tournament Golden Hit: Season 1 📀 Congrats to 8thPrince and Jackson!! 🏆🏆

[Better Mistakes]

I've submitted the mess 

[Aurora]

I just wanted to take a quick moment to acknowledge that while we're now at the halfway point of this tournament, it really does only feel like Golden Hit is just beginning. This experience has already been so rewarding and fun as a host-judge and I hope it has been wonderful for you all as well. fountain and I were really excited to bring back this format in a new way but certainly didn't anticipate this turnout or positive reception, and to still be having over twenty active participants four rounds in is amazing... I don't think ATRL has seen this much interest in a songwriting tournament since Song of the Season launched back in 2019. 

 

We're at the point of the tournament that every submission counts, so if you're undecided whether to submit for a particular round during the remainder of the tournament, I'd strongly suggest you submit something, even if you don't consider it your best. There's always the chance that the judges might disagree in your favour—see Jackson's entry this week! The title of Winner of Golden Hit is still anyone's to claim at this point seeing as the scores have been so close thus far; one really strong moment is all it might take to put you in serious contention. If that's something you're interested in, I'd strongly urge you to submit!

 

That brings me to the end of this mini mid-season morale booster. I can't wait for everyone to see what else we have in store for Golden Hit in the future... the journey may not be over as soon as one may think!

[Temporal]

20 hours ago, Jackson said:

My song: 

 

 

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Il Diavolo e Dio

 

Intro
Hello friend, benvenuto to my life
Each stroke of pen will show you fragments of my mind
From yellowed pages of my younger times
A manifesto to who I am inside
A pious boy from southern Italy
Traveling through the rough cobblestone streets
Until I make each man in Rome believe
That praising God’s our only destiny
So please read…

 

Verse
I wake each day and say a little prayer in my heart
Cause God is good and no one should be left without his charm
I walk the road to lead me home and talk to all who pass
Though most avoid me I feel joy each time I see them dash
Even if they only hear my word from far away
I know the spirit touches them in its own special way
And so I hum a hymn of praise and proclaim earthly pleas
To save these lowly sinners as God once had rescued me

 

Chorus
Sing Hallelujah to on High, sing him praises until I’m
On my knees, then repeat and I’ll keep serenading
Sing convictions to the king, crooning carols endlessly
Maybe then I’ll earn a seat at Jesus’s feet
Hoping heaven hears my pleas
Hoping God is listening
Maybe then I’ll earn a seat at Jesus’s feet

 

Verse
I read the news and see confused souls seeking mortal sin
Their evil deeds will only lead to blackened souls within
Shoot every shot like they forgot the Father gave them life
So he sends plagues until they’ve paid the price that He provides
Even if they only hear his word in muffled calls
I hope one day they’ll recognize that he could save them all
Robbers, crooks, and deviants, and those who lie with man
I know that God can save them all if they follow his plan

 

Chorus
Sing Hallelujah to on High, sing him praises until I’m
On my knees, then repeat and I’ll keep serenading
Sing convictions to the king, crooning carols endlessly
Maybe then I’ll earn a seat at Jesus’s feet
Hoping heaven hears my pleas
Hoping God is listening
Maybe then I’ll earn a seat at Jesus’s feet

 

Bridge
Sometimes I take the road to Rome, seeing cities burn to bones
See the people suffering and I wish that I was home
In my mind I still believe God is good so why does he
Let good people suffer while he lives immortal life of luxury?
Maybe I’m not good enough if I don’t believe his love
Heals all strife but I can see it when the lightning strikes above
I see people keel in pain, taking the Lord’s name in vain
And I wonder what’s the purpose again?

 

Chorus
Sing Hallelujah to on High, but I still don’t know if I
Still believe, but maybe if I keep serenading
Sing convictions to the king, crooning carols endlessly
Maybe then I’ll earn a seat at Jesus’s feet
Hoping heaven hears my pleas
Hoping God is listening
But I’ll never earn a seat at Jesus’s feet

 

Verse
It’s like I have awakened for the first time
I see the Earth in technicolor with new eyes
Narcotized emotions take control
And voices beckon me towards a new goal
Maybe God’s a puppet master pulling all our strings
He sets fire to the Earth because he delights in suffering
If I’m not his child I’m just a sycophant
Maybe I’m ready to follow my own footprints

 

Alternate Chorus
Harmonies of hallelujah fall flat
Why would I sing praises to a psychopath?
Only narcissists believe immortal life
Could ever be more than eternal strife
Now I know of heaven’s fraud
One that I had spread abroad
And it only stops by killing God

 

Verse
Mia madre says she worries for my sanity
Like God hasn’t destroyed the Earth’s sanctity
Mio padre says I should take my medicine
And if I keep on spiraling I’m dead to him
But why would I take pills to numb the rage?
If feeling something’s crazy maybe I’m insane
Something in my head says I should go
Take a knife and take the road to Rome

 

Alternate Chorus
Harmonies of hallelujah fall flat
Why would I sing praises to a psychopath?
Only narcissists believe immortal life
Could ever be more than eternal strife
Now I know of heaven’s fraud
One that I had spread abroad
And it only stops by killing God

 

Bridge
I stumble around the Vatican, feeling frenzy in my eyes
Blurred faces fill the spaces I shuffle past
The rage consumes me faster
I thrust the wooden doors of the Sistine open
I feel its fabled frescoes mocking me
God reaches out to Adam on the ceiling
Beginning man’s torment
Prenda anche del frutto dell’albero della vita
E ne mangi, e viva in perpetuo
Enslaved to sing his praises eternally

 

I feel the paint envelop me
I’m taken to heaven in a chariot of acrylic blues
Angels encircle me, singing tunes and tributes
I hear fear in the cracks in their voices
Millenia of stolen harmonies sweep the clouds
And I see God now
His outstretched arms extend toward me
Il diavolo e Dio, a tetralogy of malice
I unsheath my blade and say a prayer to myself

 

Chorus
Sang Hallelujah to on High, but now I know that I
I believe in nothing and the truth is deafening
I convicted the king, killed a crook and now he bleeds
Jesus falls at my feet
Heaven dims like candlelight
And falls into a silent night
God is dead and my world fades to white

 

Jackson ate this like a buffet

[Remmy]

3 hours ago, Aurora said:

I just wanted to take a quick moment to acknowledge that while we're now at the halfway point of this tournament, it really does only feel like Golden Hit is just beginning. This experience has already been so rewarding and fun as a host-judge and I hope it has been wonderful for you all as well. fountain and I were really excited to bring back this format in a new way but certainly didn't anticipate this turnout or positive reception, and to still be having over twenty active participants four rounds in is amazing... I don't think ATRL has seen this much interest in a songwriting tournament since Song of the Season launched back in 2019. 

 

We're at the point of the tournament that every submission counts, so if you're undecided whether to submit for a particular round during the remainder of the tournament, I'd strongly suggest you submit something, even if you don't consider it your best. There's always the chance that the judges might disagree in your favour—see Jackson's entry this week! The title of Winner of Golden Hit is still anyone's to claim at this point seeing as the scores have been so close thus far; one really strong moment is all it might take to put you in serious contention. If that's something you're interested in, I'd strongly urge you to submit!

 

That brings me to the end of this mini mid-season morale booster. I can't wait for everyone to see what else we have in store for Golden Hit in the future... the journey may not be over as soon as one may think!

[diamondsky]

9 hours ago, Achilles. said:

Fight is really good and Weekenders is amazing. So much talent on display.

 

9 hours ago, Remmy said:

Sounds like a smash to me!  and I love how we're taken through every part of the weekend including the aftermath on Monday

Thank you 

[OreGuy]

9 hours ago, Aurora said:

I just wanted to take a quick moment to acknowledge that while we're now at the halfway point of this tournament, it really does only feel like Golden Hit is just beginning. This experience has already been so rewarding and fun as a host-judge and I hope it has been wonderful for you all as well. fountain and I were really excited to bring back this format in a new way but certainly didn't anticipate this turnout or positive reception, and to still be having over twenty active participants four rounds in is amazing... I don't think ATRL has seen this much interest in a songwriting tournament since Song of the Season launched back in 2019. 

 

We're at the point of the tournament that every submission counts, so if you're undecided whether to submit for a particular round during the remainder of the tournament, I'd strongly suggest you submit something, even if you don't consider it your best. There's always the chance that the judges might disagree in your favour—see Jackson's entry this week! The title of Winner of Golden Hit is still anyone's to claim at this point seeing as the scores have been so close thus far; one really strong moment is all it might take to put you in serious contention. If that's something you're interested in, I'd strongly urge you to submit!

 

That brings me to the end of this mini mid-season morale booster. I can't wait for everyone to see what else we have in store for Golden Hit in the future... the journey may not be over as soon as one may think!

thank you legend, this format has been insightful which a lot of people wouldn't be able to get if they get cut during Round 2.

[fountain]

1 hour ago, OreGuy said:

thank you legend, this format has been insightful which a lot of people wouldn't be able to get if they get cut during Round 2.

 

[Remmy]

making a little progress but i think i realized i'm homophobic??????? like i can't relate to these freaks lol

[Prisoner]

1 hour ago, Remmy said:

making a little progress but i think i realized i'm homophobic??????? like i can't relate to these freaks lol

Found out I'm homophobic as well 

[fountain]

1 hour ago, Remmy said:

making a little progress but i think i realized i'm homophobic??????? like i can't relate to these freaks lol

Me after reading any other thread on this site

[Achilles.]

9 hours ago, Remmy said:

making a little progress but i think i realized i'm homophobic??????? like i can't relate to these freaks lol

Had this realization looking at Target’s god awful pride merch online earlier. 
 

Corporations really be like “we’ll just list a bunch of pronouns on a shirt.” Gays don’t want shirts covered in pronouns, gays want shirts covered in Cate Blanchett’s face.

[fountain]

9 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

Had this realization looking at Target’s god awful pride merch online earlier. 
 

Corporations really be like “we’ll just list a bunch of pronouns on a shirt.” Gays don’t want shirts covered in pronouns, gays want shirts covered in Cate Blanchett’s face.

 

[Remmy]

8 hours ago, Prisoner said:

Found out I'm homophobic as well 

Perio-- I mean, right on brother!!

8 hours ago, fountain said:

Me after reading any other thread on this site

especially after the 100,000th Britney vs. Christina and 1,000,000th Gaga vs. Katy fight

27 minutes ago, Achilles. said:

Had this realization looking at Target’s god awful pride merch online earlier. 
 

Corporations really be like “we’ll just list a bunch of pronouns on a shirt.” Gays don’t want shirts covered in pronouns, gays want shirts covered in Cate Blanchett’s face.

No for real... I feel like any shirt that only has words on it is generally awful and usually has an insanely corny phrase or some type of reference/meme/trend that will age poorly in a year or less. I actually have a theory that anti-LGBTQ+ companies make those shirts so it's easier for us to get targeted in the streets

 

If anyone ever catches me in merch that displays my identity it'll be THIS

[Better Mistakes]

I don't know whether to submit a different song? I've just wrote one and I am crying 

 

 

?

Her eyes are blue and mine are brown, you 

Wanna see the hues that lure you 

Will never love the boy who needs you 

 

 

[fountain]

59 minutes ago, Remmy said:

especially after the 100,000th Britney vs. Christina and 1,000,000th Gaga vs. Katy fight

“__________ flopped, why?”

 

like girl idk?? who tf cares!!

[fountain]

15 minutes ago, Better Mistakes said:

I don't know whether to submit a different song? I've just wrote one and I am crying 

 

 

?

Her eyes are blue and mine are brown, you 

Wanna see the hues that lure you 

Will never love the boy who needs you 

 

 

I like the sound of this 

[Remmy]

15 minutes ago, fountain said:

“__________ flopped, why?”

 

like girl idk?? who tf cares!!

Exactly... and so many threads are about how successful/unsuccessful a song/album/artist is but I just wanna share my opinions, not chart and sales history 

[Better Mistakes]

@fountain @Aurora I've resubmitted. please use the info from my first entry in this entry too

[fountain]

24 minutes ago, Remmy said:

Exactly... and so many threads are about how successful/unsuccessful a song/album/artist is but I just wanna share my opinions, not chart and sales history 

I mean yeah, I really couldn’t care less about that stuff and I don’t really know why people do. Then again, you and I have been on this site for a while, I remember back in the day when I was younger I thought that stuff was entertaining but of course you eventually outgrow and mature. Ultimately if a song is good… it’s good… and anything else beyond that is irrelevant. Stan culture is just misery  but somehow still has a grip on people 

[fountain]

5 minutes ago, Better Mistakes said:

@fountain @Aurora I've resubmitted. please use the info from my first entry in this entry too

Will do, thank you

[Remmy]

48 minutes ago, fountain said:

I mean yeah, I really couldn’t care less about that stuff and I don’t really know why people do. Then again, you and I have been on this site for a while, I remember back in the day when I was younger I thought that stuff was entertaining but of course you eventually outgrow and mature. Ultimately if a song is good… it’s good… and anything else beyond that is irrelevant. Stan culture is just misery  but somehow still has a grip on people 

Yup  It's definitely something you outgrow from eventually... for most. At this point I'm too old to be debating over someone else's successes & failures! How well an artist does or how their fanbase behaves has no impact on me.

[fountain]

50 minutes ago, Remmy said:

Yup  It's definitely something you outgrow from eventually... for most. At this point I'm too old to be debating over someone else's successes & failures! How well an artist does or how their fanbase behaves has no impact on me.

Spilled 

 

[Achilles.]

3 hours ago, Remmy said:

I actually have a theory that anti-LGBTQ+ companies make those shirts so it's easier for us to get targeted in the streets

My theory is that corporations don’t actually care about selling decent products and just want people walking in the store to see their tacky ass rainbow merch and pronoun shirts and be like “oh cool Target is inclusive.” 
 

And yeah I hate any sort of words on my clothing. Always have. The way I’ve been wearing mostly solid-color tees since middle school, with the occasional stripes or graphic design thrown in. My “I’m not a billboard, actually” phase started very young.  
 

 

 

Rainbow merch and pronoun shirts rhymes. Let me jot it down in my notes.

Edited June 7, 2022 by Achilles.

[Euterpe]

For other songs I had too little words, but I fear I am writing too many. Evanescence to effervescence as @Element would say.

[fountain]

15 minutes ago, Euterpe said:

For other songs I had too little words, but I fear I am writing too many. Evanescence to effervescence as @Element would say.

I’d say there is no such thing as too many 

 

more is more > less is more