tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[touya kinomoto]

23 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

@KatyCatPH, “London’s Calling” (HERETIC)

 

Hmm, this was a bit of a reach as a Florence song for me. As a subject it was very much her, but I feel like she might’ve tackled it with a little more subtlety. I was mainly looking for stylistic choices when writing for Florence, but I appreciate that you did something original while also kind of staying true to her style. It wasn’t exactly cookie cutter Florence, but the allusions were there, which is nice. Had this been for another round, I feel I would’ve liked it more, because it’s not a bad song by any means. The orchestral theme is really cute, and I think it fits a city like London really well. But as is, I couldn’t believably see Florence singing this - not on her own album at least. Still, you’re continuously growing every week as a writer, even if the challenges maybe aren’t the best for you right now.

I knew that my style and Florence's are totally different. I tried but yeah, I agree I myself had a hard time convincing myself that it could be a song that Florence would be singing.

 

Thanks for the commentary cere.

[ceremonials]

hints 

@ultraviolence.xx         

 

@UFO     

 

@Hug       

 

 

@Gastrodonatella   

 

@funnellegs    

 

@minho   

 

@Tsareena      

 

@FCKNAmbrosia   

 

@mxtthewdelrey  

 

@Nait Phoenix  

 

@Mezik  

 

@PoKiTaurus  

 

@Aurora  

 

@Speezy  

 

@SaintWest 

 

@Glassmouth ;

 

@katycatph 

 

(idk why yours wont format ? )

 

 

[Hug]

Looks like me, uvie, and Tsareena have the same score at least! Now whether or not that's a good thing is yet to be determined.

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

mxtthewdelrey is higher than hug, tsareena and uvie and saintwest is your #3

Wrong.

[ceremonials]

2 minutes ago, Hug said:

Looks like me, uvie, and Tsareena have the same score at least! Now whether or not that's a good thing is yet to be determined.

Also wrong

 

[FCKNAmbrosia]

I don't know anything about pokemons but this one doesn't look cute at all 

Could somebody explain it to me?

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

gave it a shot  no shade i just noticed that there were 3 slowpokes and a slowbro which is the better form of slowpoke so  

But Slowking is better than both

 

[Hug]

Just now, ceremonials said:

Also wrong

 

Get better pokemon then bitch

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

I don't know anything about pokemons but this one doesn't look cute at all 

Could somebody explain it to me?

You dont need to know anything about them to figure it out, tbh.

[Hug]

I was thinking weaker = better, but that would still imply me, tsareena, and uvie are tied.  

[Denim]

@ceremonials do you think you will finish the rest of them today  I love a good Pokémon hint 

[ceremonials]

Just now, Covergirl said:

@ceremonials do you think you will finish the rest of them today  I love a good Pokémon hint 

youre not in the doc?

 

[Denim]

I have a hunch it doesn't even have to do with evolutions this time, or if it is it isn't the standard "being a higher evolution = better"

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

grimer - 8.8
slowpokes - 8.0
slowbro - 8.1 
drowzee - 9.6
bellsprout - 6.9
geodude - 7.4
cloyster - 9.1
victreebel - 7.1
machop - 6.6
machoke - 6.7
machamp - 6.8
farfetch'd - 8.3
magneton - 8.2
tentacool - 7.2

Did you think I'd be that obvious?

 

[Denim]

1 minute ago, ceremonials said:

youre not in the doc?

 

Erm @Jackson

 

[Denim]

Is it based on their number in the pokedex?

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

i was too far from a 10 for it to be true but i threw it out anyway  

You're on the right track though.

[ceremonials]

Just now, Covergirl said:

Is it based on their number in the pokedex?

No.

[ceremonials]

me single handedly reviving this thread yet again

 

[Denim]

@Jackson

 

you got my song right??? Please tell me it sent and you just didn't put it on the doc on accident or something

 

[Denim]

Omg I'm freaking out right now

 

i remember exactly the description I sent Jackson too

 

i was talking about how my song is about falling in love with someone who is not in love with you back and he follows you around like a ghost 

 

i hope nothing happened to it 

[Denim]

Currently going through a crisis!!! Idk what's happening but I'm really worried about my song !! I know I finished it a 1:30 and sent it at 1:30 but Idk why Jackson didn't get it ahhhhh I'm dying 

[Jackson]

OK yeah @Covergirl I don't see your entry in my inbox 

[Denim]

Just now, Jackson said:

OK yeah @Covergirl I don't see your entry in my inbox 

What!?!?

 

omg 

 

i still have it, I don't know how to prove it to you that It was done at 1:30 and sent but it doesn't show I sent it in my inbox either idk why

[Denim]

Someone plz kill me rip my song I was pretty happy about it too