ceremonials Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 The next sex bop "Boomburst This Bûssy" is coming
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 (edited) Round 1 - Single Cover Challenge Rankings #1 @Hug #2 @8thPrince #3 @Cupid #4 / #5 (tie) @Lane Boy / @Corsola #6 @UFO #7 @FCKNAmbrosia #8 @Buyonce1814 #9 @Auburn #10 @Speezy #11 @Witch Privilege #12 @funnellegs #13 @SaintWest #14 @EmojiClothes #15 @Glassmouth #16 @RihsusChrist(ATG) #17 @DripDrip #18 @Nait Phoenix #19 @ONIKACRAZY #20 @ICEY #21 @Pecinta Mariah #22 @Lucky#17 #23 @beatinglikeadrum #24 @OreGuy #25 @Tsareena #26 @Gastrodonatella #27 @mxtthewdelrey #28 @ceremonials Edited May 24, 2017 by keshaspearsxo
ceremonials Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Lane Boy said: If it's Pokemon, I'm screwed since my parents did not allow me to play or watch it. Mess why You don't have to, anyway. It's essentially just the imagery challenge.
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Lane Boy said: If it's Pokemon, I'm screwed since my parents did not allow me to play or watch it. Fff it doesn't actually have anything to do with Pokemon. We just use the types as general inspiration. Everyone should be familiar with fire, water, etc.
Galah Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 7 minutes ago, Corsola said: You HATE me so i'm harsher on people i like and can see potential in, yes your entry was a miss for me but i'll never be biased to score people i like higher (or people i've clashed with outside of ph lower). you still impressed the other judges clearly, so you should feel good.
Bandito Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Mess why You don't have to, anyway. It's essentially just the imagery challenge. They said it promoted gambling so I wasn't allowed to watch or play Pokemon or Yu-Gi-Oh. Just now, Hug said: Fff it doesn't actually have anything to do with Pokemon. We just use the types as general inspiration. Everyone should be familiar with fire, water, etc. Just now, Corsola said: well the pokemon challenge is actually just choosing one of the types and writing a song about it, similar to an elemental challenge Oh ok, that's good to know. Thank god!
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: Here's my entry btw that I thought wouldn't be top 10 even since it was rushed Petals Reveal hidden contents verse one There once laid a sunflower seed I watched it bloom throughout the spring And when the rain turned the sky gray It steered me towards the sun's bright rays But April showers weren't the end The sun left when winter began Now we face the freezing storms As my flower nears its life span chorus One by one, petals float away Each one with a dear memory I leave trails of rain everyday But the sun took another lane verse two Life has turned to an endless night But my sunflower still shines bright It knows it won't see day again But it wants me to when this ends chorus One by one, petals float away Each one with a dear memory I leave trails of rain everyday But the sun took another lane verse three My flower leaves me with a seed That's watered by my tears So it can bloom inside of me And when storms fill the sky I know I'll be alright 'Cause they can't douse my light outro I watch the petals float away And though they're drenched by pouring rain I know the skies will clear someday And they'll drift to a better place It was a lot more simple conceptually than me normally cause I wanted to focus on my technique and prove that I can write songs that are pretty simple and not over the top bjork and I think I succeeded in that You definitely did. Queen of versatility Rihanna is shaking.
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted May 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted May 24, 2017 7 minutes ago, ceremonials said: We don't celebrate it in my home country. Too superstitious for ha
Bandito Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Here's my song! BREAKTHROUGH Last night, I had a breakthrough,And that’s why I’m writing this song to youWe’ve been friends since the first day of schoolEver since, you found me on the playgroundAnd said that my tennis shoes were coolFor over 10 years, you’ve been the first one to come to my side Maybe it started when you came overWhen my parents were fighting and I needed someone to talk toOr it was the time when you forced me to go to that partyWhen I just wanted to lay down and cryBecause I’m starting to realize something about youAnd I don’t know what to do Time to break throughPush aside all of your fears and doubtsYou may not feel the same But I can’t hide it any longerLet’s skip to the next part,Where we can have a chance to get a head start.Tonight, I’m opening up my heartAnd praying that you won’t tear it apart. You saved me so many times from when I wanted to dieI’m at my worst until you come aroundWhen you’re around, for the first time in my life,I finally feel safe and sound Last night, I had a breakthroughAs I was cruising around the city with you Racing down the freeway,Smiling, singing, and whipping around with the top down,I look across and smile as I see you stare at me.It made me realize how perfect you are Yeah, it’s time to break throughPush aside all of your fears and doubtsYou may not feel the same But I can’t hide it any longerLet’s skip to the next part,Where we can have a chance to get a head start.Tonight, I’m opening up my heartAnd praying that you won’t tear it apart.
ceremonials Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Tsareena said: We don't celebrate it in my home country. Too superstitious for ha Mess I thot you were American
Bandito Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Corsola said: Wow a slay. I really love storytelling songs but it's something I've kinda flopped at a lot in the past. You definitely have the talent for them though so I admire it Wow thanks! I really love the chorus and second verse of your song! You did THAT!
ceremonials Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Let's dub while we wait for the next round sisters https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers Password is my iconic #28 smash from this round
ceremonials Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: wow stan! Your impact on that entry was real with the writing about death and also ''endless night'' Necromonials always wins
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 3 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: Here's my song! BREAKTHROUGH Hide contents Last night, I had a breakthrough,And that’s why I’m writing this song to youWe’ve been friends since the first day of schoolEver since, you found me on the playgroundAnd said that my tennis shoes were coolFor over 10 years, you’ve been the first one to come to my side Maybe it started when you came overWhen my parents were fighting and I needed someone to talk toOr it was the time when you forced me to go to that partyWhen I just wanted to lay down and cryBecause I’m starting to realize something about youAnd I don’t know what to do Time to break throughPush aside all of your fears and doubtsYou may not feel the same But I can’t hide it any longerLet’s skip to the next part,Where we can have a chance to get a head start.Tonight, I’m opening up my heartAnd praying that you won’t tear it apart. You saved me so many times from when I wanted to dieI’m at my worst until you come aroundWhen you’re around, for the first time in my life,I finally feel safe and sound Last night, I had a breakthroughAs I was cruising around the city with you Racing down the freeway,Smiling, singing, and whipping around with the top down,I look across and smile as I see you stare at me.It made me realize how perfect you are Yeah, it’s time to break throughPush aside all of your fears and doubtsYou may not feel the same But I can’t hide it any longerLet’s skip to the next part,Where we can have a chance to get a head start.Tonight, I’m opening up my heartAnd praying that you won’t tear it apart. I don't know if this was inspired by your actual life, but you did one hell of a convincing job making me believe it is if not. I liked the little details you added.
Bandito Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: I don't know if this was inspired by your actual life, but you did one hell of a convincing job making me believe it is if not. I liked the little details you added. Well thanks! The majority of the song is based on my life!
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 (edited) by @Aciid Round #2 - The Pokemon Types Challenge Your challenge this week is to write a song using imagery inspired by a pokemon type of your choice. Some are simple, for example grass = foresty imagery, ice = snowy, etc. but some are a little more open to interpretation. Since people complained last season that I didn't include all of the types, this season I've decided give you the option of all 18 types. If you can find a way to use it, go ahead. Remember the focus is on imagery. Pokemon Types: Normal Fire Fighting Water Flying Grass Poison Electric Ground Psychic Rock Ice Bug Dragon Ghost Dark Steel Fairy Rules: PM your entry to me by this time! Don't forget to include your type (and optionally a explanation behind it) Late entries will receive late penalties @Auburn @Lucky#17 @Gastrodonatella @beatinglikeadrum@Nait Phoenix@Cupid @ICEY@Glassmouth @Hug @Speezy @OreGuy@Buyonce1814 @ONIKACRAZY@Lane Boy @Tsareena@Pecinta Mariah @Witch Privilege @8thPrince @FCKNAmbrosia @RihsusChrist(ATG) @ceremonials@UFO @SaintWest @funnellegs @EmojiClothes @Corsola @DripDrip @mxtthewdelrey Edited May 24, 2017 by keshaspearsxo
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted May 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted May 24, 2017 Nutty Butter Spoiler "Nutty Butter" by Tsareena Verse 1 *YAWNS* Damn, s** with my man has been such a bust Thrussy so dry, might as well cough some dust Can't remember last time I felt a lil lust Relationship so damp, carries a lil must (ew mustyy) But dude comes home says he got something fun Says he's bout put it all over my bun What's "it" hun? He says it's nutty butter (what?) Pre-chorus: So sticky sweet and salty It's nutty butter Kids love it Toast and jelly Nut, nutty butter Open up that jar boy.. Chorus: Nutty butter Put, put it in my mouth Put, put it in his mouth Nutty butter Smack, smack it on my tongue Smack, smack it on my thighs Nutty butter Rub, rub it on my body Rub, rub it on his body Nutty butter Damn… let me eat it off him *EDM drop* Verse 2: *Yawns* We've been at it for days Even had it all ways Ate it out his bum, he said no ways Looks like I might have found a new craze (Call TLC) He's done but I can't seem to resist Now I'm looking for a new dude all on craigslist Searching for a lil Scrat for a quick tryst Found 'em so I tell 'em, Bring the nutty butter (yes daddy) Pre-chorus: So sticky sweet and salty It's nutty butter Kids love it Toast and jelly Nut, nutty butter Open up that jar boy.. Chorus: Nutty butter Put, put it in my mouth Put, put it in his mouth Nutty butter Smack, smack it on my tongue Smack, smack it on my thighs Nutty butter Rub, rub it on my body Rub, rub it on his body Nutty butter . Damn, let me eat it off him *EDM drop* Bridge: PB and J's so different right now Panties so sticky when I'm rubbing on my toast Thinking of it again… oh wow Nutty butter so good I'll chase it coast to coast Wait, I have another jar.. Chorus: Nutty butter Put, put it in my mouth Put, put it in his mouth Nutty butter Smack, smack it on my tongue Smack, smack it on my thighs Nutty butter Rub, rub it on my tummy Rub, rub it on his body Nutty butter Damn, let me eat it off him *EDM drop* Outro: Almond, peanut or even hazel nut Only matters that it ends with his nut Slather it all over me and my butt (I'm getting a lot of breakouts Might need to lay off that nutty)
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 18 minutes ago, Corsola said: It sounds like something avant garde so I'm ready (but it probably isn't even the halloween challenge bc pears always trolls)
RihsusChrist(ATG) Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1997 Spoiler Verse1I wanna go back to 1997 Life wasn't so scary Things were magical then Anything seemed possible The world wasn't enveloped in sin Verse 2I wanna go back to 1997 Before people were taken away A time before death told its name Godlike, immortal in my outlook Days when being alone didn't drive me insane PrechorusTo be young again, to be free When the world didn't want anything from me Dreams didn't become regret (Sigh)...regret...regretting... Chorus1997, feels like heaven Like an eternity ago At the age of seven I was unaware of All of my future sorrow I wanna go back to 1997 1997, I wanna go I wanna go back to 1997 1997, I wanna go Verse 3I wanna go back to 1997 When friends felt genuine People didn't split into divisions No one had ulterior motives Trusting someone wasn't a hard decision Verse 4I wanna go back to 1997 To feel safe and happy again Not walking in an empty wilderness To feel love, not longing Melancholy and bitterness Prechorus x2To be young again, to be free When the world didn't want anything from me Dreams didn't become regret (Sigh)...regret...regretting... Altered Chorus x21997, like an obsession Haunts me like a ghost The thoughts never lessen Eating at me, aggressing My mind madly engrossed I wanna go back to 1997 1997, I wanna go I wanna go back to 1997 1997, I wanna go I'm just glad I got to share this with other people. It felt good to write it.
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Normal being an option. Blissey won! I'm still deciding, though, not sure what I want yet. I know I don't want grass!
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