Jackson Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Round 1: Pokémon Types Ranking & Scores #1 @Kylie Jenner - Lost in the Rays - 9.50 #2 @GentleDance - DNA - 9.33 #3 @Hug - Heaven only exists in the dark - 9.17 #4 @8thPrince - Hurricane - 8.80 #5 @PoKiTaurus - Victory Tune & @Prisoner - Sky Children - 8.67 #7 @OreGuy - Sunshine At Sea - 8.60 #8 @Julianna Calm Down - Silver Skin - 8.27 #9 @XO_Life - Is the...? - 8.13 #10 StormPulse - Exodus - 7.87 #11 @worldwide angel - Grace - 7.67 #12 @xBoySelenatorx - Ghost and Maniac - 7.47 #13 @Tropical - Read Your Mind - 6.77 🌸 4 1
Hug Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Oh and just because I want to share !! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z-a9axEH5G3cIzAGgmBmRdEpPFaYggOoJjzIyW4EvzA/edit?usp=drivesdk 2 2
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Thank you so much Top 5 wow. Gosh I've never even been top 10 before. And I'm so happy I get to share it so that that way 6 entries can be top 5 Thank you judges for not breaking this tie that destiny has called upon us. I actually made a few edits as I included it in the Google form and I forgot to save that version for myself so what I'll post may be slightly different. For the final verse I was basically juggling the lines until it seemed like it flowed good. 1
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 29 minutes ago, Hug said: Also nothing is in that spoiler I'm just in mobile and I can't seem to delete it 😭😭😭 If you press on the outer grey box that has the time on it, then a plus symbol inside a circle will appear in the top left corner. Then you press backspace and it will disappear
fountain Posted June 27, 2023 Author Posted June 27, 2023 6 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: Thank you so much Top 5 wow. Gosh I've never even been top 10 before. And I'm so happy I get to share it so that that way 6 entries can be top 5 Thank you judges for not breaking this tie that destiny has called upon us. I actually made a few edits as I included it in the Google form and I forgot to save that version for myself so what I'll post may be slightly different. For the final verse I was basically juggling the lines until it seemed like it flowed good. If you ever want the original version again we can always send it to you 1
xBoySelenatorx Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 I think my crazy week is over so hopefully I can focus more time on this! I know i'm super late but wanted to give a thanks to the judges and mentors! @fountain @Jackson @Legend E Definitely agree that some parts of the song suffered, hopefully next round makes it up 1 hour ago, Jackson said: At #12 with a score of 7.47... @xBoySelenatorx with "Ghost and Maniac" One of the most inventive and memorable songs of the round, and a strong narrative entry. I can't wait to see what you do next! 1 hour ago, fountain said: @xBoySelenatorx such a great first entry! I loved reading your song and it’s engaging storytelling, looking forward to seeing more I was expecting the lowest so this is... a slight slay 51 minutes ago, Jackson said: Round 1: Pokémon Types Ranking & Scores #1 @Kylie Jenner - Lost in the Rays - 9.50 #2 @GentleDance - DNA - 9.33 #3 @Hug - Heaven only exists in the dark - 9.17 #4 @8thPrince - Hurricane - 8.80 #5 @PoKiTaurus - Victory Tune & @Prisoner - Sky Children - 8.67 #7 @OreGuy - Sunshine At Sea - 8.60 #8 @Julianna Calm Down - Silver Skin - 8.27 #9 @XO_Life - Is the...? - 8.13 #10 StormPulse - Exodus - 7.87 #11 @worldwide angel - Grace - 7.67 #12 @xBoySelenatorx - Ghost and Maniac - 7.47 #13 @Tropical - Read Your Mind - 6.77 🌸 Congrats to the Top 3! They sounded like strong and solid songs 2
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 37 minutes ago, fountain said: If you ever want the original version again we can always send it to you That would be so great I'll make sure from now on to keep back-ups of my final versions.
Kosm-o-s Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 I will be writing a Black Mirror-esque "love" song and my sample will be this legendary anthem. Here is a tinyyyyy snippet: you turn me on ‘til i turn my phone off short, simple, but effective! 2
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 With help from fountain, I am now able to share my lyrics Spoiler Victory Tune Tune in, zone out The birds congregate on a lonely tree, to keep it company The wind sweeps across your cheek When the sun can’t guide you anymore Can you trust the moon to lead? You can find your way, you always do Despite the pain, you still get through You always win, even when you lose But do you really lose? If you always learn something new No matter what you choose Still driving on the track Despite the bumps and cracks You never really lose, do you? Tune in, chill out They say the tan you’ve got means the sun’s your guide So the moon won’t help you when it’s out of sight But your eyes adjust to the darkest light Seems like someone’s always by your side The ocean waves won’t let you drown For the moon has said, “Hear me now” You’re coming home, safe and sound For me and the sun, we are oh so proud So are you ever really lost? If you always find a way, even by mistake If the road leads somewhere while you’re still out there The brightest star won’t lose it’s light Until it’s assured the sun will rise You’re never really lost, are you? You always find a way to turn the bad to good To find strength when you need it most To maintain your hope when you feel alone So remember these words for the highs and the lows Because someone’s watching over you So you never really lose, don’t you? 2 1
Galah Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Aliennia slaying as she should. Congrats @Kylie Jenner!
Kylie Jenner Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Omg I was not expecting to get #1 with that omg thank you so much everyone and it makes me so happy that you liked the song so much I’m like stunned fjjdjd seriously thank you 3 1
Kosm-o-s Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 (edited) Actually I might end up submitting the Black Mirror-esque "love" song so let me not ditch it too quickly I'll see if I can write something better alongside it tho x Edited June 27, 2023 by Kosm-o-s
Kylie Jenner Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 6 hours ago, fountain said: @Kylie Jenner wow wow a big congrats, you came in as a last minute entry so this narrowly didn’t even happen but I’m very glad it did your song was so refreshing and beloved, a really wonderful job let me know what you’d like on your gold token! Thank you and thanks to everyone who said congratulations please could I get the Ava's face on the OG Diamonds & Dancefloors cover on the token? thanks! I'll share my song for those that want to read/hear it criticism/comments from anyone is always appreciated. I didn't originally have a title for it because I started writing it with the concept of "Life's a Beach" in my mind so wanted that as the title but I think now it's written I feel like Lost in the Rays is a better choice. I hope people like it lyrics here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G57UC8CY1g7aOKaNVoze8v3c5m2nu0FTuQ2MFGf7U-8/edit?usp=sharing song here: 4 1
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Every single track on this album matches what I want Literally every track This really is the most perfect album title you could ever give it. I will go with this one. 5th sample let's go. 1
Hug Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Ooo I knew going on a walk was a good idea. I came up with an idea I like!!
Hug Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 32 minutes ago, Hug said: Ooo I knew going on a walk was a good idea. I came up with an idea I like!! Actually it was dumb as **** 1
Jackson Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 1 minute ago, Hug said: Actually it was dumb as **** idk maybe try a bike ride next?
Hug Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 3 minutes ago, Jackson said: idk maybe try a bike ride next? I should sample Side to Side you're right! My "wrist icicle ride dick bicycle" sample is coming. 1
Hug Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Finally updated my signature and also fixed the colors. I had 2 different colors for 3rd Need to update my title too. Also @ WHOEVER IS DOING THE TOKENS!! I decided I want a picture of Simon from Dark Heaven (since I feel what I wrote is closer to his perspective in Dark Heaven!) Idk if this particular picture would work but I tried to find one that didn't have a loud background 😔 1
Better Mistakes Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Sometimes it’s the luck of the draw Some things you can’t stop or ignore If you swim upstream, you’ll lose belief You can’t change the course or stop Karma’s calls, ‘Cause sometimes it’s the luck of the draw… So, when can I draw? 2
poki Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 Is there a limit to how many words can our entries be?
fountain Posted June 27, 2023 Author Posted June 27, 2023 4 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: Is there a limit to how many words can our entries be? Nope! 1
fountain Posted June 27, 2023 Author Posted June 27, 2023 Nnnnn okay I’ve been working on your tokens but I need some feedback on them because the picture choices have lead to some interesting results @Kylie Jenner because of the diamonds obscuring her face in the picture, when I remove them we’re left with her face looking very… jagged Spoiler I can still use that image for the design if you want, but I just wanted to make sure you knew that’s how it’ll turn out because her face is partially covered @Hug your picture itself works fine, but part of his head is cut off. Here’s how it would look, Spoiler I wasn’t sure if you’d have any other picks where he is fully in view, or if you’d be happy with that.
Kylie Jenner Posted June 27, 2023 Posted June 27, 2023 18 minutes ago, fountain said: Nnnnn okay I’ve been working on your tokens but I need some feedback on them because the picture choices have lead to some interesting results @Kylie Jenner because of the diamonds obscuring her face in the picture, when I remove them we’re left with her face looking very… jagged Reveal hidden contents I can still use that image for the design if you want, but I just wanted to make sure you knew that’s how it’ll turn out because her face is partially covered @Hug your picture itself works fine, but part of his head is cut off. Here’s how it would look, Reveal hidden contents I wasn’t sure if you’d have any other picks where he is fully in view, or if you’d be happy with that. oh fjdhfg I didn't know you'd be removing the diamonds. That's okay, maybe this one will work better!
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