swiftie13 Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: Luckily you were eliminated a long time ago so it's not something that should concern you not when I deliberately dropped off and would have probably remained had I turned in an entry that wasn't purposefully bad
funnellegs Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 Thanks for the review Pears! Looking forward to results
swiftie13 Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 13 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: @Corsola - This is one of your better entries. You are definitely improving a lot. I totally see the Melanie Martinez comparison with the "mommy" childlike manner, but it isn't anything that takes away from the entry. The main thing I would say that is, I did feel like the metaphors and imagery at times actually took away from the entry - for example, the second verse was lacking in these and felt more like your true thoughts, but in the bridge you went back to them with lines about the volcano and sea - while I get why you went for these, I actually preferred it when you didn't - it felt like a much more natural expression of your emotion. kii at all of us mentioning Melanie
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 15, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted February 15, 2017 being #9 isn't too bad
Jackson Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 I thot I was dragged but after reading the others I think I did well with pears too
Jackson Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 2 minutes ago, jpow said: being #9 isn't too bad That's what I got in S7! even though i dropped out
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 4 minutes ago, Jackson said: I thot I was dragged but after reading the others I think I did well with pears too You got a 6. I don't think there was a song I can wholly say I liked this week.
Hug Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 Pear, where is your entry? I see you reviewed that entry, but I never saw it anywhere. I want to judge it, too.
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 im excited to do results to an empty crowd
Jackson Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 Apparently I (and hunter?) was the only person that really liked the contrast between the verse and the chorus
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 3 minutes ago, Hug said: Pear, where is your entry? I see you reviewed that entry, but I never saw it anywhere. I want to judge it, too. I didn't actually write an entry, I just posted my S8 entry "Bottle" that @Jackson decided to copy this round. It's here, anyway: Posted Feb 12, 17 can't wait for your review
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 The Free Challenge results! The results have been calculated. 9 songs were written, 5 sets of judging took place, one judge died (RIP Cupid), and now a winner has been calculated. Alongside this winner, we have those less fortunate. Kunst sadly had to drop out, and 1 other contestant will be eliminated. This round saw scores spanning from 8.4, to 4.8. (weird) Best of luck everybody. The first safe contestant will be posted next. @ughgabriel @Aurora @Jackson @Corsola @8thPrince @ceremonials @SaintWest @funnellegs @jpow
8thPrince Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 I REALLY hate how NuTrl's notifications instantly turn your music off, even if your phone is locked.
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 note to self tag @8thPrince purposefully to turn his music off
Jackson Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 1 minute ago, 8thPrince said: I REALLY hate how NuTrl's notifications instantly turn your music off, even if your phone is locked. you can turn off notification sounds
Hug Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 @keshaspearsxo - Bottle "pieces" and "fragments" are like the same thing!! I also think you omitted some details for meter's sake. (10/10)
fountain Posted February 15, 2017 Author Posted February 15, 2017 The Free Challenge results! The first safe contestant, at #5, is.... Spoiler Aurora
funnellegs Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 I feel so anxious about these results...
8thPrince Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: @8thPrince WHATHCA LISTENING TO?? Excuse Me by SlayOA
Jackson Posted February 15, 2017 Posted February 15, 2017 OOTW is playing at work and I'm ready to BTGOG myself
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