ceremonials Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 I fought the chicken was lovely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 12, 2017 I'm probably not gonna submit oh well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 PHOTOPHOBICDiamond Hit Charts Week Song Genre Peak Pure Score 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. "Welcome to My World" "For the Gods" "Vilomah" (with Citrus) "Lost At Sea (Island)" "Berlin" "Lilac Fields" "Bottle" Alternative Country Alternative Rock Folk Folktronica Folk Alternative Country Acoustic #2 #4 #1 #4 #1 #3 ? 8.25 8.25 9.125 8.27 9.0 8.05 ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 12, 2017 2 minutes ago, Corsola said: I just have no inspiration I still have that chorus that I wrote earlier today and I kinda like it but it's basic and it's not inspiring me to write anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 2 minutes ago, jpow said: I just have no inspiration I still have that chorus that I wrote earlier today and I kinda like it but it's basic and it's not inspiring me to write anything else. Keep trying! I was spending all morning trying to write dead end concepts and trash verses but as soon as something hit me it flowed really well LMK if you need any help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 #1 No Sun on the Horizon 8.325 #3 Endless Night 8.375 #3 The Edge of Winter 8.1 #4 Relic #7 The Times #7 Zugzwang #? Isabella I don't remember have their scores ff. Jackson do you have that table w all our scores Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Achilles. Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 45 minutes ago, jpow said: I'm probably not gonna submit oh well I did not get eliminated for you to not submit. But I think I'm not doing the comeback. I've been distracted by the Grammy pre-telecast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 4 minutes ago, ceremonials said: #1 No Sun on the Horizon 8.325 #3 Endless Night 8.375 #3 The Edge of Winter 8.1 #4 Relic #7 The Times #7 Zugzwang #? Isabella I don't remember have their scores ff. Jackson do you have that table w all our scores it's like a page or two after the round was posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 12, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: Us is Regina Spektor's best song and if you don't agree you're ugly i say that like anyone even cares about her Its obviously Fidelity or Laughing With tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 PHOTOPHOBIC 1. Welcome to My World 2. For the Gods 3. 4. 5. Lilac Fields 6. Berlin 7. Island 8. 9. Vilomah (feat. Citrus) 10. Bottle I like Gabe's idea so here's mine so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 9 minutes ago, Corsola said: I literally almost did a song called Bottle this round it was one of my 10000 ideas ff I had so many ideas too, but I guess Peak and Radio Girl will have to wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minho Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 "Bottle" sounds interesting Not sure if this is what you were going with, but I've been playing around with an idea of the message in a bottle thing but its hard for me to get it.... not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 8 minutes ago, Corsola said: Every single round I go through at LEAST 10 ideas it's such a kii Same. Everyone probably thinks I just sit down and whip out high scoring songs out of nowhere but it takes me forever to find a concept that WORKS. Then when I get that down everything else flows smoothly 5 minutes ago, minho said: "Bottle" sounds interesting Not sure if this is what you were going with, but I've been playing around with an idea of the message in a bottle thing but its hard for me to get it.... not bad Yeah that's kinda the central motif of the song. I kinda played with the meaning where the "message" is something you put away and send to the back of your mind until the tides bring it back to the shore/surface Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 Can someone read mine? hihi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 Sorry pears I've sent you like 30 drafts hdjdjxj but this one is final Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 The Chainsmokers winning a grammy proves that talent does indeed sometimes win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 12, 2017 My Do What U Want is coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 23 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Can someone read mine? hihi If you still need it, sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 Just now, SaintWest said: If you still need it, sure. Yes! Let me send Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 Sia recently registered a song called Bottle. Coincidence? I think not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 12, 2017 Author Share Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) Fun fact I just exposed that Jackson copied my entry "Bottle" from two seasons ago, expect a 0 and our first shock elim xo Edited February 12, 2017 by keshaspearsxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 12, 2017 Author Share Posted February 12, 2017 GotSkill's CommentsBatch 1 01. keshaspearsxo – Bottle (Ecstasy) Your style is becoming so distinct and powerful. I suspect this started last season, but I can only compare to the last time I judged you last year, and I sense a huge artistic shift for the better. Your imagery was so vivid I could practically see shimmering blue waters in my mind . On the other hand, your sporadic rhyme scheme threw me off a bit and worked against your (always) flawless meter to disturb the flow more than I would have liked. In addition, I thought this song was too serene and calming to convey feelings of intense joy and happiness. I realize there’s a thin line between blissfully happy and ecstatically happy, but I felt a bit too much of the former in this. Thanks, bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted February 12, 2017 Share Posted February 12, 2017 "distinct" "powerful" "vivid" "flawless" "serene" wow the acclaim! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted February 12, 2017 let me use those words in my song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted February 12, 2017 Author Share Posted February 12, 2017 None of which your shoddy impearsonation will receive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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