Hanami-Blossom Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 (edited) 8 minutes ago, fountain said: Forgive me if when reading your song this is all I can picture now You created another new reality, and it’s one in which I only see this image This is exactly why I wanted to create fantasy worlds (and not just the cliche elves and witches), it's so fun! The copyright issue lawsuit for the images depicted in this gif will be the case of the light-year millenium! I better start speaking to the creator of this gif/TikTok so that we can settle it like mature honey adults. Edited May 16, 2022 by Hanami-Blossom
Prisoner Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 Writing a cute little song. I'll try not to do anything big for this one, just something to get me back into creative mode
RobDeWittBukater Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 18 hours ago, fountain said: I think the premise of the song being not related to elements is fine, if you just want to incorporate elements through imagery there’s no issue with this as long as the entry overall embodies elements in some way, even if it’s just imagery, so I wouldn’t doubt your draft because of that. There is still a lot of time left, it’s only been a day since the round begun so tbh you could keep working on your current draft and complete it, and maybe decide then if you want to change it or not? As it is there’s still plenty of opportunity, so don’t feel like you have to rush to start something new. I would personally say to maybe sit with what you have a little longer, flesh it out a bit more if you can and if you are still in doubt after that you could then explore other options I think. While some people have already submitted, there’s absolutely nothing wrong with using all the time given (it’s moreso recommended to, really) thank you so much for your sweet response I'm gonna take this advice to heart and continue working on my draft! However, I have a back-up concept ready just in case
Hug Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 Not me already having a dream about this game...or well, a nightmare since I dreamed that I tanked so hard that I skipped reviews and just flat out got eliminated. Clearly feeling very confident about my submission!
Remmy Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 4 hours ago, fountain said: Our impact! they saw the thread at the top of the ATRL charts, read through it a bit & said okay we have our next movie!
Better Mistakes Posted May 16, 2022 Posted May 16, 2022 Welcome to my COLD SUMMER I’ve submitted but in hindsight maybe I should’ve submitted the title track, cold summer. Still, you’ve been sent the lead single, Plastic Heart ? I know we’re nothing but a little bit of pleasure I know you’re ******* other people while I’m waiting for you here Yeah, I know I went for something superficial I’ve got a plastic heart but it’s bleeding now ?
fountain Posted May 16, 2022 Author Posted May 16, 2022 5 hours ago, Prisoner said: Writing a cute little song. I'll try not to do anything big for this one, just something to get me back into creative mode A submission is a submission, here for it regardless. Plus actually you never know, simplicity could pay off. 4 hours ago, RobDeWittBukater said: thank you so much for your sweet response I'm gonna take this advice to heart and continue working on my draft! However, I have a back-up concept ready just in case Any time! I think this is a good way to go about. Plus if you don’t use the other concept, you could always try and rework for it a future challenge. 3 hours ago, Hug said: Not me already having a dream about this game...or well, a nightmare since I dreamed that I tanked so hard that I skipped reviews and just flat out got eliminated. Clearly feeling very confident about my submission! Okay but getting eliminated from a game that explicitly has no eliminations? That takes some skill tbh. Definitely an achievement. 51 minutes ago, Remmy said: they saw the thread at the top of the ATRL charts, read through it a bit & said okay we have our next movie! Hollywood stays stealing ideas! (no shade to Pixar they are cute, but I’m pretty certain we’ll see some better concepts come from this round) 1 minute ago, Better Mistakes said: Welcome to my COLD SUMMER I’ve submitted but in hindsight maybe I should’ve submitted the title track, cold summer. Still, you’ve been sent the lead single, Plastic Heart ? I know we’re nothing but a little bit of pleasure I know you’re ******* other people while I’m waiting for you here Yeah, I know I went for something superficial I’ve got a plastic heart but it’s bleeding now ? Thank you for submitting! If you ever actually do want to resubmit, you always can. Just use the Google Form again to send it in and add a note saying that this is your new entry! (Plus, if you submit your entry as a link to a Google Doc with it written there, you can always easily edit it that way too)
ughgabriel Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 Prisoner and Hug joining To me, the opening line is always the most difficult that’s where I usually struggle the most but everything tends to flow well from there, so I’m taking my time :3 If y’all want to share your songs on the thread and the hosts/judges are okay with it I’d love to read the entries as well <3
Julia Fox Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 Holy Ground by Julia Fox snippet 2 there’s a new ground that we reached here blooming like flowers when the spring comes in like a nectar, the sun, water and your breeze you are all I need
fountain Posted May 17, 2022 Author Posted May 17, 2022 51 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Prisoner and Hug joining To me, the opening line is always the most difficult that’s where I usually struggle the most but everything tends to flow well from there, so I’m taking my time :3 If y’all want to share your songs on the thread and the hosts/judges are okay with it I’d love to read the entries as well <3 That’s definitely not an issue, actually I’d encourage as much sharing as you are all comfortable with. The best part of these games is the sense of community and you can really learn just as much, if not more, from your fellow players. So share away!
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 (edited) Honey is honestly fascinating, it slays. The way it doesn't expire and is antimicrobial. Edited May 17, 2022 by Hanami-Blossom
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 The nectar inside my physicality Bubbles and burns to love's endless heat Crystals are born sparkling in my honeyed eyes Light pools where bitterness used to breathe Breathe, breathe, breathe
GentleDance Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 (edited) 24 minutes ago, Astro said: Introducing, Josslyn An upcoming alternative/folk singer-songwriter I'm a hypochondriac, say we're in pain even when we're happy, She's giving Madison Beer and Lana OT : Done writing but I'm not satisfied, I'll try again with another theme Edited May 17, 2022 by GentleDance
GentleDance Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 (edited) I used to think a flight and the big city Might help with my misery Well, in more accurate forecasts Weathermen on that huge TV buzzing about some winds that would not change me chicken- airing on the side of melancholy SCRAPPED Edited May 17, 2022 by GentleDance
Hanami-Blossom Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 57 minutes ago, Hanami-Blossom said: The way my song transformed from an emotional song with a sensual vibe to a full on sexual bop It makes perfect sense now than it did before Actually never mind. My song serves both, after reading it again. There are endless ways to interpret it. I like when my songs leave themselves open to interpretation!
fountain Posted May 17, 2022 Author Posted May 17, 2022 3 hours ago, Julia Fox said: Holy Ground by Julia Fox snippet 2 there’s a new ground that we reached here blooming like flowers when the spring comes in like a nectar, the sun, water and your breeze you are all I need 3 hours ago, hurricane326 said: His words are coming slowly I hold his frigid hand Tonight I will come to feel The warmth of loving comfort grow as cold as sinking steel 2 hours ago, Hanami-Blossom said: The nectar inside my physicality Bubbles and burns to love's endless heat Crystals are born sparkling in my honeyed eyes Light pools where bitterness used to breathe Breathe, breathe, breathe 2 hours ago, Astro said: Introducing, Josslyn An upcoming alternative/folk singer-songwriter I'm a hypochondriac, say we're in pain even when we're happy, Loving these promo campaigns Who’s gonna book top spot on TTH?
fountain Posted May 17, 2022 Author Posted May 17, 2022 1 hour ago, Hanami-Blossom said: Actually never mind. My song serves both, after reading it again. There are endless ways to interpret it. I like when my songs leave themselves open to interpretation! Your HONEYPOP could mean anything 40 minutes ago, Astro said: the way its literally my face but with a female filter slapped on someone else, my madison del rey SERVE Wait not this serve
fountain Posted May 17, 2022 Author Posted May 17, 2022 1 hour ago, GentleDance said: I used to think a flight and the big city Might help with my misery Well, in more accurate forecasts Weathermen on that huge TV buzzing about some winds that would not change me chicken- airing on the side of melancholy SCRAPPED 16 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Still waiting for inspiration to strike. With still 3 days left (well, a few minutes under), I wouldn’t worry about it just yet honestly. There’s still plenty of time to settle on an idea, so don’t fret
Aurora Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 7 submissions already, with just under 3 days left to submit! Did someone say preliminary review time?
Aurora Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 5 hours ago, Achilles. said: Still waiting for inspiration to strike. Do you know what else strikes? Lightning. Through the air.
EpicSongFan Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 I'm finally done with my lyrics but I'm tempted to accompany the lyrics with a graphic before I submit it Also, I've never written lyrics like these before so it'll be interesting to see how everyone thinks of it later on
Aurora Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 @Julia Fox I am unable to access your doc. Please enable permissions for anyone with the link to view, no need to resubmit!
Aurora Posted May 17, 2022 Posted May 17, 2022 41 minutes ago, EpicSongFan said: I'm finally done with my lyrics but I'm tempted to accompany the lyrics with a graphic before I submit it Also, I've never written lyrics like these before so it'll be interesting to see how everyone thinks of it later on Take your time, there's still almost three days on the counter! Looking forward to it.
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