fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 9 minutes ago, EmojiClothes said: The stall 2 minutes ago, Corsola said: welcome to pears let me lower your scores
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 28 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: my avi is so beautiful ur still welcome btw
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 also i've decided to launch my new single ft. quavo at the results
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 7 minutes ago, Aurora said: ur still welcome btw i will never change it
Speezy Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 5 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: results are cummmming Do they need tissues
Lucky#17 Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 6 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: results are cummmming Can u get it uP quick please?
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 8 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: results are cummmming that's not all
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 Pear Reviews @Gastrodonatella - I support BDSM. Love it. @beatinglikeadrum - You start the song off with something I don’t really understand - “I can’t take the weight of your lies on my barks”..? It leaves things a little muddled. I think you try to be lyrical with lines like “I can’t find my own face in the shadows you’ve just left” but I kinda find that they don’t really actually make sense. The cover works well. @Nait Phoenix - The cover is a little bit overly simple, but it works. I think an issue here is that it isn’t clear what the song is about. Everything you are referring to is quite vague so the narrative is hard to capture fully, particularly in the verses. @Cupid - 10 @ICEY - I don’t really get a strong opinion for this either way, it’s not something I hate but also nothing something I stan for. It just kinda lacks a unique spark or defining characteristic which makes it stand out, for me. Cool cover though. @Glassmouth - I really like this! The cover as well is awesome. The first use of French was cute, but then the French verse was kinda overkill. I think you did simple but in a nice way. @Hug - Slay me queen. 10. The metaphor is soooo good. @Speezy - I think this is a good start to the season for you! I can see that you’ve definitely improved. For a round 1 entry this is really cute. I enjoy the storytelling aspect you used. @OreGuy - I don’t really know what this is about tbh. From the cover to the song, the narrative here is very confusing. @Buyonce1814 - I really like what you have going here, but I think some of your word choice is a little too out there and distracting, like “mummified” and “sodomised” - they don’t come off naturally. But you’re a Mariah stan so. @ONIKACRAZY - I loveeeee this cover. I think your stronger parts are definitely the verses and bridge. The chorus feels a lot more basic in comparison. In future I’d try to beef it up a little more. It came across quite banal and didn’t add anything to the song really. @Lane Boy - I adore this cover and it perfectly matches the aesthetic and feeling of the song. I like how it reads very conversational. It gives it a genuine and honest feeling to me. I think your entry was packed with sentiment and that’s really what I like to see. You have a unique feel that I’m enjoying and can’t wait to see more of. @Tsareena - Is a thrussy a throat *****? I like that @Pecinta Mariah - I think the problem here is there isn’t a lot of content. The entry is way too small to really be developed enough to hit hard. The cover doesnt really match for me either, the entry feels like its trying to be emotional but the cover is very cold. I think there was a lot more potential here. @Witch Privilege - The cover is low key messy just being a skull, but I’m not putting too much thought on the covers fff. I think your best writing here is during the verses and the bridge. You develop the narrative and give me a good picture here, but the pre chorus and chorus kinda do nothing. So in the future I’d kind of use the verses and bridge here as inspiration as to how you should go about your next entry. @8thPrince - Thank god you are here. 10. @FCKNAmbrosia - I ****ing love this it might be my favourite so far. Slay me. @RihsusChrist(ATG) - The sentiment here is really, really cute. You have that down for sure. Lyrically I found this kind of simple, but I think it matches the narrative you are going for. All I would warn you of though is in future, don’t always go for simple, as to avoid coming across basic. @ceremonials - 10. @UFO - The verses, bridge, pre chorus - awesome. But the chorus is such a non event. I hate that it kinda makes the song lose steam when it’s picking up. Try to avoid that in future for a smash entry. Still really enjoy this, though. @SaintWest - DDDD I can feel another season of Sia comparisons coming. Honestly this does give me Sia teas. Taking a random thing and making a metaphor of it. It’s cute, but I can’t help but feel too much sentiment from it. It’s a little contrived feeling. @funnellegs - This is an awesome cover. I think this is a really nice entry. You’re quality is still high as it was last season. I think advice-wise though, with this song I’d say it’d have been a lot more interesting if you focused on a particular detail - like the halls you mentioned. If this was a more prominent setting of the song and revolved more around that, it would’ve created such an atmosphere. @EmojiClothes - I literally gagged when I opened the pm and you said the cover was your ex. You did that. The best cover. Your entry is pretty good too, I like how you talk about the bipolar-ness of both loving and hating somebody. But a few messy lines like “I wanna punch you in your stupid nose” and the mention of Grindr kinda take away from the sentiment for me. @Corsola - I really, really love this. I think you proved here that you don’t just rely on concept - you’re actually a really good writer without an extravagant concept to hide behind. I think in showing your diversity, not just conceptually, but also in being able to pull off simplicity like this, will be a huge aid to you. @DripDrip - I think this is a really nice start to a song but I think it kinda needed to be longer as to fully explore the narrative. What caused the girl to feel this way / her struggle / how she got through it in more detail. @mxtthewdelrey - The cover is beautiful. As usual you provided amazing unique lyrics. Sometimes I just wish I could understand the sentiment a little more. Maybe if you could expand each line afterwards with like a “because…” to explain it a little more. The bridge is my favourite and it’s art! @Auburn - Amazing cover. In my mind I picture this as being about like, a housewife? It’s an interesting picture you paint and the narrative is kinda alluring. But I think it needed to be a little more clear and detailed as to truly deliver everything smoothly. @Lucky#17 - There are some parts of this I quite enjoy. The first four lines of the second verse, where you start painting a picture with lines like “lights are dimmed with the neon accents” are great. But then the rest, with the random brand namedrops and stuff, are just overwhelming in a bad way tbh.
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 Will be starting results in a few mins after people have had time to read their super extensive and amazing reviews by me.
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 Time for results! The way this will be working is I will reveal everybody's ranking, 1 by 1. Scores will not be revealed until the end of the season. I will begin with #28 and end with #1. @Auburn @Lucky#17 @Gastrodonatella @beatinglikeadrum@Nait Phoenix@Cupid @ICEY@Glassmouth @Hug @Speezy @OreGuy@Buyonce1814 @ONIKACRAZY@Lane Boy @Tsareena@Pecinta Mariah @Witch Privilege @8thPrince @FCKNAmbrosia @RihsusChrist(ATG) @ceremonials@UFO @SaintWest @funnellegs @EmojiClothes @Corsola @DripDrip @mxtthewdelrey
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 The way I thought I was waking up to results, but honestly I'm glad I'm not. Suspense will be more real this way.
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 oh man secret scores, I remember that from S7 and it was a nightmare, poor y'all
8thPrince Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: The way this will be working is I will reveal everybody's ranking, 1 by 1. Scores will not be revealed until the end of the season. I will begin with #28 and end with #1. A concept!
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Corsola said: Not showing scores is interesting! But I'm glad since if scores were shown, we'd be able to predict the winner really easily. Now it's a lot harder because scores > rank, as shown by Jackson in the DH finale!
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: Not showing scores is interesting! But I'm glad since if scores were shown, we'd be able to predict the winner really easily. Now it's a lot harder because scores > rank, as shown by Jackson in the DH finale! yeah exactly. if i post scores, there will be no suspense at the final
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