tournament Golden Hit: Season 1 📀 Congrats to 8thPrince and Jackson!! 🏆🏆

[fountain]

5 minutes ago, Julia Fox said:

i have my song for pride ready… wrote it in just 8 minutes and it was fun! later I’m gonna revisit and change some things but is IT! It’s called Queer Things I Did When I Was Little and it was written with this song in mind 

 

I posted it early in the day to give everybody extra time, but I wasn’t expecting anybody to be done 40 minutes after posting

[Julia Fox]

Just now, fountain said:

I posted it early in the day to give everybody extra time, but I wasn’t expecting anybody to be done 40 minutes after posting

Well it’s cold cloudy day here you know x 

[OreGuy]

let me submit something fun

[Better Mistakes]

I have the song pretty done in draft one  

 

INHIBITIONS is coming 

Edited June 4, 2022 by Better Mistakes

[Better Mistakes]

6 minutes ago, OreGuy said:

let me submit something fun

Bestie  Are you submitting a fun bop too?

[EpicSongFan]

On 6/2/2022 at 1:17 AM, fountain said:

I love it, it looks like the single for an indie song that I would no doubt stan

 

Tbh that is a really good point, while the game itself might only be based on songwriting, the creativity doesn’t really stop there. We have people composing, singing, designing cover art, making instrumentals, etc. and it’s amazing it’s lovely seeing all of these things 

Yeah, it feels really good to see people pulling such insane creativity outside of just songwriting ngl  Am really excited to see how it progresses ahhh

 

On 6/3/2022 at 9:39 AM, Julia Fox said:

My song btw:

 

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endrophy 

 

intro (reciting)

 

A stranger that you thought you know, that’s what love was for me

used to dream with it, but never felt it under my skin

Always said ‘when I will find what I'm looking for?' for so long 

But in reality it was always there, but I never knew it till today…

 

verse 1: 

The trill of my big dry heart

And all these years that were burning it down 

a living hate, just like getting used to being hurt

Sadness of getting darker as the days are passing by

 

verse 2:

 

The bird who brought me in tears

Now is the bird that sings when I sing

I fell asleep laying on it's warm wings

I almost gave myself up till death

Just waiting for my ashes

to be dispatched 

 

pre chorus:

 

I was so fragile

That I almost got rid of myself  

 

chorus:

 

But now I know that in the end you will not come back looking for me

I re-enter to the river that you never dare to crossed

But now I know in the end I know you're not going to stop me from crawling

For the flow of the same river where you left me

 

verse 3:

 

How to look at you without disarming me?

How to hug without being indolent?

Waking up and feel all the daylight's warm

Suddenly erase what used to hurt forever

 

verse 4:

 

The cry of a bird falling

The rumble that turn everything so dark

To the hug that held you yesterday

I can feel the air caressing my skin

it feels so good inside of me

 

pre chorus 2: 

i never used to experience this

it’s a new beginning, this is real 

 

chorus: 

 

Cause now I know that in the end you will not come back looking for me

I re-enter to the river that you never dare to crossed

But now I know in the end I know you're not going to stop me from crawling

For the flow of the same river where you left me

 

bridge:

 

I gave myself

Just cold I said goodbye to the old dark days

I wasn’t expecting to reborn

this is a return to form 

Now I understood that life is a mirror

And whoever has to fall will fall

but now it’s my time to rise

 

chorus: 

 

Cause now you know that in the end you will not come back looking for me

I re-enter to the river that you never dare to crossed

But now I know in the end I know you're not going to stop me from crawling

For the flow of the same river where you left me

 

bridge 2:

 

I can see it in my reflection 

it’s my new revelation

don’t you know this is not perfection 

but who cares when you feel the vibrations

my soul keeps flying like a bird 

and nobody can’t stop me from there 

im so high, can you see my face 

now I’ll never fall into your trace

anymore 

 

outro (reciting):

 

Then suddenly I woke, and everything around me had changed


I looked up, and I knew I was there

And since that, I never left

Now I’m here to stay

 

I gotta say, the bridge 2 and the chorus are my favourites from the song! 

 

On 6/3/2022 at 12:11 PM, Remmy said:

here's my entry "Nonstop Hardcore" for New Music Friday!

 

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[intro]
Non-stop. Hard-core.
Non, non-stop. Hard-core.

[verse 1]
500 licks 'till I get to the center of your Twinkie
I just want your cr*am in me
Floating through my guts, no if, ands, or buts
I wanna drain your n*ts (right now!)
Fed like a bird, we get so absurd
And my safe word, never leaves my lips
Before it begins, we both touch tips
And I activate gorilla glue grip

[pre-chorus]
I wanna greet sea men at my backdoor
I'm a broken down home, need a restore
Do me a favor, help me with some chores
Get that big 'ol hammer from my tool drawer

[chorus tease]
Non-stop. Hard-core.
Non-stop. Hard-core.
Non-stop. Hard-core.
Non-stop. Hard-core.

[verse 2]
This is as subtle as I can get:
I want you to make this big d**k wet
(Big d**k wet?) Yeah, big d**k wet
Squirting out my fluid like I'm a pool jet

That p**sy go stupid dumb
Lick you like a plate, I'll get every crumb
My cake starts to rise once you ask for some
Come and get a taste test, just dip your thumb

Yeah... it's a free, free sample
Say your d**k save lives, make me an example
Feel a little hungry when these eggs start to scramble
Stepping on my neck like my head's a f**king sandal
Once we end the night, my body's in shambles
D**k like a boomerang, curved at an angle
And I wouldn't have it any other way...

[verse 3]
[music stops...]
(spoken) "Bachelor number 4..
What is your favorite.. sexual experience?"
(audience oooo's)

Ass up, face down
Reverse birth, 'bout to crown
Booty clean, no brown
He digs in, go to town
(Aaaaa, AH!) And then he spins me around
S on my D like a plural noun

Screamin' so loud I took Jamie Lee's gig
P*bes are so long that it looks like a wig
Told him don't swallow but he still took a swig
Feel like my c*ck 'bout to snap like a twig

All these inches going down his throat
But he an expert, no croak, no choke
100G of protein, he slurpin' my yolks
And then suddenly, out I spoke:
[music stops] "Slap my ass like it told a G.I. Jane joke"
[Will Smith voice sample: "KEEP MY WIFE'S NAME, OUT YOUR F*CKIN'..."]

[verse 4]
...Mouth wide open, gargle his c*m like Listerine
Gets my tongue prepped and minty clean
For round 2, now it's me on top of you
Squeeze your stress balls 'till they're turning blue
Here comes the glue, hits the side of my cheek
Then dommy daddy decides that he is through
Turns me around like I'm a sex doll
Lays me flat up against the wall

Ooh, he rough and pushy
He do sign language while his hand up my p**sy
Puppet motherf**ker, we raise Jim Henson from the dead
I hear him cackle when you're giving me h*ad
He say deeper and stronger and longer
Every inch of that King Kong d*nger
Better destroy like a rocket launcher

[music stops]
(Now are you ready… for the big climax?.....
uhhh... uhhhhhh!!....... UHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!)

[chorus]
NON-STOP. Hard-core.
I, want you, on all fours.
I, drip drop, then downpour
(Put your legs in the air if you're wantin' more)
NON-STOP. Hard-core.
I, sub-mit, weak wh*re
My, wide h*le, all yours
(Got my legs in the air 'cause I'm wantin' more)

[post-chorus]
Oh we do it like it's never been done before
Unforbidden fruit, with a taste so fresh and pure
Under the weather, heard your c*m is the sweetest cure
Oh yes, I'm sure. I want it hardcore.
Oh yes, I'm sure. I want it hardcore.
Oh yes, I'm sure. I want it hardcore.
Oh yes, I'm sure. I want it hardcore.
Oh yes, I'm sure. I want it hardcore.

[Outro]
Make me f**kin' sore, I want it hardcore
(Ha-ha, ha-hardcore. Ha-ha, ha-hardcore.)
Make me f**kin' sore, I want it hardcore
(Ha-ha, ha-hardcore. Ha-ha, ha-hardcore.)
From the bed to the floor. Non-stop. Hard-core.

 

The amount of references here  WHEW lordt this is insanely genius

 

On 6/3/2022 at 1:09 PM, TruGemini said:

My cat jumped on my computer and completely ****** up my post i-

 

R3 - Fill

 

 

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Instrumental

 

 

 

(0:10)

 

Bringeth me the cup, come and get a fill

Vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard you playing games we just dominate the field

Come and get a taste, now tell me how it feel (how it feel, how it feel)

 

Tell me how it feel, sip on it a lil

Tell me how it feel, come and get a feel

Drink on it a lil, tell me how you feel

Tell me how you feel (how you feel, how you feel)

 

Come and get a a fill, vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard they playing games we just dominate the field

Let me get a taste, let me get a fill (get a fill, get a fill)

 

(0:39)

 

I go crazy with that T-I-T-O, I move mountains but ain't G-O-D, tho

I make it lit with that mix I bring, so, I'm here to party imma make a freak show

Niggas getting lit, **** we all, in the party thick

Ain't no room to move, smoke big, lotta salted rims

You know you a star, at the bar, imma call you brim

They would go to war, for the git, imma call you prim

***** this proper, I could make MOVES with this cranberry vodka

Drink stiff as ****, with the attitude of Blanca

Is it the one from Pose, or referring to the monster

Depends on the mood, ***** I bend all the rules

Don't **** with your accomplishments, you been been a fool 

I do not need your acknowledgement, you been been a tool

Don't see you as a teacher, ***** I been out of school, we don't need to be cool

 

Recap, seem to have these ******* mad as ****

They got a big toll, but ain't got a bag to fit

Everybody like Gemi, can you handle it

I been gritty, move quickly, they a fan of it

 

(1:26)

 

Bringeth me the cup, come and get a fill

Vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard you playing games we just dominate the field

Come and get a taste, now tell me how it feel (how it feel, how it feel)

 

Tell me how it feel, sip on it a lil

Tell me how it feel, come and get a feel

Drink on it a lil, tell me how you feel

Tell me how you feel (how you feel, how you feel)

 

Come and get a a fill, vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard they playing games we just dominate the field

Let me get a taste, let me get a fill (get a fill, get a fill)

 

(1:56)

 

*****, I'm a big deal, the **** I say hard to swallow it's like a big pill

Why you come to the function if you was that real, I don't need my connections to make a big deal

Look at the legs, then look at the face

He wanna come, up to the spot, put face in the place

He say he, good with coin, got green in the safe

I went and, gave him the paw, put chase on the case

Now you ******* with a freak *****, pretty not petite *****

I just got the T with San P, did you peep *****

Take me out to Ruth Chris, show me how you get lit

Nice car, black card, gon and let me keep it

Then I go, I'm the type that make a ***** reap what he sew

One trick pony yet they feening for a show, and I ain't even bragging I don't really mean to gloat

I'm trying teach you ******* how to do it for the low

 

(2:35)

 

For clarity, since I'm done with scamming I guess I should do some charity

They know that I'm a legend you should go and check my rarity

Kick it then I dip these hoes can't **** with my dexterity

 

(2:44)

 

Bringeth me the cup, come and get a fill

Vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard you playing games we just dominate the field

Come and get a taste, now tell me how it feel (how it feel, how it feel)

 

Tell me how it feel, sip on it a lil

Tell me how it feel, come and get a feel

Drink on it a lil, tell me how you feel

Tell me how you feel (how you feel, how you feel)

 

Come and get a a fill, vodka shoot you off to the future like Phil

Heard they playing games we just dominate the field

Let me get a taste, let me get a fill (get a fill, get a fill)

 

(3:12)

 

***** I'll be B-A-D, until I D-I-E, you want a T-I-P, don't be a P-A-B

Without a G-E-D, I'm getting U-S-D, flewed out to N-I-C, and it is not P-G

 

 

[/spoiler]

 

 

 

 

For clarity, since I'm done with scamming I guess I should do some charity
They know that I'm a legend you should go and check my rarity
Kick it then I dip these hoes can't **** with my dexterity

 

 Good gosh I love that line specifically but the entire song was so good ugh

 

On 6/3/2022 at 10:24 PM, Better Mistakes said:

For anyone who cares

You Have Changed Me

 

 

 

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(Verse 1)
I took a journey into the soul
I’d never felt so hurt or cold
I was the pipe in the piper’s hand
And you were the lead in the piper’s band
I didn’t care for the sweet denial 
Or writing what could be my title
But now I’ve made it to where I am 
‘Cause somehow this wasn’t too much 
Hope you know it was worth the growth that I have done
Don’t know how I survived to see another day
But if you do care, this is where I am now 

 

(Verse 2)
I’ve worn my anger across my face
I’ve housed the worst of thoughts for you 
It was so brutal; I was ****** up
You’ve never asked me how I’m doing
It’s for the best and now I know it 
You process nothing but I’ve processed all
Do you know how hard I clung on to all the maybes?
I found courage to learn from all of the mistakes
The storm has calmed, the glow is on its way
I hate you, this is where I am now

 

(Pre Chorus)
‘Cause ain’t it funny that you hurt me and yet
I’m the one here who’s changed 
And ain’t it funny how I could cleanse my sins 
But I’d still be your sin 

 

(Chorus)
You have changed me 
And you’re not even here but I feel you
Here under my skin, yeah 
I put myself in dangerous positions 
To rid myself of you from right under
My skin and my sleep, I blink and I see you
Guess you’ve dug in too deep ‘cause I can’t forget you

 

(Verse 3)
Now I wake up, I’m cold, in a bed that’s not mine
And I pick up my clothes, so what was their name?
I’ll chase the highs to a gateway to
A hell that you rule, whilst I play the fool
I keep lying in what I do 


(Pre Chorus)
And ain’t it funny that you hurt me, yet
I’m the one here who has changed 
And ain’t it funny how I could cleanse my sins 
But I still would not recognise me

 

(Chorus)
You have changed me 
And you’re not even here but I feel you
Here under my skin, yeah 
I put myself in dangerous positions 
To rid myself of you from right under
My skin and my sleep, I blink and I see you
Guess you’ve dug in deep ‘cause I can’t forget you

 

(Bridge)
I trust the process, yeah, this cycle has gave me new strings 
I thank emotions they’ve taught me many new things
I let them out, feel better now
Had to purge them all to live in now 
A brand new door has opened up

 

(Chorus)
You have changed me 
And you’re not even here but I feel you
Here under my skin, yeah 
I put myself in dangerous positions 
To rid myself of you from right under
My skin and my sleep, I blink and I see you
Guess you’ve dug in deep ‘cause I can’t forget you

 

(Outro)
So do you know how hard I clung on to all the maybes?
I found courage to learn from all of the mistakes, yeah
Now I’m not the wreck that gave in to hatred 
Now I thank you
‘Cause this is where I am now
 
 

 

My era's artwork so far:

           

 

There are so many lines that I enjoy from your lyrics but the prechoruses are INSANE  I love how you twist things around ngl

 

3 hours ago, fountain said:

 

 

@EpicSongFan - Illusion of Lovin’ You

 

I’m kinda getting Mariah from your song again, I can definitely hear her singing this! I think overall this is a really solid, nice song. The subject matter is pretty relatable, and I like the way you’ve tackled it; specifically you’ve used the challenge and the extra word count to tell a complete story, truly looking deep into the feelings of said illusion of love and then also progressing the story and completing it with the act of moving on at the end. If there is any advice that I would look to offer you it’s that maybe next round could be a switch up in terms of theme, I’ve really liked both of these last two songs but they’ve had similar themes and have looked at both sides of love, and I think in the future I’d like to see you explore other concepts again, not necessarily something similar to Scorching Memory again but I think you’ve tackled these two songs centering on love very well, and perhaps now we can see you take things in another direction next time, or even incorporating multiple themes into a song. At the same time though, you’ve executed these love related songs very well, so you could also stick to them if you wanted and continue exploring the area if you find unique ways to look at it, entirely up to you. Knowing what the next challenge is, I’m interested to see how you explore it. Overall a good job again this round!

 

 

Funny you mention Mariah because I actually had Taylor in mind when I was writing Illusion of Lovin' You  I agree with you that the extra word count really helped with the exposition and storyline. I think I'll try something new and see how things go for this upcoming round! Thank you so much for this review btw, it means a whole lot! 

[fountain]

10 minutes ago, OreGuy said:

let me submit something fun

 

[EpicSongFan]

1 hour ago, fountain said:

 

 

 

Judge's Tips:

Write what you know, write about your own life experiences and your own identity.

We are all unique in our own ways and we hope to see this shine in your songs, as already stated we don’t want a generic pride anthem but rather something that represents you and your own queerness.

It may help to share any additional information that you are willing and comfortable to about the background of your song while submitting your entry, especially on a personal round like this, to give us the best chance of resonating with your writing and your stories.

 

Woo this is gonna be interesting 

I already have an idea of what to write about but I'm not sure if I can pull if off well or not  Let's hope for the best

[Euterpe]

1 hour ago, Jackson said:

are there any cis straights here? not to out them but 

I am, so this challenge for me is… 

[Achilles.]

6 minutes ago, Euterpe said:

I am, so this challenge for me is… 

Looking forward to your You Need To Calm Down’d entry!

 

[fountain]

14 minutes ago, Euterpe said:

I am, so this challenge for me is… 

Oops, sorry but I look forward to seeing how you can interpret it from your perspective!

[fountain]

Back on my reviews and yup this was definitely the strongest round of submissions so far… like no doubt.
 

I will be popping my 10 cherry. 

 

[Euterpe]

7 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

Looking forward to your You Need To Calm Down’d entry!

 

 

Actually, I’m going to write a wedding song for my really close friend who is getting married (they’re both women). I contacted her about it, and she’s game for it. So I’m gonna twist this challenge around.

[Remmy]

4 hours ago, fountain said:

 

@Remmy - Nonstop Hardcore

 

NOT THE NSFW GIF!!!!!

I think it’s tricky with songs like this, when every line is a reiteration of the same point (the point being: “I want sex”) is can kind of get boring at a point, the shock wears off, and I think this is especially the case when you’ve already submitted another entry in the same vein. But you… you little *****… you are just a poet, and somehow you pull it off, because I don’t know how you come up with this stuff, but it is genius. This is a viral hit waiting to happen (also probably viral in other ways but perhaps let’s not dwell on that) and, yup, you’ve done it again. You had me laughing again at certain lines, specific honourable mentions are “reverse birth, bout to brown, ass clean, no brown” and “he do sign language while his hand up my *****”, I mean that really speaks to the soul and the important issues, right? I don’t really know what more to say about this but… your mind… your depraved, genius mind.

 You spilled on the first part, which is why I had to switch it up for round 2.. and YUP this mind is extremely depraved and rotten, has been for over a decade now!

52 minutes ago, EpicSongFan said:

The amount of references here  WHEW lordt this is insanely genius

15 minutes ago, Euterpe said:

I am, so this challenge for me is… 

You are so brave!!!!

[Remmy]

Love a LGBTQ+ round  Although my bi brain is once again deciding which side to go with nnnn, at this point I feel like it's a good idea to stick with the pattern I've established (NSFW - SFW - NSFW - so next would be SFW )

 

Also to celebrate here's a lil tracklist I came up with like 2 years ago~

 

'PRIDE YEAR'

1. PRIDE YEAR
2. Comin' Out
3. Party In HELL
4. Harmless Fun (Interlude)
5. Don't Apologize for Crying
6. Straight Men Syndrome
7. Bi (Interlude)
8. Out of Body
9. Lucky Arrow
10. Intimate
11. It Has to Get Better (Interlude)
12. Pulse
13. Father Daughter Dance
14. You're the One (Every Morning)
15. Threat of Explosion

 

[fountain]

7 minutes ago, Euterpe said:

 

Actually, I’m going to write a wedding song for my really close friend who is getting married (they’re both women). I contacted her about it, and she’s game for it. So I’m gonna twist this challenge around.

Awww this is so cute  looking forward to it

[Achilles.]

Wait I think I have a title and concept. Let me think on it. 

[fountain]

How am I meant to score you all when I like these entries so much

[fountain]

16 minutes ago, Remmy said:

Love a LGBTQ+ round  Although my bi brain is once again deciding which side to go with nnnn

[Achilles.]

15 minutes ago, fountain said:

How am I meant to score you all when I like these entries so much

 

 

 

Spoiler

ATRL forcing me to use this drag race gif because the Pose gif I wanted to use only had an http link and wouldn’t embed.  

 

[Achilles.]

My mind right now is trying to channel another Madonna song while using a title that riffs on a song by one of her peers.  

Edited June 4, 2022 by Achilles.

[fountain]

11 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

My mind right now is trying to channel another Madonna song while using a title that riffs on a song by one of her peers.  

Not your Die This Way era

[Hug]

I just realized I had an idea for a song floating around in my head for a while and the pride challenge is the perfect time to visit this idea and expand ??

[fountain]

2 minutes ago, Hug said:

I just realized I had an idea for a song floating around in my head for a while and the pride challenge is the perfect time to visit this idea and expand ??

A win 

[Achilles.]

The challenge: write a personal song about your gay experience

 

The mind of a virgin: starts writing a song about becoming a **** to cope with daddy issues, crippling insecurity and low self worth