touya kinomoto Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:07 PM, UFO said: whew. I forgot how much I loved this song tbh Expand It still puzzles me how they were called a girl group when most of the time it was just Nicole that was singing.
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 3:11 PM, KatyCatPH said: It still puzzles me how they were called a girl group when most of the time it was just Nicole that was singing. Expand Nnnnn it's so true. the other members were LITERAL backup dancers poor Melody sfgdsfs I still scream @ this album cover: the SPACE between Nicole and the other girls like wtf
touya kinomoto Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 3:15 PM, UFO said: Nnnnn it's so true. the other members were LITERAL backup dancers poor Melody sfgdsfs I still scream @ this album cover: the SPACE between Nicole and the other girls like wtf Expand It looks like she was just photoshopped in it.
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 3:17 PM, KatyCatPH said: It looks like she was just photoshopped in it. Expand they even added a strange glowing green light around just HER body and NO ONE else ajdfasfgajs this performance is still a cackle and a KII: Melody coming out of nowhere at the end with those overzealous ad-libs, one girl falling off ha chair, Nicole trying to shout over Melody's loud ass I can't
touya kinomoto Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 3:27 PM, UFO said: they even added a strange glowing green light around just HER body and NO ONE else ajdfasfgajs this performance is still a cackle and a KII: Melody coming out of nowhere at the end with those overzealous ad-libs, one girl falling off ha chair, Nicole trying to shout over Melody's loud ass I can't Expand Where the f*ck was Melody through out that performance? @ her coming out from nowhere.
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 Currently re-reading Jackson's review of my song, it's boosting my self-esteem so much NNnnn like whew, I wasn't particularly sure about my song this week but I'm reading it through again and wow I did THAT My younger self falling off the branch due to the wind, and then my future self becoming the wind that tries to carry the leaf what kind of metaphorical S L A Y
fountain Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 4:55 PM, UFO said: Currently re-reading Jackson's review of my son Expand Must be nice to have got one. Can't relate.
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 5:05 PM, keshaspearsxo said: Must be nice to have got one. Can't relate. Expand he stopped right before me, I think he’s planning to finish today
Hug Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 3:48 AM, Jackson said: @Hug – Providence Disclaimer to you and everyone else this round: I didn’t actually read the short story, I’ve seen the movie and hopefully they’re close enough thematically. BUT I’ve never been one to judge heavily based on proximity to the challenge so don’t fret. OK, so your rhythm was a bit off in the first stanza of the first verse, but I did like the slightly unconventional flow of the song when you were following it. Pyrotechnic was a bit of an inaccurate word choice in my opinion, but the imagery was great. You took the cliché of a sunrise and made it something a little more inventive with “and watch the sun wash out the dark”. The first part of the bridge could honestly have been deleted, its formulaic and doesn’t add anything to the song, and the second half suffices as a bridge. Overall a huge improvement from last week. Expand When using pyrotechnic how I did, I went with this definition: but the fireworks were there to sort of tie the two ideas together. I do think it's an unconventional way of...saying what I wanted to be said, but idk I liked it f. Okay @ huge improvement. Let's see how far of an improvement I can get from #3!
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 11:22 AM, Hug said: Come on legend! Expand hug you manical bitch!
Jackson Posted October 1, 2017 Author Posted October 1, 2017 OK, some good and bad news. The bad: Citrus has a family emergency and won't be able to post his reviews until tonight/tomorrow. The good: @swiftie13 and @Temporal have stepped in to guest judge this round, so there will be reviews galore this week!
Jackson Posted October 1, 2017 Author Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:40 PM, Hug said: But does this mean results are Monday Expand No they're still tonight
Jackson Posted October 1, 2017 Author Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:41 PM, Gastrodonatella said: mess how many people are scoring then Expand me, austin, moon, hor, and whale, so 5
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 Fun fact: I read Jackson's text wrong and thought the reviews would need to be done later in the week instead of tonight before accepting but I'm still doing it because momma didn't raise no quitter!
Hug Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:41 PM, Jackson said: No they're still tonight Expand Okay yes we are excited! Jackson, cere, Temporal, swiftie, and Citrus! My shade backfiring because of Jackson's post before this. Yikes. The good news is swiftie has been a fan of mine in the past. The bad news is Temporal has not.
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:38 PM, Jackson said: OK, some good and bad news. The bad: Citrus has a family emergency and won't be able to post his reviews until tonight/tomorrow. The good: @swiftie13 and @Temporal have stepped in to guest judge this round, so there will be reviews galore this week! Expand omg I hope Citrus is okay also OOP @ there being guest judges hopefully they won't drag my score down
Jackson Posted October 1, 2017 Author Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:42 PM, UFO said: omg I hope Citrus is okay also OOP @ there being guest judges hopefully they won't drag my score down Expand hor was paula before austin was, so i wouldn't bet on it!
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 This has definitely thrown a spanner in the works sdfgdsf the addition of guest judges could either be very good or very bad for me in terms of scores/chart placements and I NEED to do at the very least decently this week especially after being last place last week, otherwise I probably won't make it to phase 3 hopefully they like my song. at least we'll get more reviews tho !
SaintWest Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 the one week i submit a filler entry is the week we get extra reviews where were ya'll during patterns to help jackson understand her concept
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:44 PM, Jackson said: hor was paula before austin was, so i wouldn't bet on it! Expand whew thank GOD hopefully Tempanal won't score me too low. if he doesn't then I should be fine
smholiv Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 the potential backfire this could have given that my song this week isn't in my usual writing style
ceremonials Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 10:10 AM, funnellegs said: I think I've lost the ability to write a half decent song Expand Your song was more than half decent.
ceremonials Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 6:38 PM, Jackson said: OK, some good and bad news. The bad: Citrus has a family emergency and won't be able to post his reviews until tonight/tomorrow. The good: @swiftie13 and @Temporal have stepped in to guest judge this round, so there will be reviews galore this week! Expand Ew
Temporal Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 7:00 PM, ceremonials said: Ew Expand Response noted, bitch
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