SaintWest Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 wait what was my placement i guess i missed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Just now, SaintWest said: wait what was my placement i guess i missed it i did too i was thinking that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 Excited to see what the next round is all about! I'm gonna write my magnum opus Drowning in Neon Lady in White Ghost of a Man The three are all a little bit different, but also similar in a way? I said this at the start of the season as a joke, but this feels like my Joanne! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: the late penalties usually come into effect after results x mess. my career is over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 OK so #4 is @ultraviolence.xx top 3 in the spoiler #3... @Aurora his first non-#1 still being a slay. Serving me! so our #1 is @funnellegs congrats @Nait Phoenix on a #2 peaking song. Both of you hit it way out of the park, with just a 0.2 point different between you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 1 minute ago, Jackson said: OK so #4 is @ultraviolence.xx top 3 in the spoiler Reveal hidden contents #3... @Aurora his first non-#1 still being a slay. Serving me! so our #1 is @funnellegs congrats @Nait Phoenix on a #2 peaking song. Both of you hit it way out of the park, with just a 0.2 point different between you slay queens what was the winner's score? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 @Aurora and @Hug i am honored to be sandwiched between you two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Congrats!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 Just now, ultraviolence.xx said: slay queens what was the winner's score? about an 8.4 this week. All scores will be revealed at the end of the phase next week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: about an 8.4 this week. All scores will be revealed at the end of the phase next week am i #6 with or without my penalty? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: i told aurora they'd have a boner for anybody who did 21p and lo and behold, the two who did 21p got #3 and #1 I kinda thought that if i did 21p i'd do a lot better too, which makes sense because everyone did dolly or florence, so they stick out more and by default are more unique, but i was too scared since i dont really know anything about 21p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ WINNER's SONG ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‘Tomorrow’s Ghost’ The sunlight bleeds in from between the blinds, and my head rings from this meeting of our minds. Your skin is warm against this pale body of mine, our hips form a rhythm as we seek to intertwine. My painted lip trembles as we flicker in the dark, two bodies in tandem but only one beating heart. Your heavy hands are comforting, yet still so hollow, and I hate to admit it, but it’s you that I’ll follow. If you’re looking for a body, mine is free to borrow, tonight we’ll be two lovers, I’ll be a nobody tomorrow. The moonlight bathes us in its forgiving glow, a beautiful distraction from this sweet sorrow. And I raise a white flag to say I’m calling time, to say why I return, there’s no reason or rhyme. My painted lip trembles as we flicker in the dark, two bodies in tandem but only one beating heart. Your heavy hands are comforting, yet still so hollow, and I hate to admit it, but it’s you that I’ll follow. If you’re looking for a body, mine is free to borrow, tonight we’ll be two lovers, I’ll be a nobody tomorrow. Maybe we’re just two souls destined to collide, but we’ll burn to a cinder if we cannot decide. Don’t tell me I’m a habit or just home for a night, I want to be your heaven, in darkness your light. Your heavy hands are comforting, yet still so hollow, and I hate to admit it, but it’s you that I’ll follow. If you’re looking for a body, mine is free to borrow, tonight we’ll be two lovers, I’ll be a nobody tomorrow. Now I lie alone, in a hotel room meant for two, I’ll cry until I’m alright, a classic side effect of you. ROUND 4 VERY SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 1 minute ago, Covergirl said: am i #6 with or without my penalty? without Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 whew congrats everyone! but yas my writing partner (I forgot which season ajfahgf) @funnellegs slaying the competition like this! so proud of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 WOW. @funnellegs did that. that is such a good song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 LABEL HIRES lastly, each label had the option of hiring writers for a small point boost this week. these will be calculated in at the end of the phase. those that have been hired are heretic: @Hug @funnellegs @Tsareena @Covergirl reid: @Aurora @Nait Phoenix whatever Citrus was: @Gastrodonatella @minho whatever Moon was: @SaintWest @mxtthewdelrey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speezy Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 Spoiler Shadows Cant C*m/Come [verse1] We can't evade the candle's flame There are only four of us here tonight There are no clothes on our shadows Yet only two of us will be dressed by day light For now lets enjoy our warmth Let's create a rhythm in unity While our shadows imitate the movements that we create [Hook] Let's try and last by daybreak But right now our silhouettes perform so effortlessly [chorus] I can feel her heart pounding on my chest And I can see sweat dripping from her forehead There are more details that they cant recreate Its just some things silhouettes can't imitate No way they could match our current details Certain things silhouettes can't imitate [v2] Oh The bed became unmade While the wall still remains intact There are scratches on my neck My silhouette failed to reflect that This took all of our energy But our silhouettes looks about right They never show signs of tiredness Yet we feel fatigued after each time [hook2] Our casted shadows are intertwined We are tired, but yours is still on top of mine [chorus] [Bridge] The candles flickered with each movement that we made It made our shadows waver But they settled back in place There are only four figures in the room as we lay Only two of them express feelings The other two disappear in the shade [chorus] [bridge] Spoiler Sir Speezy - Break and Swallow Steel [V1] Every shackle I was in, was too loose for me My strength increased every time, I broke free If you put your hand near my tongue, I'll bite Tie me up good, let's try something tonight [chorus] I want you to... Forge a chain that's so strong it binds me down (Put me in shackles forged by your love) I want it to make me howl while I'm bound (Make me curse all the gods above) You heard about my wicked ways Better keep me bound Better keep me in chains [v2] The chains that entrapped my body (Wasn't that good, they were purchased too easily) You just need love, thoughts and magic (To create a bondage that's just meant for me) [V3] You can't stand my voice when I struggle So you jab your sword through my mouth To prevent me from screaming so loud [C2] You made a chain so strong, it held me down (Im in shackles that's forged by your love) It's my fetish when I can't make a sound (I can't even curse the gods above) You heard about my wicked ways Better keep me bound Better keep me in chains [Bridge] I'm like Fenrir I destroy fetters with grace and ease Unless they're crafted with emotions If I suddenly become unchained or free It'll be your turn to be chained in a dungeon [Bridge] Spoiler Sir Speezy - Dont Penetrate My Future For Jackson/ 21 Pilots (I had no other title for this tbh (If I make it to the LP/EP round then it would fit in with the others )) [v1] The words fire from your mouths like a missile. You expect them to make contact and to explode. You expect me to become broken and cripple. I see your face, the mouth is animated. I hear you screaming , it becomes stagnated [chorus] Save your breath for when you're suffocating Your standards may have kept you alive Why do you think it could rescue others? It goes in one ear and out the other. Please, save your breath for when you're suffocating You'll need it more than I If you call me something, call me schizophrenic Want to understand why? [V2] I hear my future that I control. I hear the voice of my future wife Blowing in my ear while I'm in bed I hear the voice of my future child Crying because they injured their leg I don’t want to hear you again Because I want to hear them [V3] I do my best laying out a foundation for their future An unfamiliar voice keeps trying to crack the road I made An unfamiliar face keeps attempting to lead me away My child sounds so innocent, don’t lead me away My wife sounds so gentle, don’t break the road I made [Chorus] [V2] [outro] My future that I control. The foundation I paved. Your voice has nowhere to stay Of course my non-sex anthem flops a bit @UFO @ultraviolence.xx . Also congrats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 Can't wait to hear Dolly's vocals on my song, thanks for the boost cutie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: uvie getting top 4 and no hire same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 2 minutes ago, Speezy said: Reveal hidden contents Shadows Cant C*m/Come [verse1] We can't evade the candle's flame There are only four of us here tonight There are no clothes on our shadows Yet only two of us will be dressed by day light For now lets enjoy our warmth Let's create a rhythm in unity While our shadows imitate the movements that we create [Hook] Let's try and last by daybreak But right now our silhouettes perform so effortlessly [chorus] I can feel her heart pounding on my chest And I can see sweat dripping from her forehead There are more details that they cant recreate Its just some things silhouettes can't imitate No way they could match our current details Certain things silhouettes can't imitate [v2] Oh The bed became unmade While the wall still remains intact There are scratches on my neck My silhouette failed to reflect that This took all of our energy But our silhouettes looks about right They never show signs of tiredness Yet we feel fatigued after each time [hook2] Our casted shadows are intertwined We are tired, but yours is still on top of mine [chorus] [Bridge] The candles flickered with each movement that we made It made our shadows waver But they settled back in place There are only four figures in the room as we lay Only two of them express feelings The other two disappear in the shade [chorus] [bridge] Reveal hidden contents Sir Speezy - Break and Swallow Steel [V1] Every shackle I was in, was too loose for me My strength increased every time, I broke free If you put your hand near my tongue, I'll bite Tie me up good, let's try something tonight [chorus] I want you to... Forge a chain that's so strong it binds me down (Put me in shackles forged by your love) I want it to make me howl while I'm bound (Make me curse all the gods above) You heard about my wicked ways Better keep me bound Better keep me in chains [v2] The chains that entrapped my body (Wasn't that good, they were purchased too easily) You just need love, thoughts and magic (To create a bondage that's just meant for me) [V3] You can't stand my voice when I struggle So you jab your sword through my mouth To prevent me from screaming so loud [C2] You made a chain so strong, it held me down (Im in shackles that's forged by your love) It's my fetish when I can't make a sound (I can't even curse the gods above) You heard about my wicked ways Better keep me bound Better keep me in chains [Bridge] I'm like Fenrir I destroy fetters with grace and ease Unless they're crafted with emotions If I suddenly become unchained or free It'll be your turn to be chained in a dungeon [Bridge] Reveal hidden contents Sir Speezy - Dont Penetrate My Future For Jackson/ 21 Pilots (I had no other title for this tbh (If I make it to the LP/EP round then it would fit in with the others )) [v1] The words fire from your mouths like a missile. You expect them to make contact and to explode. You expect me to become broken and cripple. I see your face, the mouth is animated. I hear you screaming , it becomes stagnated [chorus] Save your breath for when you're suffocating Your standards may have kept you alive Why do you think it could rescue others? It goes in one ear and out the other. Please, save your breath for when you're suffocating You'll need it more than I If you call me something, call me schizophrenic Want to understand why? [V2] I hear my future that I control. I hear the voice of my future wife Blowing in my ear while I'm in bed I hear the voice of my future child Crying because they injured their leg I don’t want to hear you again Because I want to hear them [V3] I do my best laying out a foundation for their future An unfamiliar voice keeps trying to crack the road I made An unfamiliar face keeps attempting to lead me away My child sounds so innocent, don’t lead me away My wife sounds so gentle, don’t break the road I made [Chorus] [V2] [outro] My future that I control. The foundation I paved. Your voice has nowhere to stay Of course my non-sex anthem flops a bit @UFO @ultraviolence.xx . Also congrats Yaaaaaas thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minho Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: uvie getting top 4 and no hire OMG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 R3 Contestant Song 1 funnellegs Tomorrow's Ghost 2 Nait Phoenix Hubris 3 Aurora Match Without Flame 4 ultraviolence.xx take me to the water 5 Hug Kaleidsoscope Skies 6 Covergirl Ghost of a Man 7 mxtthewdelrey misjudged 8 Gastrodonatella Picture on the Wall 9 minho storybook 10 FCKNAmbrosia Castaway 11 Tsareena Lamb 12 UFO Escape the Heavens 13 SaintWest Numbers Girl 14 Glassmouth Greener 15 KatyCatPH London's Calling 16 Mezik Tennessee 17 Speezy Don't Penetrate My Future 18 PoKiTaurus Our Love's a Two Piece Heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 (edited) 2 minutes ago, Jackson said: R3 Contestant Song 1 funnellegs Tomorrow's Ghost 2 Nait Phoenix Hubris 3 Aurora Match Without Flame 4 ultraviolence.xx take me to the water 5 Hug Kaleidsoscope Skies 6 Covergirl Ghost of a Man 7 mxtthewdelrey misjudged 8 Gastrodonatella Picture on the Wall 9 minho storybook 10 FCKNAmbrosia Castaway 11 Tsareena Lamb 12 UFO Escape the Heavens 13 SaintWest Numbers Girl 14 Glassmouth Greener 15 KatyCatPH London's Calling 16 Mezik Tennessee 17 Speezy Don't Penetrate My Future 18 PoKiTaurus Our Love's a Two Piece Heart lmao Escape the Heavens? more like Escape the Top 10 Edited September 11, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 how many people are we expecting to remove when the last phase is done? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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