touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 3 hours ago, UFO said: SCREAMING I just finished writing a review of @KatyCatPH's song, and my review is 2,000+ words long akjajlf It literally took me 1 and half to 2 hours to write all of it Nnnnn when I review someone else's song, I really don't **** around - If you want an in-depth ANALYSIS/word-piece for your song this round or any future rounds, then feel free to PM me! I'll try to respond if I can. I'll go through every single section/line/word of your song, tell you EXACTLY what is wrong with it in an honest way but I won't drag you too hard I'm nice, I give compliments too to show you what you're doing right and what to continue doing. I'm mainly best at critiquing imagery, emotion, themes, rhyming, concepts, execution, atmosphere but I'll give you a few tips on technical stuff such as structure, meter, flow etc too. Just don't expect expert advice when it comes to technical stuff I've already finished my song and submitted it so I'm kind of available right now - I'd love to critique any of your songs tbh The good sis is not kidding. It is long but totally insightful. I love her feedback and I'm using it to get me back into the competition. P.S.: Games people are the best people in ATRL. Why did I just notice it?
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) 18 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: The good sis is not kidding. It is long but totally insightful. I love her feedback and I'm using it to get me back into the competition. P.S.: Games people are the best people in ATRL. Why did I just notice it? Thanks sis! the CRITICAL acclaim before I've even made my judging debut whew and this is so true tbh. I love the people in the Games section. We totally SLAY the other sections although the Entertainment g0rls are quite lovely too! I used to LOVE The Lounge but it's gone downhill since everything became political Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
Hug Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: me after realizing this 19th draft of my verse is going nowhere and i have to throw it out and start on my 20th take We can all relate
Hug Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: if you look carefully, you can see that the post was written BY gastrodonatella, ABOUT gastrodonatella and FOR gastrodonatella so please keep your ****ing mouth shut please didn't ask
SaintWest Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 15 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: if you look carefully, you can see that the post was written BY gastrodonatella, ABOUT gastrodonatella and FOR gastrodonatella so please keep your ****ing mouth shut please why did i picture this clapback coming from the baby character from boss baby
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) Nnnnnnnnnn whew everytime I see @Hug's avi I'm scalped by SOHEE ha ability to twist and bend her legs like a pretzel Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
Hug Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 3 minutes ago, UFO said: Nnnnnnnnnn whew everytime I see @Hug's avi I'm scalped by SOHEE ha ability to twist and bend her legs like a pretzel Shame about that group she's in :(
Aurora Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 I'm at work still but just wanted to give y'all a quick update that a cute couplet came to mind last night just after I'd given in for the night, so something will be done!
Hug Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Just now, Aurora said: I'm at work still but just wanted to give y'all a quick update that a cute couplet came to mind last night just after I'd given in for the night, so something will be done! I'm ready to have my brain bashed in again
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) 12 minutes ago, Hug said: Shame about that group she's in :( ffff her group is a MESS. They're really wasting her potential in that dull cutesy group. I really hope they either change their concept quick or she just becomes a full-time soloist She would slay as a LOONA member tbh Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
Jackson Posted August 30, 2017 Author Posted August 30, 2017 32 minutes ago, Aurora said: I'm at work still but just wanted to give y'all a quick update that a cute couplet came to mind last night just after I'd given in for the night, so something will be done! Didn't ask @Gastrodonatella
Jackson Posted August 30, 2017 Author Posted August 30, 2017 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: i know i'm that bitch but you don't have to @ me when you use my jokes didn't ask
fountain Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Well I thought of a couplet but nothing else. Guess I'm just submitting two lines.
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 24 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: Well I thought of a couplet but nothing else. Guess I'm just submitting two lines. watch you still get top 5
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 1 minute ago, Covergirl said: do i still only have one review from round 1
CountryBritney Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Are we getting any more reviews for round one or was it only Jackson and Ceremonials doing them this week?
Jackson Posted August 30, 2017 Author Posted August 30, 2017 4 hours ago, CountryBritney said: Are we getting any more reviews for round one or was it only Jackson and Ceremonials doing them this week? We were supposed to, but maybe the judges aren't feeling up to doing their jobs this week
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted August 30, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted August 30, 2017 A hint at my entry
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) 8 hours ago, Hug said: When I think about @Jackson, I feel...disgusted. 8 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: i asked fffffffffffff bitch Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 1 hour ago, Tsareena said: A hint at my entry Serving Katy Perry here e?
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