Kern Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 Everyone just ignoring @Yvess crits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MusicLoverDude Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 1 hour ago, stupidjock said: Everyone just ignoring @Yvess crits He's the Paula of the round. Everybody was perched for Randy/Simon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 5, 2023 Author Share Posted November 5, 2023 7 hours ago, stupidjock said: Everyone just ignoring @Yvess crits ok, of course since i posted my crits within the day i posted the entries and that was like 2-3 days ago. but ofc i know my thoughts are irrelevant anyways, wont do any crits then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Element Posted November 5, 2023 ATRL Moderator Share Posted November 5, 2023 starting now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 5, 2023 Author Share Posted November 5, 2023 (edited) let's just do a 7 people elimination so i can be freed from this game Edited November 5, 2023 by Yvess 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 5, 2023 Author Share Posted November 5, 2023 Just now, Element said: starting now! tysm, take ur time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Year of Shadow Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 Does anyone else see this instead of "posted # minutes/hours ago" Posted November 5, 2023 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 5, 2023 Author Share Posted November 5, 2023 57 minutes ago, Hey Dude said: Does anyone else see this instead of "posted # minutes/hours ago" Posted November 5, 2023 nope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MusicLoverDude Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 MLD's Critiques Apparently we won't be getting Muffy shots this time so here is a nice video of her being savage @blackoutbaby - Rihanna - Only Girl Yep. The fire is VERY there. You slayed. @Kylie Verzosa - Rosalia - SAOKO "Blazing production" bruh WHERE because this production is TRASH, especially on her vocals. This sounds like it was SET on fire instead of being pure fire. Like...oh my lord...this is just BAD! This ain't fierce at all. It's like you took the same producer of Style (Taylor's Version) and made it worse. Bleh. Bleh. BLEH! @Legend E - Kelly Clarkson - Tightrope (Tour version) Kelly -ha Eras Tour-esque moment, although not as iconic. But a good entry and the best modern Kelly entry you've sent since her music took a MAJOR nosedive after 2009. @Hey Dude - Madonna - Hung Up Your best solo entry in a VERY long time. After flopping like a plastic bag for multiple rounds, let alone multiple games at this point, you have FINALLY slayed again and you finally have a competent entry. @Queen. - Nicki Minaj Not bad actually. This worked out pretty well. @ZORBIT - Tinashe The production fits but the lyrics and vocal delivery do not. NEXT! @Overprotected - Mariah Carey - Prisoner Umm...no. You can't expect me to take this generic dated 80s garbage seriously. Debbie Harry is a better rapper than her for one thing and this song sounds like Mariah trying to make her best Taylor Dayne impression...Tell It To My Heart is already pure garbage as is along with most of her dying banshee songs. This may have been released in 1990 but clearly the toxic 80s that Gen X oh so thinks was the "best time in music" when it has some of THE most dated production ever ******* ever really kills this. There HAD to be something from her more recent discography that had to suit this better because...let's leave this trash with the 80s hair bands and the pre-pubescent R&B groups. @fiercE - P!nk - Dear. Mr. President It's compassionate but I'm sure you had something better than this in her discography. The funny thing is I think the submission of Run in Survivor alone shows a song that is more compassionate than Dear Mr. President already, or even All I Know So Far could have worked here too. So, not bad, but could have been better baby ;) @Dessy - Ciara - One Woman Army Yep. Great. Shits all over the 80s banshee and the Bush letter, good job. Ok, sending in my ratings. @stupidjock @Yvess @lacy @CBC 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MusicLoverDude Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 Why is shits not censored but ***** and ******* are? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kylie Verzosa Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 Thanks 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overprotected Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 Ok but does it fit the theme or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 5, 2023 Share Posted November 5, 2023 Oh we are gagging Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 just waiting for our guest judge to send in scores and post crits tysm! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Element Posted November 6, 2023 ATRL Moderator Share Posted November 6, 2023 ELEMENT'S CRITIQUES Thank you for having me as a guest judge! Overall, you guys did a really great job during this challenge!! Some elements were really hard to pick a winner. FIRE Spoiler @blackoutbaby ONLY GIRL (IN THE WORLD) I don't think this is a bad entry by any means, but going up against Saoko is a tough battle for fire. There are aspects of passion and desire throughout the song, but they come across a bit more lighthearted at times. The effervescent production of the verses also contrasts with the fiery vision. @Kylie Verzosa SAOKO I mean come on now... you ate this up!!! The song speaks for itself. It is bold, brash, and unstoppable. Her confidence is on display from the second the song begins to the second it finishes. She is incredibly passionate, and the dramatic production helps to drive this home. AIR Spoiler @Legend E TIGHTROPE (Tour Version) This definitely shows a relationship under strain, but honestly the lyrics were not as chaotic as I would have hoped for. Her vocal delivery and the production make things actually seem a lot calmer than you'd expect. Not a bad entry per se, but I am just confused as to why you would select this song out of her entire discography. Certainly some other songs could have worked for air/turbulence? @Hey Dude HUNG UP This was definitely an interesting choice - tbh I'm a bit conflicted lyrically because a good portion of the song shows her being uncertain about what to do. However, I guess that is kind of necessary to get to the ultimate conclusion, which is her deciding to break off the relationship. I really liked the atmopshere and production of this for air. It has a very tornadic and whimsical quality to it. WATER Spoiler @Queen. PILLS N POTIONS This was a very solid submission! I think the forgiveness is palpable throughout the song. The production is fairly calm and rhythmic; definitely makes me envision water more than any other element. @ZORBIT LIFE'S TOO SHORT Absolutely excellent representation of water from a production standpoint. It feels like the whole song is set underwater, and her serene vocals drive home the imagery. The lyrics are a decent representation of the quality in your argument, but sometimes get a little bit unfocused. The production is just soooo strong for this though so I'm slayed by that. EARTH Spoiler @Overprotected PRISONER First of all, I was bopping v much to this! Thanks for the introduction. I think it's overall a good entry. It definitely has many great examples of strength and confidence throughout. The rapping verse was a strong element too + I liked the new jack swing components for the earth element. Good job! @fiercE DEAR MR. PRESIDENT Interesting take on this challenge. I definitely see what you were going for, and I found it interesting how P!nk balanced compassion with firmness. The production was a bit more understated compared to the other two entries, but it was earthy enough. @Dessy ONE WOMAN ARMY All in all, this was perfect. The lyrics were excellent to represent the quality of strength and I thought the harsh, militant production tied everything together. Great choice and a bit of a bop I have to say! 2 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overprotected Posted November 6, 2023 Share Posted November 6, 2023 thank you judge element Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 6, 2023 Share Posted November 6, 2023 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Year of Shadow Posted November 6, 2023 Share Posted November 6, 2023 PTRSWCCADFTBFFS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kylie Verzosa Posted November 6, 2023 Share Posted November 6, 2023 3 hours ago, Element said: ELEMENT'S CRITIQUES Thank you for having me as a guest judge! Overall, you guys did a really great job during this challenge!! Some elements were really hard to pick a winner. FIRE Hide contents @blackoutbaby ONLY GIRL (IN THE WORLD) I don't think this is a bad entry by any means, but going up against Saoko is a tough battle for fire. There are aspects of passion and desire throughout the song, but they come across a bit more lighthearted at times. The effervescent production of the verses also contrasts with the fiery vision. @Kylie Verzosa SAOKO I mean come on now... you ate this up!!! The song speaks for itself. It is bold, brash, and unstoppable. Her confidence is on display from the second the song begins to the second it finishes. She is incredibly passionate, and the dramatic production helps to drive this home. AIR Reveal hidden contents @Legend E TIGHTROPE (Tour Version) This definitely shows a relationship under strain, but honestly the lyrics were not as chaotic as I would have hoped for. Her vocal delivery and the production make things actually seem a lot calmer than you'd expect. Not a bad entry per se, but I am just confused as to why you would select this song out of her entire discography. Certainly some other songs could have worked for air/turbulence? @Hey Dude HUNG UP This was definitely an interesting choice - tbh I'm a bit conflicted lyrically because a good portion of the song shows her being uncertain about what to do. However, I guess that is kind of necessary to get to the ultimate conclusion, which is her deciding to break off the relationship. I really liked the atmopshere and production of this for air. It has a very tornadic and whimsical quality to it. WATER Reveal hidden contents @Queen. PILLS N POTIONS This was a very solid submission! I think the forgiveness is palpable throughout the song. The production is fairly calm and rhythmic; definitely makes me envision water more than any other element. @ZORBIT LIFE'S TOO SHORT Absolutely excellent representation of water from a production standpoint. It feels like the whole song is set underwater, and her serene vocals drive home the imagery. The lyrics are a decent representation of the quality in your argument, but sometimes get a little bit unfocused. The production is just soooo strong for this though so I'm slayed by that. EARTH Reveal hidden contents @Overprotected PRISONER First of all, I was bopping v much to this! Thanks for the introduction. I think it's overall a good entry. It definitely has many great examples of strength and confidence throughout. The rapping verse was a strong element too + I liked the new jack swing components for the earth element. Good job! @fiercE DEAR MR. PRESIDENT Interesting take on this challenge. I definitely see what you were going for, and I found it interesting how P!nk balanced compassion with firmness. The production was a bit more understated compared to the other two entries, but it was earthy enough. @Dessy ONE WOMAN ARMY All in all, this was perfect. The lyrics were excellent to represent the quality of strength and I thought the harsh, militant production tied everything together. Great choice and a bit of a bop I have to say! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 (edited) .................. Edited November 6, 2023 by Yvess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 thank you so much @Elementd for guest judging in this messy lil game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 (edited) Hello, TABSistrens! Welcome to the 12th Results Show of the Season! @fiercE @Legend E @Kylie Verzosa @ZORBIT @Queen. @Dessy @blackoutbaby @Hey Dude @Overprotected @stupidjock @MusicLoverDude @CBC @lacy Edited November 6, 2023 by Yvess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 E A R T H @Overprotected Spoiler @fiercE Spoiler @Dessy Spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 W A T E R @Queen. Spoiler @ZORBIT Spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 6, 2023 Author Share Posted November 6, 2023 A I R @Legend E Spoiler @Hey Dude Spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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