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6 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

What is this sorcery ??

Nothing I can just instantly change the author of the post, it's fun xoxo

 

hi I love cupid xoxo

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Me looking for my talent. :gaycat3:

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We back, rats


Round #5 - The Dr. Seuss Challenge

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(actual picture of Cupid)

 Every week we hound you in your reviews over your rhymes - this was forced, this was too easy, this didn't work for me - this week I aim to look past this by challenging you to write songs with no rhymes.  

Do songs need rhyme schemes? Not at all. Hopefully this forces you out of the comfort zone of relying on rhymes, and allows us to focus on other criteria in entries!


Rules:

Simply, do not use rhymes!
PM your entries to me by this time!

 
Contestants:
@ughgabriel @Aurora @TheCheetahwings @Jackson @Corsola @8thPrince @ceremonials @Citrus @Dylobs @swiftie13 @SaintWest @Achilles. @Kunst @funnellegs @jpow

 

Comeback:
@Gladion @UFO @Auburn @MattyTacos
 
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1 hour ago, jpow said:

Make a song without rhymes? 

wow at me being psychic  

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I haven't written a song without rhymes in such a long time. :rip:

 

 

I'm guessing "no rhymes" includes slant rhymes and internal rhymes, too? :doc: 

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Actually kinda loving this concept. :eek: 

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2 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

I haven't written a song without rhymes in such a long time. :rip:

 

 

I'm guessing "no rhymes" includes slant rhymes and internal rhymes, too? :doc: 

yes

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23 minutes ago, Jackson said:

Nothing I can just instantly change the author of the post, it's fun xoxo

 

hi I love cupid xoxo

this is dangerous :cupid:

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12 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

WHAT :jonny:

 

kii i thought this was pretty easy tbh, if you think this is a struggle wait for the other two "no _______" challenges :cupid:

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5 minutes ago, jpow said:

idk what an internal rhyme is :flower: 

When words rhyme within a line, or a word in the line ends with the word at the end of the line.

 

 

example:

"I was riding shotgun with my hair undone in the front seat of his car"

 

 

 

 

My only #1 in PH history used a boatload of internal rhymes. (I kinda remember being upset that none of the judges commented on it?)

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