Hug Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 7 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: I got a concept for my song. Do I actually need to name drop the stone I chose,or just make sure it connects to its associations? I hope not nnn that would feel tacky IMO. No you don't. I know I didn't at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 We dived inside of Heaven's Mirror and reflected as we watched the sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattyTacos Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 I think I'm scrapping my song completely omg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted September 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 12, 2017 1 minute ago, MattyTacos said: I think I'm scrapping my song completely omg That's probably for the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattyTacos Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 1 minute ago, feelslikeadream said: That's probably for the best. Yeah, I agree I'm gonna see where this new concept idea takes me, if anything I still have a song to fall back on if it goes nowhere. But, I'm gonna give this idea a chance since I think it has better potential to fit under the Diamond category. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 12, 2017 whew I have a concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Finally got a concept. Now I just have to translate it to a good song. Thank God this month's stone is very... inspirational. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minho Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 sent. i may attempt a single cover for this one (for real) since i never ended up finishing one for Cat's Waltz. here's the title in gradient because i high-key liked the colour scheme: play of colour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Year of Shadow Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 I feel inspired by my cat today so I might incorporate him in my song Currently I named it "I Run Away". It fits several birthstones so I'll need to make it more specific lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 12, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 12, 2017 5 hours ago, Tsareena said: whew I have a concept Lies I don't anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Random Review #1 @minho Your Dolly song didn't necessarily fit her as an artist rhythmically, but it was exciting because it gave me an insight into what Bjork would be like if she came from Appalachia. I really liked the topic you went with, and the creativity made up for some stuff that felt a little off for a Dolly song. Overall, cute and good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Random Review #2 @Nait Phoenix whew slay me dad. Your wordplay was cute but not so smart that it was unbelievable TOP would sing it. The chorus felt like a better All American Rejects song if they were around today, so, again fitting to your client. No major complaints, my #1 this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Random Review #3 @mxtthewdelrey This was..surprisingly apt. The topic is tired AF, but, stylistically, I feel like you really captured Amy's essence and I commend you on that. You had some awkward and clunky lines (even for her) in the chorus, but the way your first verse went into the chorus and so on was very Frank album. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Okay lemme put a post in between this so Citrus can post another review. 3 in a row is considered Disruptive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mxtthewdelrey Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 31 minutes ago, Citrus said: Random Review #3 @mxtthewdelrey This was..surprisingly apt. The topic is tired AF, but, stylistically, I feel like you really captured Amy's essence and I commend you on that. You had some awkward and clunky lines (even for her) in the chorus, but the way your first verse went into the chorus and so on was very Frank album. Good job. thank you citrus!!! ur a legend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 26 minutes ago, Hug said: Okay lemme put a post in between this so Citrus can post another review. 3 in a row is considered Disruptive. plot twist hes only doing 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: plot twist hes only doing 3 Wow I don't doubt it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 I can't ready to struggle with a concept this week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 3 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: why cant every judge be like austin i misread austin as satan whew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 5 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: why cant every judge be like austin because he cares the most about y'all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 7 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: why cant every judge be like austin talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 1 minute ago, Citrus said: because he cares the most about y'all OMG lash a bit though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Random Review #4 @Mezik Girl I love that you went for hard mode, but...Dolly is your person, so you write a song about your daddy being a farmer with the first two lines talking about his dirty overalls? It just felt so FORCED. Of course it's hard because I stan her, but this serves Beyonce in Daddy Lessons levels of "I wonder what country music is". Clunky rhyming is secondary, I wanna see you think outside the box hon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: correct me if im wrong, this is the first season where a judge has gone three rounds without completing reviews? idk who you @ing but I only missed Round 1! La-kii! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted September 12, 2017 Share Posted September 12, 2017 4 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: correct me if im wrong, this is the first season where a judge has gone three rounds without completing reviews? i am eating my chipotle burrito, unbothered by you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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