ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 WINNER'S SONG Spoiler “17” fear vs. courage verse one Staring into space beyond the window of the bus Reminiscing days of when I knew who I could trust Seventeen and you’re the only thing I’ve figured out Lost within my thoughts until I nearly miss my house Searching for composure as I’m walking up the drive This could be the most important moment of my life Still so undecided if it’s something I should do But I’m tired of the hiding and alive when I’m with you pre-chorus one Tiptoe past the creaky porch and slide my key inside the door Locked in hesitation from a fate that calls my name chorus one I’ve waited for the perfect time But perfect moments don’t exist There’ll never be a better night To open up my heart like this I take a breath and clear my throat I stutter, stammer, start to choke When mother asks if I’m okay I look her in the face and say I’m… verse two Talkin’ to myself here on the gravel trail home Trying to prepare for the entire conversation Seventeen and you’re the only thing I wanna know I don’t even care who’s overhearing what I’m sayin’ None of this is easy but they oughta know the truth Guessin’ I’ll be tough enough to handle all the fighting Finally decided that it’s what I’ve gotta do ‘Cause I’m tired of the hiding but alive when I’m with you pre-chorus two Hurry past my bedroom door and throw my backpack on the floor Feels like I’m awakened by a fate that calls my name chorus two I’ve waited for the perfect time But perfect moments don’t exist There’ll never be a better night To open up my heart like this I take a breath and clear my throat Rehearsing each scenario When mama asks if I’m okay I look her in the face and say I’m… middle eight Sorry that I froze, but really what did you expect? I’ve never been the type to conquer stressful situations Sorry that my honesty’s a truth they can’t accept I’m left without a home and told I’m destined for damnation This is what I’ll tell you when I see you in the morning This is what I’ll tell you when I reach your house at midnight Hear a knock and catch your silhouette beneath the awning Broken like your bell and spirit dimmer than your porch light bridge I ask you why you’re here so late Then see the teardrops on your face I walked for miles and braved the cold I’m left with nowhere else to go You still assume that I’ve told mine Perhaps they took the news just fine I close my eyes and take a breath I guess you haven’t told them yet I hear the sound of creaking stairs I know that noise, somebody’s there Your parents suddenly appear They wonder what you’re doing here I still decide to share our truth And tell them I’m in love with you My mother gasps in clear distress When asked if true, I answer… “No.” outro I closed the door on us that night you closed the door on me Your answer hurt me harder than the concrete where I sleep Of all the words I’ve ever said I taste our last the most It comes to me in dreams at night and won’t leave me alone I still replay my mama’s final words inside my mind I know that mother wouldn’t say this if she knew the truth With hatred in her eyes, with loving in her smile “What’d I ever do to deserve a son like you.
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 2 minutes ago, Hug said: Also @ultraviolence.xx staying consistent and showing us that even now, new contestants can come in and slay.
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted October 8, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted October 8, 2017 A beautiful no. 1
ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 due to time constraints we wont be posting all scores for this phase they'll be posted eventually, though. when jackson gets back/when i get back from work.
ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 however....... we'll still be saying goodbye to two beloved contestants :(
Hug Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: due to time constraints we wont be posting all scores for this phase they'll be posted eventually, though. when jackson gets back/when i get back from work. I'm grateful. If my #1 wasn't even an 8, I can only imagine I barely scraped a 6 for this this round.
ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 our first to go..... he might've known this already, but the averages were actually very close.... a PH PIONEER....... @funnellegs :( I'm sorry funnel, you're one of the most consistent writers in this game and you were done especially wrong this round. You've repeaked 11 seasons later and even gotten another #1, and that's something not everyone can say.
funnellegs Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 Very sad to be out, thank you @ceremonials and all the judges for your help over the season. To focus on the positives, I really do feel like I've written some of my best stuff this season. So THANKS GALS, it's been real
SaintWest Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 4 minutes ago, funnellegs said: Very sad to be out, thank you @ceremonials and all the judges for your help over the season. To focus on the positives, I really do feel like I've written some of my best stuff this season. So THANKS GALS, it's been real ♡
ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 our final elimination......... He really produced some great bops this season. Benevolent Legend... @Nait Phoenix :( I'm sorry Nait, but your average from last round really weighed you down. If only eternal bop "Hubris" counted towards this score. :( Still, you're one of PH's many pre-S7 icons, and it's been a pleasure to read your work for once.
ceremonials Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 Next round info/Rounds 5-7 Scores coming tonight~
Hug Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 Great. Rest in peace btw @Nait Phoenix :( Some people die too soon
funnellegs Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I want @funnellegs to take my place ur the best
Aurora Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 I'm very shocked, honestly. Even I was rooting for pears! (mainly so I could read Spectrum nn) Gays and Bis really won this round! But I'm so glad I could turn things around for myself. Thanks to those who congratulated. Saint Hug was robbed, btw. Not funnel and Nait leaving us, two pre-S6 legends. This phase was brutal... (also did KatyCatPH's submission not count? )
MattyTacos Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 1 hour ago, ultraviolence.xx said: ok king @MattyTacos that top 4 slayage I was hoping for top 6 but top 4? Wow. Time to really bring my A game.
Aurora Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 7 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: @Aurora your song is BEAUTIFUL sis Thanks love congrats on a new peak this season, Dark Horse who?
MattyTacos Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 18 minutes ago, Aurora said: Thanks love congrats on a new peak this season, Dark Horse who? Are you ready for, ready for, a perfect storm, PUUURRRFECT STOOORM
Temporal Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 Aurora keeping his boots firmly pressed against the girls throats Pears getting blue balled again, poor iT
Jackson Posted October 8, 2017 Author Posted October 8, 2017 A very exciting challenge is coming tonight along with a very exciting announcement
smholiv Posted October 8, 2017 Posted October 8, 2017 On 2017-08-16 at 6:46 PM, ceremonials said: PHASE 3 will challenge writers with challenges created to test limits.
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