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[Achilles.]

15 minutes ago, fountain said:

Interesting  tbh just based off the sound of it I feel like it still could’ve fit Taylor since she sometimes tends to do those storytelling songs that are removed from herself, but I understand the switch to Faith gives it more of a personal layer, looking forward to reading it 

Yeah, I think if I had written it a bit differently it still could’ve worked as a Taylor song. But it’s from a first person POV and Taylor singing from the perspective of a middle aged woman strains credulity a little bit. Besides that, it’s a natural evolution of the sort of “domestic storytelling” songs Faith has recorded throughout her career so it just seems to fit. It didn’t help matters that Taylor has such distinct elements to her songwriting (double meanings, double choruses, etc) and the song doesn’t really have them. 
 

My original Taylor concept was a song about a woman who found out her husband was cheating on her with a man (I’ve been watching The Staircase lol), but it just didn’t come together. I also briefly entertained writing a pop bop called “Karma” but it didn’t speak to me. 

Edited May 26, 2022 by Achilles.

[Julia Fox]

Im so excited to share my song but I will wait for the end of deadline tbh lol would love to see some thoughts by my writer mates here x

[Into The Void]

i have nothing lol

[Achilles.]

I think I’m finished.  

[fountain]

4 minutes ago, Insanity said:

i have nothing lol

I thought had some stuff before?  There’s still 5 hours left, so there’s time, but if you can’t submit then don’t worry. There’s always next round. 

[Into The Void]

i submitted what i had

[Into The Void]

2 minutes ago, fountain said:

I thought had some stuff before?  There’s still 5 hours left, so there’s time, but if you can’t submit then don’t worry. There’s always next round. 

i meant nothing good  

[TruGemini]

@fountain Is it too late to switch artists? 

[Legend E]

13 minutes ago, Insanity said:

i meant nothing good  

same, systur

[fountain]

2 minutes ago, TruGemini said:

@fountain Is it too late to switch artists? 

No, feel free to! 

[fountain]

16 minutes ago, Insanity said:

i meant nothing good  

 

18 minutes ago, Insanity said:

i submitted what i had

Oops  well it’s better than nothing! Thank you for trying and submitting at least. I hope the next round is a better time for you. 

[TruGemini]

2 minutes ago, fountain said:

No, feel free to! 

Okay cool, just came up with a completely different concept and Jeremih doesn't fit at all 

 

1. Achilles. - Faith Hill

2. luckystrike - Troye Sivan

3. Astro - Nicki Minaj

4. Legend E - Kelly Clarkson

5. Hanami-Blossom - SISTAR

6. GentleDance - Fiona Apple

7. Jessie - Prince

8. Augmented - Lizzo

9. JoeAg - Kate Bush

10. ughgabriel - Zola Jesus

11. Hug - Xydo

12. OreGuy - Celine Dion

13. EpicSongFan - Mariah Carey

14. TruGemini - City Girls
15. ☆lex - Bruce Springsteen

16. Arrows - Carly Rae Jepsen

17. Better Mistakes - Tove Lo

18. RobDeWittBukater - Britney Spears

19. boubour - Jaden Smith
20. DatChickDoe - LeAnn Rimes

21. Julia Fox - Lana Del Rey

22. hurricane326 - Joni Mitchell

23. Euterpe - Evanescence

24. Obsession - Miley Cyrus

25. Remmy - Sigrid

26. Lorenzo22 - Taylor Swift

27. 8thPrince - Yoasobi
28. Insanity - David Archuleta

29. D e v o n - Remi Wolf

30. Prisoner - Pink Floyd
31. mxtthewdelrey - Nessa Barrett

32. Tylerbv - Carrie Underwood

33. Jackson - Elio

[fountain]

17 minutes ago, TruGemini said:

Okay cool, just came up with a completely different concept and Jeremih doesn't fit at all 

 

1. Achilles. - Faith Hill

2. luckystrike - Troye Sivan

3. Astro - Nicki Minaj

4. Legend E - Kelly Clarkson

5. Hanami-Blossom - SISTAR

6. GentleDance - Fiona Apple

7. Jessie - Prince

8. Augmented - Lizzo

9. JoeAg - Kate Bush

10. ughgabriel - Zola Jesus

11. Hug - Xydo

12. OreGuy - Celine Dion

13. EpicSongFan - Mariah Carey

14. TruGemini - City Girls
15. ☆lex - Bruce Springsteen

16. Arrows - Carly Rae Jepsen

17. Better Mistakes - Tove Lo

18. RobDeWittBukater - Britney Spears

19. boubour - Jaden Smith
20. DatChickDoe - LeAnn Rimes

21. Julia Fox - Lana Del Rey

22. hurricane326 - Joni Mitchell

23. Euterpe - Evanescence

24. Obsession - Miley Cyrus

25. Remmy - Sigrid

26. Lorenzo22 - Taylor Swift

27. 8thPrince - Yoasobi
28. Insanity - David Archuleta

29. D e v o n - Remi Wolf

30. Prisoner - Pink Floyd
31. mxtthewdelrey - Nessa Barrett

32. Tylerbv - Carrie Underwood

33. Jackson - Elio

Interesting pick  I look forward to seeing it

[Tylerbv]

3 hours ago, Achilles. said:

I love / hate when you start writing one thing and then it turns into another. What started as an effort to write about empty nest syndrome is now a song about a woman who only stayed in an unhappy marriage “for the kids” and is now on the cusp of divorce because they’re all grown up. It’s wild how a song can change completely midway through the writing process. 
 

Needless to say, recent graduate Dr. Swift will not be recording a song about having college aged children, so I’m changing my artist to Faith Hill. 

Not a better writer than me doing a storytelling song as well RIP

[Julia Fox]

My song screams Lana's COTCC meets Norman ******* Rockwell so I’m ready to get acclaimed 

[TruGemini]

54 minutes ago, fountain said:

Interesting pick  I look forward to seeing it

Not to be wishy washy but I'm going back to Jeremih, I had like 3 songs that fit the City Girls style perfectly but I keep getting stuck on the second verse  maybe I'll use them in the future but they definitely need some heavy tweaking.

 

1. Achilles. - Faith Hill

2. luckystrike - Troye Sivan

3. Astro - Nicki Minaj

4. Legend E - Kelly Clarkson

5. Hanami-Blossom - SISTAR

6. GentleDance - Fiona Apple

7. Jessie - Prince

8. Augmented - Lizzo

9. JoeAg - Kate Bush

10. ughgabriel - Zola Jesus

11. Hug - Xydo

12. OreGuy - Celine Dion

13. EpicSongFan - Mariah Carey

14. TruGemini - Jeremih
15. ☆lex - Bruce Springsteen

16. Arrows - Carly Rae Jepsen

17. Better Mistakes - Tove Lo

18. RobDeWittBukater - Britney Spears

19. boubour - Jaden Smith
20. DatChickDoe - LeAnn Rimes

21. Julia Fox - Lana Del Rey

22. hurricane326 - Joni Mitchell

23. Euterpe - Evanescence

24. Obsession - Miley Cyrus

25. Remmy - Sigrid

26. Lorenzo22 - Taylor Swift

27. 8thPrince - Yoasobi
28. Insanity - David Archuleta

29. D e v o n - Remi Wolf

30. Prisoner - Pink Floyd
31. mxtthewdelrey - Nessa Barrett

32. Tylerbv - Carrie Underwood

33. Jackson - Elio

[fountain]

2 minutes ago, TruGemini said:

Not to be wishy washy but I'm going back to Jeremih, I had like 3 songs that fit the City Girls style perfectly but I keep getting stuck on the second verse  maybe I'll use them in the future but they definitely need some heavy tweaking.

 no problem, switch as much as you like 

[mxtthewdelrey]

submitted !! i had a lot of fun writing this one. feels really good to write a pop song with a big shout-along chorus. i have such a good topline idea for it

[Julia Fox]

Can I post my entire song right after the deadline ends?

[fountain]

9 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said:

submitted !! i had a lot of fun writing this one. feels really good to write a pop song with a big shout-along chorus. i have such a good topline idea for it

th3nks f3r submi33ing 

[fountain]

8 minutes ago, Julia Fox said:

Can I post my entire song right after the deadline ends?

You can post your song whenever you want queen 

[mxtthewdelrey]

3 minutes ago, fountain said:

th3nks f3r submi33ing 

perched for the rahsulhties 

 

[fountain]

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

perched for the rahsulhties 

 

the one and only  completely original never been done before not afraid to reference itself and or not reference itself

[mxtthewdelrey]

Just now, fountain said:

the one and only  completely original never been done before not afraid to reference itself and or not reference itself

speaking of referencing myself when is the "write a song based on Legmeat 3THREE" round coming

[fountain]

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

speaking of referencing myself when is the "write a song based on Legmeat 3THREE" round coming

when the crossover Golden Legmeat Island SPF Factor 3THREE happens