touya kinomoto Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 23 minutes ago, ceremonials said: @KatyCatPH, “London’s Calling” (HERETIC) Hmm, this was a bit of a reach as a Florence song for me. As a subject it was very much her, but I feel like she might’ve tackled it with a little more subtlety. I was mainly looking for stylistic choices when writing for Florence, but I appreciate that you did something original while also kind of staying true to her style. It wasn’t exactly cookie cutter Florence, but the allusions were there, which is nice. Had this been for another round, I feel I would’ve liked it more, because it’s not a bad song by any means. The orchestral theme is really cute, and I think it fits a city like London really well. But as is, I couldn’t believably see Florence singing this - not on her own album at least. Still, you’re continuously growing every week as a writer, even if the challenges maybe aren’t the best for you right now. I knew that my style and Florence's are totally different. I tried but yeah, I agree I myself had a hard time convincing myself that it could be a song that Florence would be singing. Thanks for the commentary cere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 hints @ultraviolence.xx @UFO @Hug @Gastrodonatella @funnellegs @minho @Tsareena @FCKNAmbrosia @mxtthewdelrey @Nait Phoenix @Mezik @PoKiTaurus @Aurora @Speezy @SaintWest @Glassmouth ; @katycatph (idk why yours wont format ? ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Looks like me, uvie, and Tsareena have the same score at least! Now whether or not that's a good thing is yet to be determined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: mxtthewdelrey is higher than hug, tsareena and uvie and saintwest is your #3 Wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 2 minutes ago, Hug said: Looks like me, uvie, and Tsareena have the same score at least! Now whether or not that's a good thing is yet to be determined. Also wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FCKNAmbrosia Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 I don't know anything about pokemons but this one doesn't look cute at all Could somebody explain it to me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: gave it a shot no shade i just noticed that there were 3 slowpokes and a slowbro which is the better form of slowpoke so But Slowking is better than both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Also wrong Get better pokemon then bitch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 1 minute ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: I don't know anything about pokemons but this one doesn't look cute at all Could somebody explain it to me? You dont need to know anything about them to figure it out, tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 I was thinking weaker = better, but that would still imply me, tsareena, and uvie are tied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 @ceremonials do you think you will finish the rest of them today I love a good Pokémon hint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Covergirl said: @ceremonials do you think you will finish the rest of them today I love a good Pokémon hint youre not in the doc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 I have a hunch it doesn't even have to do with evolutions this time, or if it is it isn't the standard "being a higher evolution = better" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: grimer - 8.8 slowpokes - 8.0 slowbro - 8.1 drowzee - 9.6 bellsprout - 6.9 geodude - 7.4 cloyster - 9.1 victreebel - 7.1 machop - 6.6 machoke - 6.7 machamp - 6.8 farfetch'd - 8.3 magneton - 8.2 tentacool - 7.2 Did you think I'd be that obvious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: youre not in the doc? Erm @Jackson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Is it based on their number in the pokedex? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: i was too far from a 10 for it to be true but i threw it out anyway You're on the right track though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Covergirl said: Is it based on their number in the pokedex? No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 me single handedly reviving this thread yet again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 @Jackson you got my song right??? Please tell me it sent and you just didn't put it on the doc on accident or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Omg I'm freaking out right now i remember exactly the description I sent Jackson too i was talking about how my song is about falling in love with someone who is not in love with you back and he follows you around like a ghost i hope nothing happened to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Currently going through a crisis!!! Idk what's happening but I'm really worried about my song !! I know I finished it a 1:30 and sent it at 1:30 but Idk why Jackson didn't get it ahhhhh I'm dying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 OK yeah @Covergirl I don't see your entry in my inbox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: OK yeah @Covergirl I don't see your entry in my inbox What!?!? omg i still have it, I don't know how to prove it to you that It was done at 1:30 and sent but it doesn't show I sent it in my inbox either idk why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Someone plz kill me rip my song I was pretty happy about it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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