SaintWest Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 (edited) Missippipi was the place Her son was not guilty of the case Her son was guilty of his race Too much melanin in his face One woman’s lie sealed his fate Sending tears down a mother’s face They tried to justify what was done But still, a mother lost her son Chained to the Rhythm could never. Edited June 12, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: AAAA rhyme scheme B I T C H !!! temporal is SHAKING I'm triggered this one was actually done pretty well, not everyone has that to their credit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 I'm rooting for SaintWest and Corsola Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 4 hours ago, Corsola said: You're gonna be let down! We are used to feeling this way about u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 5 hours ago, Citrus said: I'm rooting for SaintWest and Corsola Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 On 9 June 2017 at 6:20 AM, keshaspearsxo said: Round #4 - The Storytelling Challenge This week is pretty simple - your challenge is to write a song which focuses mainly on storytelling. Your song should revolve around a particular narrative, this can be about anything from your real life, to something fictional, or you could take inspiration from an actual story (note: the challenge is not to write a song about a book, but rather to write a song which tells a story). My only advice would be to make the story as clear, vivid and emotive as possible so that is grasps us, as a story truly should. Rules: PM your entry to me by this time! Late entries will receive late penalties Optionally, include an explanation of your story @funnellegs@ONIKACRAZY @Glassmouth @Corsola @Auburn@Hug @ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @FCKNAmbrosia@Nait Phoenix @UFO@Gastrodonatella @Tsareena @8thPrince @SaintWest @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@OreGuy @mxtthewdelrey @Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials Hi friends. About 11 hours @ONIKACRAZY @Glassmouth @Corsola @Auburn@ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @FCKNAmbrosia @UFO @Tsareena @8thPrince @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials @Cupid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 Whew, I'm finally in Batch 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted June 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted June 12, 2017 I was worried I'd have to not submit this round but I put something together that I like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 2 minutes ago, Tsareena said: I was worried I'd have to not submit this round but I put something together that I like Good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 The online school I attended a few years ago is being ordered to repay $60 million back to the state due to inflating attendance rates. Shooked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funnellegs Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 2 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said: Hi friends. About 11 hours @ONIKACRAZY @Glassmouth @Corsola @Auburn@ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @FCKNAmbrosia @UFO @Tsareena @8thPrince @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials @Cupid I haven't submitted yet. The shade! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aciid Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 keshaspearsxo what is this 1998 word clipart you're using. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 10 minutes ago, funnellegs said: I haven't submitted yet. The shade! Assdffghkl I don't know how that happened Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONIKACRAZY Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 2 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said: Hi friends. About 11 hours @ONIKACRAZY @Glassmouth @Corsola @Auburn@ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @FCKNAmbrosia @UFO @Tsareena @8thPrince @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials @Cupid Won't be taking part this week - haven't had time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 8 minutes ago, Aciid said: keshaspearsxo what is this 1998 word clipart you're using. If you have a problem fight me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONIKACRAZY Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 6 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: i suppose its better than submitting a song that'll get 15th like mine will I think I got lower than 15th last week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 12, 2017 Author Share Posted June 12, 2017 Poor one hit wonders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 1 hour ago, Hug said: The online school I attended a few years ago is being ordered to repay $60 million back to the state due to inflating attendance rates. Shooked. Get ready for that check of $2.43! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 1 minute ago, Temporal said: Get ready for that check of $2.43! It's all going to the state. I got $100 from them for passing all 5 of my OATs though, and students who went to public school didn't get shit because you're required either way. I think they did it because they wanted better looking results when the state came and checked them out hihi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funnellegs Posted June 12, 2017 Share Posted June 12, 2017 51 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: Assdffghkl I don't know how that happened It's ok Gonna submit soon, been so busy this week but I'm gonna turn it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted June 13, 2017 Share Posted June 13, 2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Share Posted June 13, 2017 Anyone wanna give my tune a quick critique when I finish writing the last two verses? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted June 13, 2017 Share Posted June 13, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: wow @Hug impacting the ads on tumblr Wow. My impact never ends does it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted June 13, 2017 Share Posted June 13, 2017 ill probably be late but i plan on submiting kii Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted June 13, 2017 Author Share Posted June 13, 2017 3 or so hours @ONIKACRAZY @Corsola @Auburn@ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @UFO @8thPrince @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials @Cupid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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