ceremonials Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: also me and hug are probably right next to each other in position cuz lunar duo True
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 Boys on my LEFT SIDE Boys on my RIGHT SIDE BOYS IN THE MIDDLE And you're not here... I NEED A BIG LOAN FROM THE GIRL ZONE
ceremonials Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 53 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: kay @ceremonials i've compiled a list, from last place to first place xerneas celebi rayquaza deoxys tapu koko tapu lele tapu bulu tapu fini nihilego necrozma buzzwole pheromosa marshadow magearna heatran darkrai uxie cresselia keldeo You grouping them by gen is correct, and they're in the correct order. But within each gen, the orders are wrong, if that makes sense.
mxtthewdelrey Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 12 hours ago, ceremonials said: @mxtthewdelrey, “Progress” Okay, so this fit the challenge pretty well. I don’t know that name dropping it was necessary though, mainly because that seems like the only imagery you use pertaining to the stone. Not that you had to do that, though, you could do what the stone represents, and that’s what this looks like. It felt personal, and conveyed a decent amount of emotion. There’s not a lot of narrative going on, but what’s there is sufficient. Unfortunately, there’s a couple of things that boil this all back down to nothing. Mainly the plethora of forced rhymes, they were literally everywhere, and that really dampened the experience. I won’t be a broken record and if you want the rundown on forced rhymes then read Tsareena’s review, but I think maybe you should stop trying so hard to rhyme. I know it’s sometimes hard to think about a song that doesn’t rhyme, but it can work, and who knows - that could be one of the challenges this season (though it was done last season, so probably not). I usually tell most people to pick a rhyme scheme and stick to it to keep them from just writing free verse, but I think you need to do the opposite. I’m not saying write a song with no rhymes, though you could do that if you wanted to. Just place less emphasis on them. “Waiting for the moment our love becomes the perch of a dove / Calm the storm and bring me back to the place that I dream of” ahhhh, not you being the one to kinda not like my song that much this round i'm sorry sis! i apologise if my rhymes feel forced!!! 2 hours ago, Jackson said: @mxtthewdelrey – Progress n sis what was the purpose of “amethyst” in the first line? This song does show some progress. The awkward lines are a little more far between (“I have moved away from all our strife”), and the weird ones border on clever (“and cut them all up with my love-knife”). And your structure was actually quite inventive. I loved the bridge, it felt confessional and the structure made me never quite know when the confession was ending. ahh jackson love thiss!!! i chose the birth stone amethyst cause i liked the word amethyst and so i was just like "**** it, we gonna start the song with the word amethyst" and then i rhymed it with FIST and it went from there! #loveknife On 9/12/2017 at 10:24 PM, Citrus said: Random Review #3 @mxtthewdelrey This was..surprisingly apt. The topic is tired AF, but, stylistically, I feel like you really captured Amy's essence and I commend you on that. You had some awkward and clunky lines (even for her) in the chorus, but the way your first verse went into the chorus and so on was very Frank album. Good job. 3 hours ago, Citrus said: @mxtthewdelrey - I think this could've been great if you had been a little more specific. It's hard to connect to the narrator's struggles when we don't know what they are. Using 'Amethyst' in each verse was a little extra, and there are some more choice lines (diet/quiet). However, there's a glimmer in the final line of the chorus with the line "I think I'm making progress". That idea is so beautiful and relatable to everyone who has ever struggled with an addiction or problematic behavior. I wish you had really centered the song around that line more, because I love every bit of it. CITRUS you are an absolute darling for these soooooo cute :')
Hug Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 At least I'm Top 5 for cere confirmed, and I'm assuming somewhere in the Top 3 for Citrus. Though I don't know where I am in Jackson's, but it's not Top 3 or 5.
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 3 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: Boys on my LEFT SIDE Boys on my RIGHT SIDE BOYS IN THE MIDDLE And you're not here... I NEED A BIG LOAN FROM THE GIRL ZONE Yas sis stan for Tori Amos I need to listen to her more
SaintWest Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 btw thanks @ceremonials and @Citrus for reviews. kiskis
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: At least I'm Top 5 for cere confirmed, and I'm assuming somewhere in the Top 3 for Citrus. Though I don't know where I am in Jackson's, but it's not Top 3 or 5. Nnnn **** Top 3 and Top 5 I'm lucky if I scrape Top 15 at this point fffff
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 Just now, UFO said: Yas sis stan for Tori Amos I need to listen to her more wow and I thought I was the only one on atrl who stanned her shook shes lowkey my 2nd fave Turn back one last time Love to watch those cowboys ride
Speezy Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 7 minutes ago, ceremonials said: You grouping them by gen is correct, and they're in the correct order. But within each gen, the orders are wrong, if that makes sense. shook I could actually be higher
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 1 minute ago, MattyTacos said: wow and I thought I was the only one on atrl who stanned her shook shes lowkey my 2nd fave Turn back one last time Love to watch those cowboys ride I'm not too familiar with her discography but Cornflake Girl is ICONIC China, Leather and Crucify are my **** too ! whew. let me go listen to Little Earthquakes again
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 2 minutes ago, UFO said: I'm not too familiar with her discography but Cornflake Girl is ICONIC China, Leather and Crucify are my **** too ! whew. let me go listen to Little Earthquakes again Her discography is perfection. I actually love ALL of her albums (even if her 00s work isn't as appreciated by her fans outside of Scarlet's Walk - but some know the TEA of the gems it holds on albums like Abnormally Attracted to Sin & American Doll Posse). Little Earthquakes is perfection, Girl, Silent All These Years, Winter, China, Leather, Mother, the 2015 deluxe track edition songs like Take To The Sky ahh amazing If you like LE you should check out Under The Pink where Cornflake is from next (Pretty Good Year, God, Bells For Her, Past The Mission, Baker Baker, let me stop here cause i'm naming the whole album ) & then maybe Scarlet's Walk (Amber Waves, A Sorta Fairytale, Carbon, Crazy, Your Cloud, I Can't See New York ) before you get into her BEST work and hardest to disgest Boys for Pele & From The Choirgirl Hotel.
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 5 minutes ago, UFO said: ICONIC WHY DO WE CRUIFY OURSELVES EVERRRRRYYY DAYYY WE CRUIFY OURSELVES MY HEARTS SICK OF BEING IN MY HEARTS SICK OF BEING IN CHAIAIAIAIIAIAIAIAIAIIAIAIAIAIANS OOOOOO wig everytime
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 (edited) whewwwwww China is still such a scalp ! why are all her songs (at least the ones I've heard) so tragically realistic ? All the way to New York I can feel the distance getting close You're right next to me But I need an airplane I can feel the distance as you breathe Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you In your eyes I saw the future together You just look away in the distance China decorates our table Funny how the cracks don't seem to show Pour the wine dear You say we'll take a holiday But we never can agree on where to go Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you In your eyes I saw the future together You just look away in the distance China all the way to New York Maybe you got lost in Mexico You're right next to me I think that you can hear me Funny how the distance Learns to grow Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you I can feel the distance I can feel the distance I can feel the distance getting close A MASTERPIECE ajdfhaksjf let me take notes from her on how to write a good, succinct song that makes sense Edited September 17, 2017 by UFO
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 2 minutes ago, UFO said: whewwwwww China is still such a scalp ! why are all her songs (at least the ones I've heard) so tragically realistic ? All the way to New York I can feel the distance getting close You're right next to me But I need an airplane I can feel the distance as you breathe Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you In your eyes I saw the future together You just look away in the distance China decorates our table Funny how the cracks don't seem to show Pour the wine dear You say we'll take a holiday But we never can agree on where to go Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you In your eyes I saw the future together You just look away in the distance China all the way to New York Maybe you got lost in Mexico You're right next to me I think that you can hear me Funny how the distance Learns to grow Sometimes I think you want me to touch you How can I when you build the great wall around you I can feel the distance I can feel the distance I can feel the distance getting close A MASTERPIECE ajdfhaksjf let me take notes from her on how to write a good, succinct song that makes sense the fact that if this was a song in ph it would've missed the top 5 but WOW yes her lyrics are the most beautiful things ive ever had the pleasure of reading and hearing
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 5 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: Her discography is perfection. I actually love ALL of her albums (even if her 00s work isn't as appreciated by her fans outside of Scarlet's Walk - but some know the TEA of the gems it holds on albums like Abnormally Attracted to Sin & American Doll Posse). Little Earthquakes is perfection, Girl, Silent All These Years, Winter, China, Leather, Mother, the 2015 deluxe track edition songs like Take To The Sky ahh amazing If you like LE you should check out Under The Pink where Cornflake is from next (Pretty Good Year, God, Bells For Her, Past The Mission, Baker Baker, let me stop here cause i'm naming the whole album ) & then maybe Scarlet's Walk (Amber Waves, A Sorta Fairytale, Carbon, Crazy, Your Cloud, I Can't See New York ) before you get into her BEST work and hardest to disgest Boys for Pele & From The Choirgirl Hotel. Little Earthquakes is such a SCALP I'll definitely check out Under The Pink and Scarlet's Walk next. I think I listened to Under The Pink once but I don't know if I liked it or not nnn. whew I lowkey need a Lana and Tori collab
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 1 minute ago, UFO said: Little Earthquakes is such a SCALP I'll definitely check out Under The Pink and Scarlet's Walk next. I think I listened to Under The Pink once but I don't know if I liked it or not nnn. whew I lowkey need a Lana and Tori collab If you're comfortable with Tori's weird style by Under The Pink then you might as well listen to Boys For Pele instead after since it's more consistent then Scarlet's Walk which I feel gets a bit boring by the final 3 tracks but I like the deeper themes into the Native American genocide thing. But I'd suggest checking out the singles first off both album to see which you vibe with more since I feel like you'll end up liking Boys for Pele anyways based on your exquisite taste. ddd, you better stan Bells For Her or i'm coming for you, the most relatable end of a friendship song ever the way it torn my heart apart then put it back together after I went through that earlier this year i would be here for tori & lana
UFO Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 (edited) How can I!!!!! when you build the great wall around youuuu INNN YOUR EYESS I saw the future togetherrrr You just look awayyyy . . . iiin thee distaanceee Chiiinaaa decorates our table!!!! funny how the crackss don't seem to showwwww OMG it's SO sad Edited September 17, 2017 by UFO
MattyTacos Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 (edited) Underneath the stars above I said, "NO STOP. I AM NOT...giving up on us" And I am not going anywhere...soon Annie grab your bass guitar Help me bring in the October moon YOU SHOUT, RUN FOR COVER I scream, "rev the triumph's engine" YOU SAY "BABY WE'RE TOO LATE FROM THE CLOUD RIDERS NO ESCAPE" Darling, what's the blanket for? Riding out this storm We'll be riding out this storm... Native Invader is kinda that album of the year Edited September 17, 2017 by MattyTacos
ceremonials Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 Might as well reveal it all! 9s - Gen 5 (Keldeo) 8s - Gen 4 (Cresselia. Heatran, Darkrai, Uxie) 7s - Gen 7 (Koko, Lele, Fini, Buzzwole, Pheromosa, Nihilego, Magearna, Marshadow, Necrozma) 6s - Gen 2 (Celebi) Below 6 - Gens 3/6 (Xerneas, Deoxys, Rayquaza) - these were meant to be all one gen but alas
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Might as well reveal it all! 9s - Gen 5 (Keldeo) 8s - Gen 4 (Cresselia. Heatran, Darkrai, Uxie) 7s - Gen 7 (Koko, Lele, Fini, Buzzwole, Pheromosa, Magearna, Marshadow, Necrozma) 6s - Gen 2 (Celebi) Below 6 - Gens 3/6 (Xerneas, Deoxys, Rayquaza) - these were meant to be all one gen but alas w8 where's the nihilwhatever? is that gen 7?
ceremonials Posted September 17, 2017 Posted September 17, 2017 Just now, ultraviolence.xx said: w8 where's the nihilwhatever? is that gen 7? Oh yes I forgot ha
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