Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 5 minutes ago, Temporal said: 2. Aurora - The Gift “I caught a glimpse of something on his chair / And left my youth behind without a care / A type of picture book I’d never seen” For ****s sake Aurora I thought you found a Playgirl magazine or something I’m a bit torn by this entry, and it’s a little hard for me to synthesize my thoughts so I’ll just spitball a bit: I think your signature SAT level vocabulary bogged this song down *hard* as the song went on. The first verse and pre-chorus were pretty masterful at striking that balance, but virtually every structure afterwards really missed the mark (sans the bridge and outro). I think the pacing was generally good, but the conclusion was presented in a corny way (“As ignorance is truly bliss”) which was a let down. …aaand this is why I hate guest judges. Bye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: this may have been an accident? fff mess Just now, mxtthewdelrey said: I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonchild Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, Temporal said: I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London tbh if you watch his insta story then you could probably find him very easily. He posts where he is pretty much all day every day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, Temporal said: This song was shorter/less wordy than what I've seen from you before but I think you could take it down just *one* more level or two in the future! okay, thanks! whew - I'm nearly there g0rls. This week was a step in the right direction. Hopefully it'll continue but get ready cause next round WILL be MY round. idc I will speak that **** into the Universe until it comes true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, Moonchild said: My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. your comments seemed not terrible so ima take a 5.5 and be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Moonchild said: My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. ffffffffff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, mxtthewdelrey said: tbh if you watch his insta story then you could probably find him very easily. He posts where he is pretty much all day every day oh girl i do also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: diverse *original panel better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Temporal said: also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh double this + you'll get what score i deserved this round. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: can you give us news for once too is this code for hints 1 minute ago, Corsola said: Not Temporal using a doge meme. Delete it fat. sjkvhd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, Temporal said: I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London Nnnn wait a minute you're in London? stop stalking me fat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 12 minutes ago, Temporal said: TEMPORAL'S REVIEWS 13. KatyCatPH This was a storytelling song I guess, but it just felt really shallow conceptually, and not as explicitly connected to the story like everyone else’s. There were sone plot gaps that needed to be filled “We did something crazy” okay, what was it? The craziest part of this story is dancing in the moonlight which is pretty mundane by PH standards! What was the question that you kept asking? These are the details that a storytelling song 100% should have. I’m assuming that the different tenses in the song was an intentional thing, however it wasn’t used well enough for me to be totally sure of what was happening either. I just selected a passage in the first part of the story where they danced in the moonlight. But yes I get that it is a shallow one. I myself don't like it but I have to get something in. I can guarantee you though that I can do better than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, Temporal said: oh girl i do also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh I yelped! but like... why are we all so ****ty this season ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, UFO said: Nnnn wait a minute you're in London? stop stalking me fat mess wait, you live in London Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 I swear I have no idea who the UK ATRLers are these days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonchild Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: it's code for "oh temporal and moon gave low scores pretendstobeshocked.gif" The rest of the panel did too tbh. #hints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, mxtthewdelrey said: mess wait, you live in London Nnnn yes sis. for some reason everyone always thinks I'm from New York sdfdsf idk why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said: I swear I have no idea who the UK ATRLers are these days i love being part of an exclusive club Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 even on oldTRL when I put "London" as my location people kept thinking I was a New Yorker not an American in general, SPECIFICALLY a New Yorker ajfahsj idk why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 Just now, Temporal said: i love being part of an exclusive club I got dragged out of the club by my hair for being too femme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Corsola said: Btw @Temporal that's a cute idea to use all past avis for a banner. Kind of stanning fff I couldn't find my other banners on Imgur so I just threw something together It is a lil cut tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, UFO said: Nnnn yes sis. for some reason everyone always thinks I'm from New York sdfdsf idk why Oh wow cute sis! I had no idea. Let's do an ATRL London meetup, that'd be hilarious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 someone @ me when results start k thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 2 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said: Oh wow cute sis! I had no idea. Let's do an ATRL London meetup, that'd be hilarious let's get together to write a diss track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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