fountain Posted February 12, 2017 Author Share Posted February 12, 2017 Let me leak it since I don't care about this song Bottle Verse Clear as the water’s gleam Pieces of my fragment dreams Each collected in our love All the things we are made of Fingerprints over the glass Just how you cover my skin These waters become our home Which will last forevermore Chorus I will place all in this bottle Every day and memory That is thrown into the ocean And kept safe in waters peace You may share them if you find it Open like Pandora’s Box And then out into the open You will free our ecstasy Verse Whistles as the wind flows by Laughing just like you and I And the current pulls us out Who knows where we will go now To shatter into the deep Every memory we keep Hides away in protection Submerged underneath the sun Chorus I will place all in this bottle Every day and memory That is thrown into the ocean And kept safe in waters peace You may share them if you find it Open like Pandora’s Box And then out into the open You will free our ecstasy Bridge Treasure hiding in the waves Colours swept into the caves Every joy and word we shared And perfection here declared Safe inside a glass bottle Living in a world it’s own And to whom will find one day All the serene will replay Chorus I will place all in this bottle Every day and memory That is thrown into the ocean And kept safe in waters peace You may share them if you find it Open like Pandora’s Box And then out into the open You will free our ecstasy Outro Our meeting, every touch And the first kiss, awkward lips Didn’t know what we should do But it always felt just right Moving in and laying there For the first time we may dare Every day spent in this bliss In the bottle you find this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 Was I the first to submit? let me send it to the judges so I can get early comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 12, 2017 Author Share Posted February 12, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: Was I the first to submit? let me send it to the judges so I can get early comments No Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 5 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Was I the first to submit? let me send it to the judges so I can get early comments respond to my pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 33 minutes left. May Chronos be your side Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 you're all getting a 5 at most from me. 5/10 if its perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) Not me rewriting 90% of my song in the last hour. Submitted! Thanks to everyone who helped. Including a sis who shall not be named. xo Edited February 12, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 I only had 3 ideas this round, might use one of them later on if I have the time to work it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 3 minutes ago, Aurora said: I only had 3 ideas this round, might use one of them later on if I have the time to work it out. your avi slays me every time i see it sis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 1 minute ago, Aurora said: I only had 3 ideas this round, might use one of them later on if I have the time to work it out. You have like 14 minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8thPrince Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) I'm gonna be late, my songs not quite finished and my staff is doing some dumbass picture so I cant write for an hour. Edited February 12, 2017 by 8thPrince Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 Here's mine. I was definitely pandering to the judges but all's fair in love and war I'm proud of my song for the first time since like, Edge of Winter, so I hope it places as high verse one Sheltering you from the storm, I grew weaker by the step And in my head I pictured you until my final breath I pictured how it would be in that very first moment With you resting in my arms, when your eyes first open I may never get to see that look upon your face But I would never forgive myself if I let you slip away chorus I hope this is something you never have to read I hope someday I find this and it's all I ever need I hope that if you see this, you're not as young as me I hope you find this on a day you need to hear from me I hope that if I don't make it through the night with you Then I hope you find this and I hope it helps you too verse two I'll hide this somewhere, away from you and Dad I'll save it for a time when you can understand Just how hard it was to leave you both behind The storms that I traversed and the mountains that I climbed For a chance to be there when you cry out for your mother For a moment with you when we both don't have to suffer chorus I hope this is something you never have to read I hope someday I find this and it's all I ever need I hope that if you see this, you're not as young as me I hope you find this on a day you need to hear from me I hope that if I don't make it through the night with you Then I hope you find this and I hope it helps you too bridge So the day you find this when you're looking for me Tell your dad I love him. Give him a kiss for me. Tell him I made the right choice and that I miss him, too. Tell him he'd do the same thing if he were in my shoes. As for you, Isabella, I'm never far from home. I'll be here for you whenever you start to feel alone. I'm sending this in case I can't tell you face to face, That a mother's love isn't something that just wilts away. So if you ever feel like you need a mother's touch, Flip this paper over and send me back your love. Disclaimer: If you can't tell, it's about a mother who is writing a letter to her unborn daughter because the mother might die during childbirth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 Adam and me are on dubtrack, join us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 And moi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 52 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Adam and me are on dubtrack, join us 51 minutes ago, ceremonials said: And moi not yall acting like the grammys arent tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 4 minutes ago, Temporal said: not yall acting like the grammys arent tonight I totally forgot they were on. N If only dubtrack live streamed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 (edited) 5 minutes ago, Temporal said: not yall acting like the grammys arent tonight Like we're discussing about the show actually nn Edited February 13, 2017 by ughgabriel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 1 hour ago, SaintWest said: your avi slays me every time i see it sis aw thanks zara is such a slay in general 1 hour ago, ughgabriel said: You have like 14 minutes this is problematic because i was actually referring to a later round which infers I'm sure I'm safe which isn't true mess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 13, 2017 Author Share Posted February 13, 2017 If you plan on dropping out you should at least notify me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 11 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: If you plan on dropping out you should at least notify me 8th said he was submitting late! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 13, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 13, 2017 32 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: If you plan on dropping out you should at least notify me maybe I'll skate by into another round again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 @SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 The 6hr late drag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 13, 2017 Share Posted February 13, 2017 Yas @ them playing Colors at the grammys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 13, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 13, 2017 new avi to celebrate the grammys tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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