ultraviolence.xx Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 finished a first draft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minho Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 even though the moment is over i made a cover for my first song too (that will probably make no sense to anyone but me) Spoiler edit: ok it cropped weirdly idgi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 1 hour ago, Covergirl said: Will the op ever have a link to reviews? I think i've seen maybe 3 reviews of my songs this season i sent links to jack like 2 days ago, mine should at least be linked Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glassmouth Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 who wants to read my first draft thingy!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 doing fave couplets for R3 + half of r2 girlies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 7 minutes ago, ceremonials said: i sent links to jack like 2 days ago, mine should at least be linked wow, queen of being on top of ha job poor others Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 6 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: who wants to read my first draft thingy!? you know i always will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 3 hours ago, Citrus said: Random Review #8 @KatyCatPH Okay, honestly drag me for thinking you were gonna be eliminated again. You've shown SO much growth from that first song, and it's really, really encouraging to see. This concept is cute and everything Taylor wished "Welcome to New York" was. I commend you on keeping a consistent theme with your imagery (musical terminology), and I see big things ahead if you keep improving. Slant rhymes like 'closed' and 'roar' are tricky because most slant rhymes rely on pronunciation - if you're gonna use 'em, try to make sure they come across in text, as well. Reminder to check syllable counts, of course, but just keep proofreading and having others check your stuff. Keep up the upward trajectory queen. Wow! Thanks for the comments. I am deeply flattered. Especially when you said my song was better than WTNY. I know it's not saying too much since it is the worst song on 1989 but still I am flattered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 17 minutes ago, ceremonials said: doing fave couplets for R3 + half of r2 girlies Are you going to create new posts for that or are you just gonna edit your reviews? Hope you post new ones since it's gonna take an eternity to find them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 13, 2017 Author Share Posted September 13, 2017 Posted austin's reviews, I'll do mine soon and if the other judges wanna send me a compiled post/doc of 1/2 batches of reviews from each round I can link them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glassmouth Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 my song is another emo-Glassmouth moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hiatus Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 My song is very "freeing" with its message. Gonna go with Aquamarine for this round. My birthstone is in fact Emerald, but I can't force myself to write an Emerald song just because of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 1 hour ago, KatyCatPH said: Are you going to create new posts for that or are you just gonna edit your reviews? Hope you post new ones since it's gonna take an eternity to find them. Um, probably a new post, though I might edit them into the megapost as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 6 hours ago, PoKiTaurus said: My song is very "freeing" with its message. Gonna go with Aquamarine for this round. My birthstone is in fact Emerald, but I can't force myself to write an Emerald song just because of that. Oh, my song also has a freedom theme and I chose Aquamarine. Interesting. Looks like we'll be swimming in the same lane! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattyTacos Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 @UFO open my pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 6 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: nobody has feuded with me in like 30 pages and i'm tired of it can somebody start some **** no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, MattyTacos said: @UFO open my pm Lol I don't think I'll be able to give you feedback this week. I'm going through a lot of personal **** right now and I haven't even written a first completed draft of my song yet Edited September 13, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 5 minutes ago, Corsola said: Hope everything is ok I've always been mentally strong but emotionally...... I'm so fragile. I've never been diagnosed before but I do think I'm suffering from some level of PTSD. People who I care about so much have taken advantage of me and neglected me so much and so many times it's getting kind of difficult for me to deal with I've never been physically abused but I've experienced so much emotional abuse and I still do tbh. Yesterday I had such an intense emotional breakdown, it was the WORST. But whatever.......... writing songs is kind of therapeutic for me so hopefully I can finish it soon. I love the message of my song this week - it's a little more uplifting compared to most of my others. I really don't want to quit since this is one of my few creative outlets so I'll try to finish it. Thank you btw! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 13, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 13, 2017 20 hours ago, Tsareena said: Lies I don't anymore Update 2: I have 3 1st drafts and no energy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funnellegs Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 1 hour ago, UFO said: I've always been mentally strong but emotionally...... I'm so fragile. I've never been diagnosed before but I do think I'm suffering from some level of PTSD. People who I care about so much have taken advantage of me and neglected me so much and so many times it's getting kind of difficult for me to deal with I've never been physically abused but I've experienced so much emotional abuse and I still do tbh. Yesterday I had such an intense emotional breakdown, it was the WORST. But whatever.......... writing songs is kind of therapeutic for me so hopefully I can finish it soon. I love the message of my song this week - it's a little more uplifting compared to most of my others. I really don't want to quit since this is one of my few creative outlets so I'll try to finish it. Thank you btw! Hope everything gets better soon, here if you need anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hiatus Posted September 13, 2017 Share Posted September 13, 2017 (edited) My song is coming along pretty well. I decided to go with Amethyst because of the Amethyst crystals in Crash Bandicoot, and because the judges hate water imagery. xoxo PoKiTaurus Edited September 13, 2017 by PoKiTaurus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattyTacos Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 (edited) 8 hours ago, UFO said: Lol I don't think I'll be able to give you feedback this week. I'm going through a lot of personal **** right now and I haven't even written a first completed draft of my song yet Mess, I'm sorry to hear that. Hope everything gets better soon Edited September 14, 2017 by MattyTacos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glassmouth Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 who'd want to read my songish? i need some honest drag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 6 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: who'd want to read my songish? i need some honest drag i'm taking a break so hit me up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glassmouth Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 1 minute ago, Aurora said: i'm taking a break so hit me up yas, let me dm u! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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