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ROUND 14: 25K Magic

Rank the entries and send them to ME through Discord preferably or ATRL DMs

 

Excluding your own entry, rank from 1-8:

 

1. ex: Call Me Home [BEST SONG]

2. ex: The Greatest [2ND BEST SONG]

8. ex: Squeeze [WORST SONG]

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer

sadie - 4am

Big Ling - Bip Burger

Aria Bleu - forget about it

COY - Promises

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions

Human Natural - Fantasy

Leah Mcfall - Somber

유설 - Ocean View

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer

Where did you find this girl with only 300 monthly listeners we-

I think I actually kind of enjoyed this?? Her vocals reminded me of Tori Kelly a bit.

 

sadie - 4am

Very good, especially for an artist with only 5k followers. Smooth melody and pretty solid production.

 

Big Ling - Bip Burger

Well... this is certainly an unforgettable song. Can't say it's good though lol. We are looking camp straight in the eye!

Strangely enough, I was actually in a Music League with some other internet friends like 2 months ago + someone sent this?? So somehow I knew it already which threw me off lol

 

Aria Bleu - forget about it

This was fine... nothing to write home about really

 

COY - Promises

Okayyyy this one had nice energy!! A bit of a bop with an enjoyable buildup of tension throughout the song.

 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions

Oh no.... this was a challenging 4 minutes of my life, I'm sorry :cries:

 

Human Natural - Fantasy

It definitely has some cute boppy fun moments, but her voice is rubbing me the wrong way in the chorus

 

Leah Mcfall - Somber

I have nothing positive to say on this one.... It was monotonous, dated, boring, long, and dreadful vocals

 

유설 - Ocean View

This was fun! Probably middle of the pack for me.

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer: this is vibey and cute! good vocals woah

sadie - 4am: very cute, etheral, and beautiful I collapsed a bit

Big Ling - Bip Burger: JIOWEFJIOWEFOJI it's like giving CAMP and it's funny I just can't do anything but laugh some parts are good production wise and her voice grew on me throughout the song

Aria Bleu - forget about it: it was cute but I was bored sorry :(

COY - Promises: this was fun I was hoping for a better drop throughout the song but I got it at the outro so I'm content!!

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions: wait not this pll song jOIWEJOIFD it's boring though sorry :/

Human Natural - Fantasy: love the production at some points, it was boring at parts though

Leah Mcfall - Somber: sorry but im so bored

유설 - Ocean View: very cute bop! love the chorus

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer: Slight bop but the a capella version outsold! And I’m not huge on her vocals but the funky production is nice

sadie - 4am: WINNER WITH EASE WHEW I’ve been payolaing her for a while even though this is a Charli ripoff so you knew you were getting my #1!

Big Ling - Bip Burger: A meme bop, and I weirdly know this and remembered it despite not hearing it in years LOL. The vocals draw you in, reminds me of OnlyFire

Aria Bleu - forget about it: Not bad, the melody has its moments

COY - Promises: Production is generic but cute, her vocals are nice but get annoying by the end. Fine overall

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions: I am so sorry we put you through this round

Human Natural - Fantasy: Both quirky and faceless, I like some elements and overall given the quality of this round… the good outweighs the bad so it’s fine

Leah Mcfall - Somber: Boring… this does absolutely nothing for me at any point, not laughably bad but yeah

유설 - Ocean View: Oh wow this is nice! Easily the best of the songs I didn’t know (which was most of them). You'll prob win lol

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer

this is fun tbhhh :mandown: some parts were kinda off but generally i’m actually enjoying this a bit

 

sadie - 4am

i wanna like this but why is it sounding like a diy version of Charli & Caroline’s Tears… it’s cute but i kinda can’t get past the similarities :dancehall:

 

Big Ling - Bip Burger

wtf is this and why am i bopping :bibliahh:

 

Aria Bleu - forget about it

i actually liked this at first but i feel the chorus was just such a let down. great vocals though

 

COY - Promises

it’s kinda making me move rn? but unfortunately also quite boring and bland to me, this doesn’t really venture anywhere exciting 

 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions

it’s giving ray of light or something like… unfortunately i fell asleep halfway through 

 

Human Natural - Fantasy

this was fun i liked the beat… :toofunny2:

 

Leah Mcfall - Somber

i fell asleep i cannot lie

 

유설 - Ocean View

wait i enjoyed this one the whole way through, a solid bop yeah. :smitten: loved the chorus

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer: ok at first i rly didnt like  but as the song played i was jamming

sadie - 4am: ooh this is rly pretty i like the beat and the vocal effects

Big Ling - Bip Burger: idk if i like this as a song but i rly think its fun! the lyrics are just so funny

Aria Bleu - forget about it: love the tone of voice here its a cute song def sth that would be on my spotify discover

COY - Promises: ooh i love this basic fun and her voice is nice

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions: wait is this the song that played in pretty little liars when they found out maya d worded? i LOVED that omg its just so beautiful sounding throughout the whole song 

Human Natural - Fantasy: dont like her voice but i like the beat oh this lil bridge is awful sorry

Leah Mcfall - Somber: sadly it was some bore (get it) idk what else to say

유설 - Ocean View: this is giving loona but back when they made good music so slay

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Chiara Hunter — Hammer

Good progression throughout the song, the bridge was definitely climactic. I like her voice as well.

 

saide — 4am

Eh, it’s not my thing.

 

BIP LING — Bip Burger

What is going on? I feel like… I love this ‘cause it’s just such a puzzling entry… in the entertaining sense? Gonna need to think this1 through fff; I’m crackinup.

 

Aria Bléu — forget about it

Some nice elements going on here, with the instrumentation & layering. Very middle-of-the-pack.

 

COY — Promises

I feel like I’ve heard this somewhere before? The second half of this really hits. Like it lots.

 

Orelia Has Orchestra — Suggestions

hufdpanvudav wait this IS the song that played in PLL when Maya died. My jaw is dropped. Iconic character/LGBT+ couple/scene but the song in full isn’t as good. I do think there’s an overreaction though which is unfortunate.

 

Human Natural — Fantasy

Not 200something listeners. The research this round was something else. The song feels a bit flat… it’s missing something.

 

Leah McFall & Corey K — Somber

Something about her name/voice feels familiar but I’m not sure why. Her & the guy sound good together, but it's a bit long for me.

 

유설 - Ocean View

Well I've had some great ocean views the past few weeks so you're right on time! Hmmmm, yeah, everything about this is great & would sound good in a typical round/theme. My favorite of the round.

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short crits cause I cba rn

 

Hammer: it's okay, basic but bops to an extent

4am: the Sanguine pandering... this is fine, a good Charli rip off

BIP BURGER: this was weird (derogatory)

forget about it: I literally forgot how it goes

Promises: this was really nice!! the production was cool, faceless pop is my thing

Suggestions: I was so bored

Fantasy: loved this, it was saur fun

Somber: this was hot garbage

Ocean View: cutesy fun dated bop

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer
This is cute, I bopped a bit

sadie - 4am
This is giving Charli, I like it tho, pretty song

Big Ling - Bip Burger
This is a kii, it's weird but I did somewhat bop

Aria Bleu - forget about it
I like her voice and the instrumental, it's nice

COY - Promises
Okay this goes off actually, especially near the end

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions
It's alright, I wish it was shorter though

Human Natural - Fantasy
It's cute, the beat is fun

Leah Mcfall - Somber
I like parts of this, not bad

유설 - Ocean View
Fun summery bop, nice pick

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer
Mmm very generic but it was cute 

sadie - 4am
The Charli rip offs that are out there… not bad but faceless

Big Ling - Bip Burger
A fun trashy bop!

Aria Bleu - forget about it
not memorable 

COY - Promises
basic but not bad 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions
boring 

Human Natural - Fantasy
very middle of the road for me tbh 

Leah Mcfall - Somber
its smooth but so long 

유설 - Ocean View
maybe the best song here! Good job!

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer - this wasn't bad! she definitely has a pretty unique sound. is it something i'd listen to again? maybe not but it's alright uwu.

sadie - 4am - loved this!!! the vocal effects are everything and i love the chill vibe of it.

Big Ling - Bip Burger - it's funny and kinda catchy but also a little annoying at the same time fff.

Aria Bleu - forget about it - not a fan of her voice tbh :c i will indeed forget about it!

COY - Promises - this is nice! i could see this on ESC or something <3 also her voice is very pretty.

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions - this was pretty :3 very relaxing to listen to.

Human Natural - Fantasy - yeahh i did not enjoy this at all. very annoying and just overall chaotic. hard pass.

Leah Mcfall - Somber - i didn't like the feature at all but other than that it was cute.

유설 - Ocean View - this was very cute & summery! a nice find <3

 

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer - amazing vocals and I love the funky production :katie2: 

 

sadie - 4am - love this :jamming: feels very current yet nostalgic at the same time

 

Big Ling - Bip Burger - what is this pc hypergrime masterpiece :WAP: it slaps

 

Aria Bleu - forget about it - wasn’t giving much but it’s not bad :chick1:

 

COY - Promises - production gets a bit noisy towards the end but I like the first half :chick1:

 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions - okay I actually didn’t hate this :lakitu: it’s not the greatest thing ever and is a bit of a snooze but it’s pleasant 

 

Human Natural - Fantasy - generic but a fun bop :jamming:

 

Leah Mcfall - Somber - a bit one note :chick1: not awful but the title of the song is aptly fitting

 

유설 - Ocean View - very fun bop :katie2: love the chorus

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer

Very retail store, I like the addition of the piano during some bits. Overall it’s nice but very forgettable spotify core

 

sadie - 4am

This is actually really soothing in a glitchy way that I really enjoyed. I think I will be saving this :minho:

 

Big Ling - Bip Burger

I honestly stan this. This is what the Nadia Oh senders think they did

 

Aria Bleu - forget about it

I really enjoy her vocals. I don’t think there was a lot going on with the song so it became a little one note but it was still enjoyable

 

COY - Promises

I find this pretty basic :cri: I don’t think I enjoy generic [clean] pop as much as I used to. The production was cute, very 2016’d

 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions

There’s actually a good song lying somewhere here. The producer just needed to sit on it a bit longer. The mixing is a bit weird but I do like the relaxing ambience of the song ngl

 

Human Natural - Fantasy

Out of the generic pop songs I feel like I enjoyed this one the most because of how playful it is. I wish the chorus could go tbh

 

Leah Mcfall - Somber

Their approach to bedroom pop was very uninteresting… i like the addition of lo fi sounds but there weren’t any alluring aspects on this song if I’m honest

 

유설 - Ocean View

This is cute, not outstanding but it does the job. I like the forever 21 remix vibe this one has actually

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer
This started out bad but it grew into something I actually really enjoyed,

the beat/production gave me fun 80s Janet vibes at times and her voice wasn't bad

 

sadie - 4am
Very Charli'd, I liked it's chillness, would fit on Euphoria I guess

 

Big Ling - Bip Burger
A mess but fun and charming tbh

 

Aria Bleu - forget about it
Very relaxing, her voice was giving me Sade vibes, but the song kinda stalled/went nowhere

 

COY - Promises
Very faceless but also I bopped x I didn't love the alien vocals near the end

 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions
I was very bored x

 

Human Natural - Fantasy
It sounds like a basic cheap bop but it also feels flat like a soda left open for hours 

 

Leah Mcfall - Somber
Sounds like generic study music you'd find in a youtube video that plays for 24 hours, it wasn't awful but made me sleepy

 

유설 - Ocean View
Very cute and a bop, I liked it a lot x

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer - She has a great singing voice, I enjoyed this tbh, good job! 

sadie - 4am - This terrible vocal effect, I can't! This was a snooze for me, not a fan sorry!  

Big Ling - Bip Burger - LMAOOO! Not this being a bop chile! Her tone reminds me of M.I.A, this song was a bop. 

Aria Bleu - forget about it - This was SO good! This is right up my alley sonically! I also love her voice! Great job! 

COY - Promises - This is well produced. That's all I can say... 

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions - the scream I screamed when I realized this was the song from PLL when **** died (did that for spoilers), nostalgia is definitely helping you here! It's a beautiful song, her voice is also nice. 

Human Natural - Fantasy - This was cute, it did not really leave a big impact on me. 

Leah Mcfall - Somber - The female vocalist was doing some really interesting things with her voice, I can tell she has a strong voice, the male singer was nice too, I liked this. 

유설 - Ocean View - The production just makes me want to dance and have fun, I like it a lot. 

 

 

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Chiara Hunter - Hammer: this is really fun bop, I'm loving her voice

sadie - 4am: this is Charli-lite, but like the bad Pop 2 thru hifn era Charli :mazen:

Big Ling - Bip Burger: this is so fun like I love it plssss

Aria Bléu - forget about it: loveee this and her voice, the lows are so rich

COY - Promises: this is a fun little basic bop

Orelia Has Orchestra - Suggestions: it's a bit too long but it is pretty good as well

Human Natural - Fantasy: this one is pretty mid to me I think but I do like the fun instrumental stuff toward the end

Leah Mcfall - Somber: I really like this, idk why it's getting so much hate

유설 - Ocean View: really really fun song I enjoyed it a lot!

 

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