thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 Just now, minho said: everyone :minho: this thread is now just me talking to myself ok sounds cute!
ughgabriel Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 33 minutes ago, thecptz said: who apart from auburn quit Astro and Overprotected ?
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 hi i'm back and i'm the first one to post crits! WHEW! what in the WORLDDDDD gasppp Spoiler mld okay this is… well… unexpected. all the graphics i’ve seen in your entry, i’d like to say that i’m shook. the fact that you have a feud with facebook moms from songpop, literally a mess. also, ‘The bitch claims she is deaf but will think I am being rude as **** to people when I'm complaining about trivia apps over Discord’, dragged @Dessy. this is actually.. i have no words. i mean you’re so brave for sharing this! and the song choices are great. i think it maybe my favourite entry of yours? hehehehe. impressive. gay rat divorce ok first of all, melanie martinez is innocence, love her. also, i just googled houndstooth, cute! OMGGGGG LIKE THIS IS MY FAVORITE ENTRY OF YOURS FOR SURE. might be my favorite entry from this whole game tbh. i’m CRYING, i’m HOLLERING. the creativity in this. the PODCAST omg. i’ve listened to the whole 7 minutes. the sia lyrics PLS. do you record all of this by yourself? like is everything in this yours? i love you so much. i know this doesn’t make sense but i’m so happy listening to this. love the theme song and the halsey’s voice is on point. i mean this is such a slayage and you did that. hug do you think madison bray might be embarrassed to see what she did when she was 9 years old? hmm. this entry is so cringe fsfsfes LMAO i like it a lot. who even let these girls make music??? this is iconic, this is BAD. but its also a great entry. whew hug did that. luckystrike pls you held an award this is a cute entry tbh. its not the BEST but i don’t think its bad either. the things that are bad are maybe these songs and you lol x dessy gasp. the plot twist. is this story real? imma think that its real cause it sounds real in my head. so that is the positive for you and your entry. the bed intruder song tho kii. the switch from ALL HATE to ALL LOVE in the last song kinda ruined it for me a bit :/ you suppose to HATE not half hate half love~ spread online negativity PLS. anyway, cute work clue well this is confusing. idk what to critique. your formatting is always on-point. its so clean i love it. the only thing is maybe i’m dumb but this is confusing lmao. rotunda oh wow :bagels: i feel very attacked!!! yes hate straight men. they’re trash and they make gays fall in love with them. not like i’ve experienced it!!! i just wanna say i hate them. the POET :worship1: this is great. the idea itself may not be that creative or out of the box but i love the poems <3 and the song choices told me a story. so, great job rotunda! pinkbox furries poor furries. i think @Hug loves furries but idk maybe he IS one of furries. well this is cute. i don’t have anything to say much. ur a troll, luv you <3 ughgabriel AFAFADFD SFSDFDS the demi cameo!! this is SO MESSY i love it the flash mob, the STORY, the whole video tbh. you really did THAT and i don’t know what else to say. maybe i should just say whatever i thought while watching the video. oh the conversation with vajayjay CACKLED. ALL HATE! @MusicLoverDude @Gay Rat Divorce @Hug @luckystrike @Dessy @clue @Rotunda @PinkBox @ughgabriel x
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 40 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Astro and Overprotected ? rip ?
MusicLoverDude Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 @thecptz I'm cackling I must have been on a hyperactive sugar crush because that was honestly the fastest I sent in an entry. I basically just went with dragging the hell out of myself because it's more original than trying to come up with 3 songs you hate with a cohesive theme.
ughgabriel Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 Thank you @thecptz I’ll definitely consider casting you as the vagina for the broadway musical
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 1 minute ago, ughgabriel said: Thank you @thecptz I’ll definitely consider casting you as the vagina for the broadway musical omg thank YOUUUU
ughgabriel Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 While @Gay Rat Divorce entry is absolutely hilarious and just overall genius (Sia’s bit is my favorite) Spoiler It is his Houndstooth voice that I want to listen while getting pounded by him; he has such a seductive tone and I would easily dilate by just hearing it ? When he shushed Melanie ? Need me a verbal dominant TOP like that to put me in my place ?
Hug Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 You are no longer banned from the panel @thecptz ? I bet all these girls (except the last two because they were trolling) have some form of regret now
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 32 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: While @Gay Rat Divorce entry is absolutely hilarious and just overall genius (Sia’s bit is my favorite) Reveal hidden contents It is his Houndstooth voice that I want to listen while getting pounded by him; he has such a seductive tone and I would easily dilate by just hearing it ? When he shushed Melanie ? Need me a verbal dominant TOP like that to put me in my place ? omg ikr i'm SHAKING
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 20 minutes ago, Hug said: You are no longer banned from the panel @thecptz ? I bet all these girls (except the last two because they were trolling) have some form of regret now what happened
Hug Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 Just now, thecptz said: what happened I banned you from the panel for not sending critiques last week
thecptz Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 2 minutes ago, Hug said: I banned you from the panel for not sending critiques last week ty for unbanning me ATRL moderator ?
Hug Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 1 minute ago, thecptz said: ty for unbanning me ATRL moderator ? You're welcome
Kelp Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 Thank you Z ? I’m so glad you enjoyed it!!! 2 hours ago, ughgabriel said: While @Gay Rat Divorce entry is absolutely hilarious and just overall genius (Sia’s bit is my favorite) Hide contents It is his Houndstooth voice that I want to listen while getting pounded by him; he has such a seductive tone and I would easily dilate by just hearing it ? When he shushed Melanie ? Need me a verbal dominant TOP like that to put me in my place ? 2 hours ago, thecptz said: omg ikr i'm SHAKING I know we shouldn’t be gathering in large groups but I still think it would be a good idea if you two went to church
PinkBox Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 5 hours ago, ughgabriel said: While @Gay Rat Divorce entry is absolutely hilarious and just overall genius (Sia’s bit is my favorite) Hide contents It is his Houndstooth voice that I want to listen while getting pounded by him; he has such a seductive tone and I would easily dilate by just hearing it ? When he shushed Melanie ? Need me a verbal dominant TOP like that to put me in my place ? WEEE
smholiv Posted July 18, 2020 Author Posted July 18, 2020 Spoiler MLD You took a risk and... it paid off a LOT. This was not what I was expecting from this round at all but it is such a cool interpretation of the theme? The songs are pretty good overall too, especially bad guy which fit perfectly. The first song maybe less so, but overall I think you took this theme and made it your own which I love. gay rat divorce The consistent effort we- Obviously another strong entry of yours. Very creative and like... yeah this voice is a messy trend Halsey was the strongest part of this entry for me, the other two still fit but I think I was most interested in that portion hug The talk show format is ... an interesting idea I guess, though not as compelling as other entries of yours. At least the theme/concept is super unique and the songs you chose were bops luckystrike The entire Grammys, when will we? Having a red carpet and everything was very fun! I liked the idea of presenting awards to the worst songs etc. This was a solid entry. dessy You said let me DRAG minho's ideas. This entry was a scream, but I think it could've been stronger with its theme clue A little out of the box, but that's not a surprise. It was a fine entry, I thought your focus was interesting, but it felt a bit jarring compared with the theme. rotunda The poetry, the story telling... this was great! I didn't think of this route, but I like that you chose it. I thought your songs were quite well chosen, and overall you made your own unique spin. pinkbox cute entry for a bully. the With You cover at the end?? sldjfs. This was a comical approach which is admittedly what I was looking for. ughgabriel Very interesting approach, and no i am not surprised that there's a whole video in this entry. The highlight was the songs for me, they fit your story perfectly. But I can't shake the feeling that I unwillingly watched an episode of Big Mouth @MusicLoverDude @Gay Rat Divorce @Hug @luckystrike @Dessy @clue @Rotunda @PinkBox @ughgabriel
smholiv Posted July 18, 2020 Author Posted July 18, 2020 Oh also if you haven't already please PM me your song for next round! Keep in mind it will be used in some way for the theme.... so you may want to be strategic with it In fact if you want to send a second song you can do that as well
clue Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 I got dragged. I'm over! [2] Wasn't super confident to begin with, this was the most difficult round for me yet for sure.
Henry Posted July 18, 2020 Posted July 18, 2020 Spoiler MLD - f let it all out sir! I’ve always enjoyed your entries but this is your best yet. A very...interesting read! But girl not you using internet explorer when chrome is pinned right there?? Hopefully that was just for extra comedic effect but yes werk in those pics king! gay rat divorce - Omg not a podcast ilysm. I LOLed multiple times this was so much fun. The creativity keeps jumping out wow. Loved that you also did a document and not just link to the podcast because when I read books I also listen along to the audio book and this just reminded me of that, random but yes just wanted to say that ya Hug - plss not the songs lowkey being bops. Anyways I liked the talk show format but I felt like the bit with Madison was a bit stronger than the other two which took me out of it a little? Still enjoyed this a lot tho but my rip eyes with this blue text on the white background!! Lucky - Girl I saw 26 pages and said WHAT And not Gabbie Hanna fdfkd didn’t know she sang or whatever. This was super fun! First time hearing Cattitude and dessy - highkey don’t know wtf you were saying at some parts but CTFU! ????What the HELL?????? ? We hate hate as well but idk this was a bit too messy for me ff. Enjoyed it tho! clue - hmm not my fav entry from you but it was fine. I guess this entry didn’t click with me in the way your others did idk. Sucks that gap did that tho, yeezy ugly af. rotunda - oh this was nice! I’m still at the first stage (without the self-hatred) so hopefully we have a better experience :grimes: We love a poet tho, loved the poems! Songs were good as well. pinkbox - ???????????????????????????die die die!!! Anyway I fully support you uwu ughgabriel - ???? I SCREAMED when lips are moving started playing jdfjdf. The flash mob????!??! ????????This was super fun and I enjoyed every second of it. ???? @MusicLoverDude @Gay Rat Divorce @Hug @luckystrike @Dessy @clue @Rotunda @PinkBox @ughgabriel
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