tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

13 minutes has passed u can post them now

shut up stupid bitch

 

jk hints comin soon~

[funnellegs]

Thank you @ceremonials I used to completely ignore trying to make my songs rhyme, but after I started to get more positive comments when I did try and make them rhyme I think I've got a little too focused on doing that. I'll try and find a happy medium and step out my comfort zone next week 

[ceremonials]

Just now, funnellegs said:

Thank you @ceremonials I used to completely ignore trying to make my songs rhyme, but after I started to get more positive comments when I did try and make them rhyme I think I've got a little too focused on doing that. I'll try and find a happy medium and step out my comfort zone next week 

Oh wow, interesting. Versatile king

[touya kinomoto]

5 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

 

 

 

@KatyCatPH, "Cardiff Love"

 

I think you were one of the people that the lack of a chorus hurt. Because there wasn’t a chorus, I feel like you relied a bit too much on perfect rhymes to give the song some kind of structure, and the result is that some of them end up forced or too easy. Night/strife was a bit too forced, and long/wrong/along was a bit too elementary. I don’t judge rhymes too harshly, though, so don’t worry. I just don’t want you to focus on them too much, since I don’t think rhymes have been much of an issue for you - at least not in the last few rounds. On the contrary I think the content was really cute, even if I’m not entirely sure what a cardiff is. I know you’re still semi new to writing lyrics, so I think it’s okay that you haven’t found a particular style yet. I think that’s a good thing actually, because you can experiment with many styles and see what works best for you while also learning different ways to write. It’s a double edged sword in that way. Your entries continue to display your growth and ambition, even if they might not always wow every judge.

“A clear conscience is the softest pillow / So Cardiff Love, I have to let you go”

I'm not sure if you are kidding that you don't know Cardiff but that's the capital of Wales. But yeah, I found quite a hard time with this challenge because I still think I can create choruses really well. Thanks for the review.

[Speezy]

1 hour ago, Tsareena said:

Poor @Speezy . Citrus I’m referring to the protagonist as the oyster and it’s meant to fit guys and gals.  No heteronormativity on this boat 

Roar teas  

[ceremonials]

hints x

@Gastrodonatella   

 

@Hug  

 

@minho   

 

@SaintWest 

 

@ultraviolence.xx  

 

@Aurora  

 

@UFO  

 

@Tsareena  

 

@funnellegs  

 

@MattyTacos  

 

@mxtthewdelrey  

 

@Nait Phoenix  

 

@Covergirl  

 

@KatyCatPH 

 

@Speezy 

 

(cryogonal being shiny is irrelevant i couldnt find the regular one d)

 

[SaintWest]

i wrote a cute, albeit familiar song and yet i'm doing pretty badly. surprised? i sure am

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

Thank you so much @ceremonials I'm really glad you liked it!

 

but I love lads/sad!!! I didn't have to force that one at all  

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

all gen 5 on round 5 is cute   

[ceremonials]

archeops is so ugly nandekjakks

 

flying types occasionally lose~

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

niko is in bottom half because defeatist ability makes you weaker below half health?

yes

[touya kinomoto]

Tbh I am not familiar with Pokémon beyond Gen 3 so what's that that was assigned to me?

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, KatyCatPH said:

Tbh I am not familiar with Pokémon beyond Gen 3 so what's that that was assigned to me?

His name is Durant, an icon!

[ceremonials]

2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

tsareena served speezy this round so she got zoroark as disguiser  i have no idea if that's good, bad, or just irrelevant to the rankings but   

think broader

[fountain]

@Citrus i KNEW you were gonna be a stunt queen  

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

do base stats have any relevance here or no

indirectly, yes

[ceremonials]

wait jsanmdhfdj i forgot to score/review pears

[fountain]

Ok @ceremonials not even writing me a review 

[ceremonials]

Just now, keshaspearsxo said:

Ok @ceremonials not even writing me a review 

the way i didnt even give you a score

[fountain]

Just now, ceremonials said:

the way i didnt even give you a score

I get bonus points for the inconvenience right? 

[Jackson]

OK I'm actually gonna do reviews now

[ultraviolence.xx]

my pokeknowledge is slim so i’m gonna leave master sleuth will to do the dirty investigative work

[SaintWest]

am i in anybody's top 5

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

i think its fake news cuz the trend i was noticing that some of the better reviews had higher defense stats but then gigalith has the highest of all of these and uvie's is middle of the pack but i know she's your #1 

 

ok it doesnt have anything to do with their stats individually, but the stats do have some correlation to how they're ordered

[ceremonials]

Just now, SaintWest said:

am i in anybody's top 5

eye emoji

 

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@keshaspearsxo edited yours in~