smholiv Posted July 10, 2020 Author Posted July 10, 2020 Tough round Hug - I have tears rolling down my face as I type my critique. Spoiler Your presentation was incredible, obviously. But genuinely, I was enthralled the whole story so that is always a plus! I felt your choice to do creepy remixes to childrens' horror was a fun take on the concept and worked well. Auburn - But the scariest part of all? There was no connection. Spoiler I love this friend of a friend story approach. It reminded me of that old tv show Are You Afraid of the Dark? Your songs were interesting because they honestly did fit with the mood that you created in your story and I liked that a lot. This was a far more creative entry than your previous and I'm so happy because its a great indicator of what you can do! ughgabriel - He made me... read a book Spoiler Please. Okay so book aside, the songs were really cool. The It Follows song in particular gave me legitimate chills with its suspenseful mood, and the first song was just generally creepy. I'm kind of shook here. You somehow topped your previous entries the way the songs fit PERFECTLY with the narrative is just... insane. This felt like it was professionally made. Gay Rat Divorce - Storytime?! A lemur sent an entry in my game? (NOT CLICKBAIT) Spoiler Hey Scary! You've done it again, constantly spooking us all. I think you said you were filming this and well... its kind of perfect. Very creative, very ambitious, you took us on a journey and perfectly captured it. PinkBox - Blue Eyes Asian Dragon Spoiler Okay so... I told you this, but I really did like the YuGiOh approach f. It was really unexpected and kind of just out there, which is what I love about this entry. It's definitely related to the theme imo, and just didn't take it where I expected it to go. The songs are... fine, though I think they're the weakest link here. Dessy - You orbed Spoiler Why do I always learn sumn from your entries? Why did you try to make me listen to a 15 minute song? Well it's fine because I liked that your entry wasn't necessarily "spooky" but it was mysterious. It helped it stand out and I appreciate that. It's a good entry, probably one of your strongest! clue - Distressed at this entry Spoiler WHEW you did it again. This was a perfect follow up to last round because it captured what the best parts of a clue entry are - its endlessly creative, incredibly dynamic, and doesn't take the entry at face value which is fantastic. The continuity of your entry where things get darker and more "distressed" was genius. Overprotected - Just like the twist this round, your theme was a myth Spoiler SUPER cool entry. Very much a reward after last round. I loved this topic and I learned about a new legend in the process. The music you chose was incredibly perfect, it set the mood and really felt immersive. I liked everything about this - it's your strongest one! Rotunda - How dare you go against me? Spoiler Okay but no this is literally perfect ff. Like this is completely on theme for me, and in fact it took things in a completely new direction which means it stands out even BETTER. The way you strung your words in this entry was so fantastic, I just really liked the way you wrote about stuff here. The songs also captured your subject matter nicely. This is super strong which is all the more impressive given that you had a busy week! luckystrike - "Don't start listening to the so-" giving me instructions out here? :peep: Spoiler Cute, personal twist :sob: I liked this, it was more dreamy in its approach which is nice honestly. I think framing it around your own songs was a cute touch, and I really liked the songs you chose. MLD- *nancy drew emoji* Spoiler This was very creepy and I loved it. I actually really am interested in true crime/mysteries so I'm glad someone went in with that topic! Approaching it from a few different angles (kidnapper and kidnapped) was a smart move. I didn't really care for the second song THAT much, but I see why it fit. Astronomy - BOXPINK disbanded, Sophie Qui new debut Spoiler Music-wise this is up there with gabe's entry as one of the best. Literally perfect for your narrative and also just generally on-brand/theme! I liked the story, and I liked the topic you chose to focus on. This is a great example of a strong entry from you without all the flash - consistency we love it.
smholiv Posted July 10, 2020 Author Posted July 10, 2020 @Hug @Auburn @Gay Rat Divorce @ughgabriel @PinkBox @Dessy @clue @Overprotected @Rotunda @luckystrike @MusicLoverDude @Astronomy forgot to tag :rolf:
smholiv Posted July 10, 2020 Author Posted July 10, 2020 cute you should consider using photoshop in your entries next time
Hug Posted July 10, 2020 Posted July 10, 2020 It'd be a really funny prank if someone posted reviews rn
Kelp Posted July 10, 2020 Posted July 10, 2020 53 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: OMG! This is so funny. You have a bunch of flaws. You're fat, your vagina smells like dead fish, and your biggest mistake was moving here, but that won't last long, and your amazing in your own mind.
Henry Posted July 11, 2020 Posted July 11, 2020 Spoiler Hug - ffff i- well this was fun to read. Another great entry! The horror remixes reminded me a bit of your first entry where you used songs from the show but I didn’t mind it then and don’t really mind it now. Auburn - Nice your best entry. This feels like the most effort you put into an entry since the first round and I really liked the song choices. Good job! ughgabriel - Omg the second song while reading made me feel some type of way. This was amazing. Let me sleep with a nightlight tonight. Another perfect entry, how do you do it. Gay Rat Divorce - Omg the back to back slayage with you and gabriel. We watched this in the middle of the day and definitely not on full screen because I don’t trust you bitches but this was amazing wow! Y’all keep topping yourselves wow. Pinkbox - f not sure how to feel tbh. “I kept winning everything, everyone FEARED me.” My thoughts were this is a PinkBox entry for sure ki. Like the concept is good but idk the song choices were kinda eh to me. Def my least favourite entry from you. Dessy - Hmm another one where I’m not sure how to feel. Song choices were good and the concept is cool but idk its missing something to push it higher for me. clue - I see you Pence!! Another great entry from you whew. Loved this concept. The presentation is probably your best so far as well loved all the little details. Overprotected - Oh girl I was wondering where the songs at. Anyway, I loved your entry tbh. The story was really cool, made me want to watch that movie they made about this and I liked the songs. My only complaint is you putting the songs at the end but I guess it still worked well. My fav entry from you. Rotunda - This was really well done and I think even if you had time to do graphics they weren't really needed because you wrote super well. Really solid and I loved all the songs. Luckystrike - Oh this was super interesting. Loved reading your lyrics but girl I had to listen to the songs after reading I’m too dumb to listen and read/really understand your lyrics at the same time it seems. You deserve the world king <3 Loved the song choices, especially Talia. I need to listen to more of her stuff because I LOVE her song on Late Night Feelings. Musicloverdude - Really nice entry. This is something I think about sometimes actually and I loved the written part of your entry. The songs were okay I guess, not my favs but still good. Astronomy - plss the first pic. Anyway I liked the concept and the songs were nice and even if you didn’t make a website or a tumblr or whatever it was still a solid entry. @Hug @Auburn @Gay Rat Divorce @ughgabriel @PinkBox @Dessy @clue @Overprotected @Rotunda @luckystrike @MusicLoverDude @Astronomy
Henry Posted July 11, 2020 Posted July 11, 2020 2 hours ago, Gay Rat Divorce said: What’s the next round It's a scream can't wait
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