ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted August 30, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted August 30, 2017 7 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Serving Katy Perry here e? mess no. what song does it remind you of?
ceremonials Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 5 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: Not @ceremonials calling my song untitled Your title wasn't in the doc, blame @Jackson
MattyTacos Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: Your title wasn't in the doc, blame @Jackson Fatson had the nerve to include my title in his reviews but not the docs? Add it skinny
mxtthewdelrey Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 On 8/28/2017 at 9:55 PM, ceremonials said: @mxtthewdelrey, “A Little Hope” Okay so some of these rhymes felt a little elementary I guess, but never lost their mxtt charm. There’s an obligatory mxtt odd couplet - for me, it was the soap one. Sure most people smell like soap I guess, but it’s a weird thing to state. It still feels for the most part could be a PC song, which adds to its personality for me. I also love the personal details that add virtually nothing to the narrative - I don’t know why they’re significant, but it shows that it’s personal to you, which I appreciate. The narrative is nice, albeit nothing groundbreaking, but nice, mainly cause I feel like it’s something happening in your life right now, so it has emotional draw. In a way all songs have that feeling but you can never really tell unless there are details like these. You’re a very unique writer, but you also know your limitations, which is what sets you apart from the average players, as well as your unique voice in writing. It’s really quite admirable how unapologetic you are, and I hope to see more of that this season. Favorite Couplet: "Part of me thinks I won't see you again / Life would be so much easier without f***ing men" This is like, my favourite review I've ever read thank you so so so so so much
FCKNAmbrosia Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Omg guys I'm gonna flop so hard this round because I have to write my song in like max 3 hours.
Jackson Posted August 30, 2017 Author Posted August 30, 2017 30 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: Fatson had the nerve to include my title in his reviews but not the docs? Add it skinny Not when R1 ended like 4 days ago
ceremonials Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 I promise the rest of my reviews are coming tonight i have 8 left, I believe.
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 37 minutes ago, Tsareena said: mess no. what song does it remind you of? Legendary Lovers of course! Take me down to the river Underneath the blood orange sun But I know you are gonna do Gaga more than Katy, no?
MattyTacos Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 4 minutes ago, Jackson said: Not when R1 ended like 4 days ago Yet we're still waiting on reviews
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted August 30, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted August 30, 2017 3 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Legendary Lovers of course! Take me down to the river Underneath the blood orange sun But I know you are gonna do Gaga more than Katy, no? Beautiful song but it's neither for me. My style is a lot more basic and simple tbh
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 3 minutes ago, Tsareena said: Beautiful song but it's neither for me. My style is a lot more basic and simple tbh But you'll be using Spoiler Bloody Mary for your inspiration this round, right?
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted August 30, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted August 30, 2017 1 minute ago, KatyCatPH said: But you'll be using Reveal hidden contents Bloody Mary for your inspiration this round, right? I actually went with something different Bloody mary was my second choice
fountain Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Just give up on R1 reviews, we'll pretend to forget about it but they better come with swiftness this round.
ceremonials Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: Just give up on R1 reviews, we'll pretend to forget about it but they better come with swiftness this round. No that's rude to people who didn't get any.
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 Why did I let love cloud my sanity? But it was me that caused this tragedy
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 7 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Why did I let love cloud my sanity? But it was me that caused this tragedy My favourite couplet from your song I think
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 50 minutes ago, Tsareena said: I actually went with something different Bloody mary was my second choice Intriguing. Can't wait to read what you came up with.
touya kinomoto Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) 12 minutes ago, UFO said: My favourite couplet from your song I think It's my fave too maybe because those lines came out naturally. Like it was not as forced as the others. Edited August 30, 2017 by KatyCatPH
fountain Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 42 minutes ago, ceremonials said: No that's rude to people who didn't get any. That was more at the judges who've done none.
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) whew just finished writing @ultraviolence.xx's review not me serving judge internship this season afahjlg 21 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: It's my fave too maybe because those lines came out naturally. Like it was not as forced as the others. Definitely! I was slain when I first read it especially that "cloud" line. The imagery of you letting the clouds from the gods' heavens "cloud" your sanity is so beautiful and I want you to keep working in that direction, definitely that couplet captures the essence of desperate love in your song so well which is what you were going for, I think! Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) @Glassmouth @MattyTacos I'll be done with your reviews before the end of today, probably! My reviews are LONG but I type fast so speed is not a problem for me. It's just that after each review I get SO burnt out ahfgaskhf because I really want to help y'all so I spend a lot of time, energy and thought into each one so I can't really write reviews back-to-back even though I really want to. and I don't want to give half-assed reviews so I'll probably take a break now after having just finished Uvie's review and then get started on yours! Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
ceremonials Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 8 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: That was more at the judges who've done none. Oh I don't think they're planning on it
UFO Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 (edited) @KatyCatPH btw girl it's NOT "But it was me that caused this tragedy" it's supposed to be "But it was I who caused this tragedy" just a heads up! I don't want you to get dragged for something as petty as that Edited August 30, 2017 by UFO
fountain Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 When @UFO has wrote more reviews than half the judges
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 30, 2017 Posted August 30, 2017 24 minutes ago, UFO said: whew just finished writing @ultraviolence.xx's review not me serving judge internship this season afahjlg and you did AMAZING serving qualiTea!!!
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