tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[Aurora]

5 minutes ago, Temporal said:

2. Aurora - The Gift
“I caught a glimpse of something on his chair / And left my youth behind without a care / A type of picture book I’d never seen” For ****s sake Aurora I thought you found a Playgirl magazine or something I’m a bit torn by this entry, and it’s a little hard for me to synthesize my thoughts so I’ll just spitball a bit: I think your signature SAT level vocabulary bogged this song down *hard* as the song went on. The first verse and pre-chorus were pretty masterful at striking that balance, but virtually every structure afterwards really missed the mark (sans the bridge and outro). I think the pacing was generally good, but the conclusion was presented in a corny way (“As ignorance is truly bliss”) which was a let down.

…aaand this is why I hate guest judges. Bye!

[Temporal]

2 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said:

this may have been an accident?  

fff mess

 

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London  

[Moonchild]

My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. 

[mxtthewdelrey]

Just now, Temporal said:

I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London  

tbh if you watch his insta story then you could probably find him very easily. He posts where he is pretty much all day every day

[UFO]

Just now, Temporal said:

This song was shorter/less wordy than what I've seen from you before but I think you could take it down just *one* more level or two in the future!  

okay, thanks! whew - I'm nearly there g0rls. This week was a step in the right direction. Hopefully it'll continue     

but get ready cause next round WILL be MY round. idc I will speak that **** into the Universe until it comes true     

 

 

[ultraviolence.xx]

Just now, Moonchild said:

My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. 

your comments seemed not terrible so ima take a 5.5 and be good

[UFO]

1 minute ago, Moonchild said:

My average score this week was 4.732. I want you girls to bring it next round. 

ffffffffff 

[Temporal]

 

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

tbh if you watch his insta story then you could probably find him very easily. He posts where he is pretty much all day every day

oh girl i do 

 

also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh

[Aurora]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

 

diverse *original panel

 

better?

[mxtthewdelrey]

1 minute ago, Temporal said:

also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh

double this + you'll get what score i deserved this round. thanks

[Temporal]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

can you give us news for once too

is this code for hints

 

1 minute ago, Corsola said:

Not Temporal using a doge meme. Delete it fat.

 

 

sjkvhd

[UFO]

3 minutes ago, Temporal said:

I high-key hope I randomly run it him while in London  

Nnnn wait a minute you're in London?  

 

stop stalking me fat  

 

 

 

[touya kinomoto]

12 minutes ago, Temporal said:

TEMPORAL'S REVIEWS

    

 

13. KatyCatPH
This was a storytelling song I guess, but it just felt really shallow conceptually, and not as explicitly connected to the story like everyone else’s. There were sone plot gaps that needed to be filled “We did something crazy” okay, what was it? The craziest part of this story is dancing in the moonlight which is pretty mundane by PH standards! What was the question that you kept asking? These are the details that a storytelling song 100% should have. I’m assuming that the different tenses in the song was an intentional thing, however it wasn’t used well enough for me to be totally sure of what was happening either.

I just selected a passage in the first part of the story where they danced in the moonlight. But yes I get that it is a shallow one. I myself don't like it but I have to get something in. I can guarantee you though that I can do better than this.

[UFO]

3 minutes ago, Temporal said:

 

oh girl i do 

 

also my score average was 5.48 which is probably in my lowest three ever tbh

I yelped! but like... why are we all so ****ty this season ?

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

1 minute ago, UFO said:

Nnnn wait a minute you're in London?  

 

stop stalking me fat  

 

 

 

mess wait, you live in London

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

I swear I have no idea who the UK ATRLers are these days

[Moonchild]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

it's code for "oh temporal and moon gave low scores pretendstobeshocked.gif"

The rest of the panel did too tbh. #hints

 

[UFO]

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

mess wait, you live in London

 

Nnnn yes sis. for some reason everyone always thinks I'm from New York sdfdsf idk why

 

[Temporal]

2 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said:

I swear I have no idea who the UK ATRLers are these days

i love being part of an exclusive club

[UFO]

even on oldTRL when I put "London" as my location people kept thinking I was a New Yorker

not an American in general, SPECIFICALLY a New Yorker ajfahsj idk why  

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

Just now, Temporal said:

i love being part of an exclusive club

I got dragged out of the club by my hair for being too femme

 

 

[Temporal]

1 minute ago, Corsola said:

Btw @Temporal that's a cute idea to use all past avis for a banner. Kind of stanning 

fff I couldn't find my other banners on Imgur so I just threw something together  It is a lil cut tho  

[mxtthewdelrey]

3 minutes ago, UFO said:

Nnnn yes sis. for some reason everyone always thinks I'm from New York sdfdsf idk why

 

Oh wow cute sis! I had no idea. 

 

Let's do an ATRL London meetup, that'd be hilarious

[Aurora]

someone @ me when results start k thx

[Temporal]

2 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said:

Oh wow cute sis! I had no idea. 

 

Let's do an ATRL London meetup, that'd be hilarious

let's get together to write a diss track