Author Share Posted June 6, 2022 One hourrrr ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreGuy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 13 hours ago, Aurora said: Β Β Hide contents 5. @OreGuyΒ - βSimple As Redβ This was really something, I found it to be very honest and vulnerable and I respect you a lot for sharing this, assuming this has come from a real place of pain. There was a lot of clever writing in this piece: I enjoyed the first verse a lot, and the choruses counting down was a great addition. The bridge was fantastic, especially the lyric, βAnd I'd rather dance with the devil, than dance on my ownβ. Initially I was going to clock you for that outro as at a glance it appeared to be a text wall just for the sake of reaching the word count, but honestly?... I think it might be my favourite part of the whole song. Everything flowed really well, felt most honest and pure, and the nod back to the first verse and title was fantastic. All in all this is definitely my favourite submission of yours thus far. Nice work again! Β thank you babes Β it's interesting how the judges like different parts and that's kinda reassuring that it's a good one this time aroundΒ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 6, 2022 Author Share Posted June 6, 2022 I think that I have my scores down... Β my average is... Β 8.49 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remmy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 3 hours ago, Legend E said: @Remmy are we slaying or are we flopping? i feel like i'll be around #11-15 maybe *thinking emoji* I'd be surprised if we're next to each other again!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted June 6, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted June 6, 2022 5 minutes ago, Remmy said: i feel like i'll be around #11-15 maybe *thinking emoji* I'd be surprised if we're next to each other again!! I can totally see that happening for me too Β I hope we're next to each other again! #unitedsisters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remmy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 13 hours ago, Aurora said: 6. @RemmyΒ - βNonstop Hardcoreβ My cooch was NAWT prepared I fear. This was almost serving cupcakKe x Megan Thee Stallion? Like if βWAPβ and βDuck Duck Gooseβ had an illegitimate, gay child. I donβt really love comparing the two seeing as this is a new round, but itβs hard not to use the now iconic βFlowerbloomβ as a reference point, since it really did set the standard for explicit sex bops in Golden Hit out of the gate. I found that where βFlowerbloomβ had many great one-liners, solid rhyming, and clever innuendos and a surprisingly nice use of imagery, this song entirely focused solely on the explicit sexual themes, which didnβt translate as well lyrically. Donβt get me wrong, there was still plenty to stan here: βLick you like a plate, I'll get every crumbβ, βS on my D like a plural nounβ, βScreamin' so loud I took Jamie Lee's gigβ, and the Will Smith reference/sample to name a few. With all of the music transitions and parenthesized lyrics I can tell you have really structured this like a song, however this doesnβt always make for the best experience when reading lyrics alone. Do I think this would be a massive bop? Yes! Would I stream? Yes! Have you outsold βFlowerbloomβ yet? I fear not. forgot to reply to this Β Yeah this is all understandable Β I actually forgot I had to be extra clever on round 1 to fit the theme while I just went heavy on sexual stuff this time around. Lyrically I suppose Flowerbloom is superior, yeahΒ Β Although NH is the better overall song in my head!Β Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remmy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 10 minutes ago, Legend E said: I can totally see that happening for me too Β I hope we're next to each other again! #unitedsisters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 If I'm not 11th again, then something is UP and it's NOT stuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 ItβS 10 pm, do you know where your hostess is? Β Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 6, 2022 Author Share Posted June 6, 2022 Β Hello everybody and welcome to the results live show for round three, the ATW10MVTVFTV Challenge! Β As an overall message from the judges, we were highly impressed this round as a whole and as such the results and our scores are all very close. This means ultimately that the rankings matter less this round since there can be such a minor difference between placements and their scores, so definitely pay attention to your scores first and foremost! Β Ultimately you should all be very proud of what you have created this round, and lets treat this more as a celebration of your writing and the songs you wrote this round!Β Β As such, the live show will begin in the next few minutes... Β but first, I have an important announcement to make... Β @DatChickDoeΒ Β @HugΒ Β @hurricane326Β Β @Julia FoxΒ Β @OreGuyΒ Β @RemmyΒ Β @Better MistakesΒ Β @EuterpeΒ Β @EpicSongFanΒ Β @TylerbvΒ Β @AugmentedΒ Β @ArrowsΒ Β @GentleDanceΒ Β @JacksonΒ Β @InsanityΒ Β @Achilles.Β Β @Legend EΒ Β @JessieΒ Β @mxtthewdelreyΒ Β @PrisonerΒ Β @TruGeminiΒ Β @8thPrinceΒ Β @βlexΒ Β @JoeAg Β Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remmy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreGuy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 perched Β Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreGuy Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 and what announcementΒ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Element Posted June 6, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted June 6, 2022 Amazing round everyone!!! Great work truly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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