Into The Void Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 17 hours ago, fountain said: How come? Is there a way we could help or offer some advice specifically? Β i think i may have an idea mostly im terrible at starting points and need a push to find something to talk about lol once i get going i can do a song quick but i gotta be motivated
Aurora Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 Mini Announcement Β Hey, writers! How is everyone progressing with the challenge? With over 4 days left on the countdown timer we already have two submitted entries, and can see plenty of potential submissions already being worked on. Keep the sign ups coming! Remember, they won't close throughout the duration of the game until the end of the final round, so you have 6 opportunities to join in at any time if the Element challenge isn't for you... but we really would love to see everyone give it a try! Β WhileΒ Golden HitΒ is not about winning, we couldn't help but notice while navigating the main forum page that with over 300 replies (and counting!), Golden Hit is now theΒ Top Topic of the Week! Β Β This was very unexpected for us, and it's all possible thanks to the almost 40 of you who have signed up for Round 1 already. In order to celebrate, an amendment will be made to a previously announced bonus prize: Quote As a small added incentive, there will be a bonus prize to the winner of each round during Golden Hit. Challenge winners will have their very own custom Golden Token made for them, which they may choose to use as a forum avatar such as @fountainΒ and @AuroraΒ have, or just collect as a souvenir from your time writing with us during Golden Hit. There is no additional bonus for writers who collect the most tokens, it's simply a small gesture to thank you for submitting such beautiful works for us to read! While this bonus prize will still be in effect, additionally the remainingΒ Top 3Β writers for each week will also receive aΒ Hit Token! They may not be golden in color, but hopefully the memories of your time during Golden Hit will be. Β Best of luck with the remainder of the challenge!
Into The Void Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 (edited) these songs ive attempted to write are horrid Edited May 15, 2022 by Insanity
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 (edited) 33 minutes ago, fountain said: Portraying the element of water through honey is actually such an interesting take, in that they are both liquids but obviously totally different consistency, I donβt know if thatβs something youβve touched on but when I think about it that is a unique and interesting perspective. Whether honey is just meant to represent water, or whether looking at the similarities and differences between the two metaphorically, it honestly sounds very fun and pretty. Definitely looking forward to reading it!Β The way that honey behaves differently compared to water, particularly in terms of its consistency, is indeed something I explore in one lyric (so far) of my song Β It's a fun mental exercise to imagine how it would be to live in a world where the water there is honey. For example, can honey evaporate? (Not this turning into a Science lesson ) Β My concept is mainly that this fantasy world's water is literally honey. For me it is more fun that way writing about a world where things are fundamentally and literally different to ours, instead of me writing a song about our real world and just describing water as honey. The rain is honey, the rivers are honey. However, I did also want to leave more room for other interpretations because my song is highly metaphorical anyway. I feel like the more metaphorical it is, the more it leaves things up to the reader's interpretation. Β Another interpretation is that maybe the consistency of honey is different in this fantasy world too, maybe it is closer to that of water. The honey in the fantasy world may not necessarily match completely with the honey in our real world. Β Edited May 15, 2022 by Hanami-Blossom
Aurora Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 5 minutes ago, Insanity said: i realize if i was a artist i would have others write for meΒ Time to unlock your inner Charlie Puth!Β Voicenotes era, preferably.
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 21 minutes ago, Insanity said: Β i think i may have an idea mostly im terrible at starting points and need a push to find something to talk about lol once i get going i can do a song quick but i gotta be motivated I guess I can kind of relate to this, sometimes itβs hard to be in the right mental state to focus with writing, you really have to be in a certain creative mode and it can be hard to get into, but like you said when you are focused and you get in that mode it can all come out quite quickly.Β A recommendation I would have to try and reach this state is something simple, just listen to some of the music you like, and also listen to songs in the vain of something youβd like to channel for this round (for example if I was thinking of writing a water song Iβd probably listen to Lilo by The Japanese House or night swimming by Soccer Mommy).Β If you keep at it though, Iβm sure youβll be able to get there! Just keep trying and itβll pay off.Β
Into The Void Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, fountain said: I guess I can kind of relate to this, sometimes itβs hard to be in the right mental state to focus with writing, you really have to be in a certain creative mode and it can be hard to get into, but like you said when you are focused and you get in that mode it can all come out quite quickly.Β A recommendation I would have to try and reach this state is something simple, just listen to some of the music you like, and also listen to songs in the vain of something youβd like to channel for this round (for example if I was thinking of writing a water song Iβd probably listen to Lilo by The Japanese House or night swimming by Soccer Mommy).Β If you keep at it though, Iβm sure youβll be able to get there! Just keep trying and itβll pay off.Β i got 1 about air and 1 about waterΒ Β .......that i wrote in my head earlier at the beach Β and sometimes it flows out of my headΒ quickly but makes 0 sense lol
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 16 minutes ago, Aurora said: Mini Announcement Β Hey, writers! How is everyone progressing with the challenge? With over 4 days left on the countdown timer we already have two submitted entries, and can see plenty of potential submissions already being worked on. Keep the sign ups coming! Remember, they won't close throughout the duration of the game until the end of the final round, so you have 6 opportunities to join in at any time if the Element challenge isn't for you... but we really would love to see everyone give it a try! Β WhileΒ Golden HitΒ is not about winning, we couldn't help but notice while navigating the main forum page that with over 300 replies (and counting!), Golden Hit is now theΒ Top Topic of the Week! Β Β This was very unexpected for us, and it's all possible thanks to the almost 40 of you who have signed up for Round 1 already. In order to celebrate, an amendment will be made to a previously announced bonus prize: While this bonus prize will still be in effect, additionally the remainingΒ Top 3Β writers for each week will also receive aΒ Hit Token! They may not be golden in color, but hopefully the memories of your time during Golden Hit will be. Β Best of luck with the remainder of the challenge! We love to see it Β thank you everybody for joining and your participation so far! Β Also our olympics moment with the tokens
Remmy Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 21 minutes ago, Aurora said: WhileΒ Golden HitΒ is not about winning, we couldn't help but notice while navigating the main forum page that with over 300 replies (and counting!), Golden Hit is now theΒ Top Topic of the Week! Β The eatery!
Into The Void Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 10 minutes ago, Aurora said: Time to unlock your inner Charlie Puth!Β Voicenotes era, preferably. talent not required
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 I feel like I'm going kind of crazy with this honey concept Β It reminds me of those days when I wake up and the world looks like Minecraft. Β Β
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 9 minutes ago, Hanami-Blossom said: The way that honey behaves differently compared to water, particularly in terms of its consistency, is indeed something I explore in one lyric (so far) of my song Β It's a fun mental exercise to imagine how it would be to live in a world where the water there is honey. For example, can honey evaporate? (Not this turning into a Science lesson ) Β My concept is mainly that this fantasy world's water is literally honey. For me it is more fun that way writing about a world where things are fundamentally and literally different to ours, instead of me writing a song about our real world and just describing water as honey. The rain is honey, the rivers are honey. However, I did also want to leave more room for other interpretations because my song is highly metaphorical anyway. I feel like the more metaphorical it is, the more it leaves things up to the reader's interpretation. Iβm very here for this, it sounds really great conceptually.Β In this world, am I a honey fountain? Perhaps reading it will turn me into one tooΒ
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, fountain said: Iβm very here for this, it sounds really great conceptually.Β In this world, am I a honey fountain? Perhaps reading it will turn me into one tooΒ This honey world lowkey feels like it exists now inb4 I accidentally created a whole universe with my mind Β Yes, you would be a honey fountain
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 3 minutes ago, Hanami-Blossom said: I feel like I'm going kind of crazy with this honey concept Β It reminds me of those days when I wake up and the world looks like Minecraft. Β Β I need to hear more about thisΒ Β I trust your vision with honey world tho tbh, at least from what we have heard so far!
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, Hanami-Blossom said: This honey world lowkey feels like it exists now inb4 I accidentally created a whole universe with my mind Β Yes, you would be a honey fountain Not this turning into your Multiverse of MadnessΒ
GentleDance Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 Wind... is tricky Β Quote "But I am committed now to the feeling" Some promo for my fav : Β Β
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 2 minutes ago, fountain said: I need to hear more about thisΒ Β I trust your vision with honey world tho tbh, at least from what we have heard so far! Well, sometimes I wake up (it also happens when I stay up and I don't sleep, especially if I look at a screen or use technology too much) and the world feels fake. The bricks of buildings look fake. It is like everything is designed or simulated like a video game, or more accurately like virtual reality. I see the shapes of the physical world like for example I would see a chimney and see how it is formed by a rectangle or square shape and it is like I can see pixels in the world around me, like pixels in the air too. It is like reality itself or this realm is powered by electricity when I experience this. This occurs when I wake up after sleeping normally. Usually in the early hours of the morning, like 5am-9am. Outside is usually quiet, calm, it has like a fresh vibe but something feels off. It feels and sounds like there is barely anyone outside like I am the only one awake or viewing the world. The birds look kind of fake too, the way they fly. Anyway... Supposedly I'm not the only one who experiences this. Β It's a really fun song to write and for me to imagine what else is different in the fantasy world!
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 (edited) 40 minutes ago, fountain said: Not this turning into your Multiverse of MadnessΒ I wouldn't be surprised the fact that Kit-Kat has no hyphen? It never had one? Not in the world I grew up in. I remember tracing over the hyphen in that Kit-Kat bar with my finger. South America wasn't that far to the east on the world map. Japan's location is off too. And Victoria's Secret changed to Victoria Secret then changed back to Victoria's Secret. Chick-Fil-A was Chik-Fil-A and also Chic-Fil-A before. The Flintstones was The Flinstones at one point. The sun wasn't this white. The sun is literally like a harsh fluorescent light now. It used to be more yellow. The Thinker statue keeps changing and Mona Lisa is smiling tew much. What does this all mean? Whew, life really is STRANGE Β The design on a blanket I literally have in real life changed from it having a design of one sheep (or something like that) in the middle at the top, to then changing one day to two unicorns at the top not in the middle but spaced differently. Β People get gaslighted so much about Mandela Effects but I know what I experienced. Edited May 15, 2022 by Hanami-Blossom
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 12 minutes ago, Hanami-Blossom said: Well, sometimes I wake up (it also happens when I stay up and I don't sleep, especially if I look at a screen or use technology too much) and the world feels fake. The bricks of buildings look fake. It is like everything is designed or simulated like a video game, or more accurately like virtual reality. I see the shapes of the physical world like for example I would see a chimney and see how it is formed by a rectangle or square shape and it is like I can see pixels in the world around me, like pixels in the air too. It is like reality itself or this realm is powered by electricity when I experience this. This occurs when I wake up after sleeping normally. Usually in the early hours of the morning, like 5am-9am. Outside is usually quiet, calm, it has like a fresh vibe but something feels off. It feels and sounds like there is barely anyone outside like I am the only one awake or viewing the world. The birds look kind of fake too, the way they fly. Anyway... Supposedly I'm not the only one who experiences this. Β It's a really fun song to write and for me to imagine what else is different in the fantasy world! This kinda reminds me of a song I wrote called Red Green Blue, it was about how when you move your face close to a tv screen (at least the old ones) that you can see how the image is actually made up of just lines of red green and blue, and that what you saw further away wasnβt actually real, and the idea that life could be like that.Β Β
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 (edited) 5 minutes ago, fountain said: This kinda reminds me of a song I wrote called Red Green Blue, it was about how when you move your face close to a tv screen (at least the old ones) that you can see how the image is actually made up of just lines of red green and blue, and that what you saw further away wasnβt actually real, and the idea that life could be like that.Β Β That sounds like an intriguing concept! Β Life is honestly so creepy. The way we are born here without knowing the reason why. Edited May 15, 2022 by Hanami-Blossom
Aurora Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, Hanami-Blossom said: That sounds like an intriguing concept! Β Life is honestly so creepy. The way we are born here without knowing the reason why. Now now, the existential crisis challenge isn't until Round 4!
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, Aurora said: Now now, the existential crisis challenge isn't until Round 4! The existential crisis challenge is my whole life ajhdjk Round 4's Golden Token is MINE! !!!
fountain Posted May 15, 2022 Author Posted May 15, 2022 27 minutes ago, Hanami-Blossom said: I wouldn't be surprised the fact that Kit-Kat has no hyphen? It never had one? Not in the world I grew up in. I remember tracing over the hyphen in that Kit-Kat bar with my finger. South America wasn't that far to the east on the world map. Japan's location is off too. And Victoria's Secret changed to Victoria Secret then changed back to Victoria's Secret. Chick-Fil-A was Chik-Fil-A and also Chic-Fil-A before. The Flintstones was The Flinstones at one point. The sun wasn't this white. The sun is literally like a harsh fluorescent light now. It used to be more yellow. The Thinker statue keeps changing and Mona Lisa is smiling tew much. What does this all mean? Whew, life really is STRANGE Β The design on a blanket I literally have in real life changed from it having a design of one sheep (or something like that) in the middle at the top, to then changing one day to two unicorns at the top not in the middle but spaced differently. Β People get gaslighted so much about Mandela Effects but I know what I experienced. I actually love stuff like this. I mean, weβll never know the answers but itβs just fun to think about. Plus, itβs an endless fountain of creative possibility.Β
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 1 minute ago, fountain said: I actually love stuff like this. I mean, weβll never know the answers but itβs just fun to think about. Plus, itβs an endless fountain of creative possibility.Β I do too! People find things like this weird but why wouldn't you want to know why we exist, what is really going on here? I think it is smart and makes sense to know more about the environment you're living in and to consider the purpose behind it, to reflect on existence itself. I think people have adopted too much of a template that doesn't encourage them to question and think freely for themselves. Β The thing is: I do think we'll know the answers someday personally. At least more than what we know now. But yes it is so fun to think about.
Tylerbv Posted May 15, 2022 Posted May 15, 2022 Just submitted mine. I am rusty as hell Β It's not the best thing I've written, but I'm proud I actually finished something Β
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