fountain Posted March 5, 2023 Author Posted March 5, 2023 36 minutes ago, worldwide angel said: finally submitted   Yessss  thank you for submitting!Â
fountain Posted March 5, 2023 Author Posted March 5, 2023 (edited) 5 hours ago, TruGemini said: This challenge is beating my ass ngl.  You can do it! Hopefully a last minute stroke of inspiration will hit  Theres still quite a while left anyway, definitely enough time to turn it around Edited March 5, 2023 by fountain
fountain Posted March 6, 2023 Author Posted March 6, 2023 Reminder! Today is the last day for submissions for the final round!  Please try to get any entries sent in today, or as soon as possible, so that we can efficiently prepare for the season 3 finale… which currently is planned for March 10th!  Submit here: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1GAFKW2tugm2T28OH3gZBtWQWBJQ4wd6OXeGDvPd5-RI/edit  Thank you, looking forward to seeing the final songs of the season and wrapping everything up  @mxtthewdelrey @Remmy @Augmented @Kylie Jenner @8thPrince @TruGemini @XO_Life @Invisibility @JoeAg @Prisoner @sugarshine @Element @DatChickDoe @beatinglikeadrum @Legend E
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted March 6, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted March 6, 2023 sent   please consider my 2nd submission though
fountain Posted March 7, 2023 Author Posted March 7, 2023 8 minutes ago, Legend E said: sent   please consider my 2nd submission though Thank you
fountain Posted March 7, 2023 Author Posted March 7, 2023 12 minutes ago, Invisibility said: ...sent! Thank you!Â
JoeAg Posted March 7, 2023 Posted March 7, 2023 submitted, idk it's a bit messy but i think it's pretty inspirational sounding
Prisoner Posted March 7, 2023 Posted March 7, 2023 I do have an idea that i love very much but unfortunately came in the very last minute. So i will have to bow out from the final round sadly Â
fountain Posted March 7, 2023 Author Posted March 7, 2023 5 hours ago, Prisoner said: I do have an idea that i love very much but unfortunately came in the very last minute. So i will have to bow out from the final round sadly  A shame  but hold on to that idea, or explore it now anyway!
fountain Posted March 8, 2023 Author Posted March 8, 2023 The final songs of Golden Hit Season 3:  @Julia Fox - Influenza - (Nothing) @Euterpe - My Brightest Sun - (Nothing) @worldwide angel - winter’s glitter - (Nothing) StormFury - Nothingness - (Nothing) @Legend E - Swan Song - (Nothing) @Invisibility - Parallels - (All) @JoeAg - Fear and Starving - (Nothing) @TruGemini - Nowhere, Nothing, No One At All - (Nothing)  Thank you all for submitting  You can look forward to our reviews for these songs coming over the next couple days (mine should be coming today) ahead of the finale taking place on March 10th! I will confirm an exact time soon, but the finale will include the unrevealed scores from rounds 4 and 5, the results for the final round, and ultimately the season long averages that you have been working towards for six weeks!  Thank you each for being a part of the season and the final, I say it often but it truly is our pleasure to get to read your writing. Â
Invisibility Posted March 8, 2023 Posted March 8, 2023 Not me being the only All girl! Happily awaiting results regardless of the outcome for meÂ
Invisibility Posted March 9, 2023 Posted March 9, 2023 (edited) Adding on to this  I love a CollXtion (by Allie X) Parallels   [Intro] Morning class! So we've hopped into circus tents, peeked inside the moon, Made readings on the apocalypse and fantasies come true Let's turn the page and discover something new, shall we? [Verse 1] It began while I was leaning near the red exit sign Aboard the Salty Express, a protest bomb was planted I knew it was true when I heard the timer ticking down I'd read the news of fed up victims in the Atlantic Oblivious suitcases and ties went along with the ride I eased my labored breath, then I looked around for help  [Verse 2] A gambling junkie doubling two grand down on his last dime Ten soccer fans celebrating, one smug diary author Yet I had to pick my jaw up off the floor when I noticed My hands trembled once again that day as I saw her Woman from my visions that for this moment had me primed She took a look at me and she then had to explain  [Chorus] I draw parallels between dream and real life I'm an early warner that's visited before You're the one to call for this bomb decode  [Verse 3] Or else, the future could have some effect Two fires breaking out in the cockpit Cesspool-wagons were hot and flooded Sprains and wet bones squelching Good grief, such chaos to prevent [Intermission] To all passengers, remain calm An explosive threat onboard has been detected We've preemptively blocked all the exits  [Chorus] I draw parallels between dream and real life I'm an early warner that's visited before You're the one to call for this bomb decode  [Verse 4] Barely pushing through my 30s can't handle this high pressure s*** Know I've got mad tech skills but not when this train's blowing to bits But then I met you kitten like you just stepped out of my wet dreams Comin’ like I was your answer, like you’re callin’ the ghostbusters You're working your number magic, I'm working 'round this inductor Obsessing 'bout what we could be and how I better instruct her In the heat of five secs left I ask you out and now we French kiss You and me got the power to f*** this whole thing over and we  [Bridge] Changed its composition Carefully orchestrated Stack chimed a melody Twelve notes suspended in air A peaceful aura grew loud The crowd exhaled again Two-heroine harmony The symphony of rescue found  [Chorus] I draw parallels between dream and real life The twist of fate it took to be keen Our new growing union will gleam   Edited March 9, 2023 by Invisibility
fountain Posted March 9, 2023 Author Posted March 9, 2023 Update, will be posting all my reviews early tomorrow, it’s too ******* cold tonight ! Â
fountain Posted March 9, 2023 Author Posted March 9, 2023 Also, StormFury mentioned in their submission that it would be okay to post their entry, so here is their song!  Spoiler Nothingness   I reach out into the darkness From where I lie I can see your silhouette I am bound by the bed, the edge is my harness You're just out of reach, but I've made my bet  That when I wake you'll be there That when I rouse you'll be with me That when my eyes flutter open from this dream I have woven It will be like nothing ever happened  Hold on One more day Hold on There is a way Hold on When I see your face I let go Is it too late?  I feel paralyzed by the passage of time From where I lie I swear I can hear you breathe I am bound by my slumber You're so close to me And then you leave  When I wake there is a moment As I'm pulled through the veil of slumber That feels as if you never left me Then that euphoria's torn asunder When my eyes catch sight of your bedroom door directly across the hall Closed for all time The reality pierces me A sword waiting for its bearer to fall  Hold on One more night Hold on Don't lose the fight Hold on When I see your face I let go It's too late  I wander aimlessly I wonder endlessly Does my life have meaning without yours? I cook double portions I stare at the school bus Intently and with fear I was too busy cleaning that morning To say a proper "goodbye"  To the boy I raised And who told me he loved me Every single day To the young man maturing About to tower above me In every single way He would go to the heights I'd dreamed of He would touch the stars I'd wished upon He would hold his children the way I held him And now he is gone; now it's all gone  I reach out into the darkness And there is nothing Â
Galah Posted March 9, 2023 Posted March 9, 2023  Hey, Hitmakers! Well it's over. Thank you all for being a part of this season of Golden Hit, especially if you've been here all season. That said, and I hate to sound like a pessimist... but most of y'all did not understand the assignment! This finale was underwhelming. I was excited to see a new side to your writing, but if these entries had been submitted anonymously... it'd be obvious who wrote what. So while many of you didn't complete the challenge as desired, the quality of your songs was still good... just on par with R1, for me.  As always, if there is anything in your review you do not wish to be public, just let me know and I will remove it.  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l0ztJi_5uaNfjz1s6-mv305MW6AII3_F_5l0uy3D6ro/edit?usp=sharing  @Julia Fox@Euterpe@worldwide angel@Legend E@Invisibility@JoeAg@TruGemini
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted March 9, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted March 9, 2023 Thank you for the nice review
sugarshine Posted March 9, 2023 Posted March 9, 2023 On 3/7/2023 at 6:11 PM, fountain said: @sugarshine mother where art thou!  On 3/7/2023 at 8:22 PM, Invisibility said: @sugarshine   My creative juices are sucked DRY gw0rls - I entered this competition with a juicy pomegranate and left with a shriveled up raisin I'll see y'all in the next season hopefully I'll have a HEAVY flow by then I'll practice my songwriting skills before then, especially my brainstorming skills cause I have ZERO concepts. I'm curious to see the final rankings though I think I definitely blew my load too much too quickly. DD, LATU and even RH took me OUT but I'm happy with the masterpieces I created so far. Looking forward to what's next!
Invisibility Posted March 9, 2023 Posted March 9, 2023 Thank you @Aurora!  What I intended to portray was that the two gals dismantled the bomb right at the end, and in the heat of the moment they share a kiss bc they have a thing for each other through all this, and then the bridge is like the final celebratory song as the train continues its course and the crowd cheers on  I'm happy I could get to tackle this challenge, and though by no means my fav song this season, I still loved it in its own, mashup wayÂ
Invisibility Posted March 9, 2023 Posted March 9, 2023 5 hours ago, sugarshine said:  My creative juices are sucked DRY gw0rls - I entered this competition with a juicy pomegranate and left with a shriveled up raisin I'll see y'all in the next season hopefully I'll have a HEAVY flow by then I'll practice my songwriting skills before then, especially my brainstorming skills cause I have ZERO concepts. I'm curious to see the final rankings though I think I definitely blew my load too much too quickly. DD, LATU and even RH took me OUT but I'm happy with the masterpieces I created so far. Looking forward to what's next! You and @Element are the queens of dropping only occasionally but they're always HITS
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