Remmy Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 56 minutes ago, fountain said: I fear we might actually be soul sistersβ¦ because I am an Obsessed Sail On Hater tooΒ Β I feel like itβs a song that you cling to and end up stanning when you first get into her but then you become more acquainted with her better songs and it gets old very very quickly. Definitely my least fave on The Fool (but still better than anything anybody has released since!)Β Well hold on a second, even the weakest song on The Fool is still nice so I'm not a OSOHΒ Β But yeah I feel that. Actually, Promises fits that description perfectly for me. I was addicted to it at first but then it went down my album ranking as time went on. 35 minutes ago, Aurora said: I feel called out. Β It was my fave on the Promises EP and a big inspiration for my then career-defining bop "Set Sail" during PH7 (well that, "The Fool", and Ryn in general), which in turnΒ inspired my 2017 career Top 3 bop "Positano". The way I have Ryn to thank for 2/3 of my Top 3... her mind. Awww cuteΒ
Better Mistakes Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 This immaculate bop is actually over 500 words Β Β
Aurora Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 3 hours ago, mxtthewdelrey said: @AuroraΒ thank you so so so much for my review, I'm really glad you liked the song, and your kind words make me feel so motivated! And perhaps even more touched that you listened to some of Ness's stuff and liked it. Make sure to stream her best song if you haven't already Β Β Β This was cute, but "dying on the inside" and "i hope ur miserable until ur dead" are better, I fear. Β Finally finalised my scores ahead of Round 2's results show. Still a few things to prepare, but hopefully we're on track for this one to go off without a hitch! Hints maybe coming soon-ish. Side note, I lowkey entered my Simon era with the scores this round; almost 0.3 points lower on average. Β Let's hope the ATW challenge sees the acclaim soaring βοΈ again.
Remmy Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 me thinking of all the different songs I could write this round Β
Aurora Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 Hey Hitmakers, I know I said I was going to try and do hints but honestly I just wasn't feeling up to it. Instead, I wanted to share this poem I wrote. I know it's a little unconventional, but I think it's a bit of a cultural shift if I do say so myself! βtildeβ I never underestimated the power of an asterisk, and they should never underestimate an asterisk either the percentage of asterisks here is unusually high, why settle for one asterisk? have another asterisk their power instead comes from profit, an asterisk for themΒ may also lead to profit their power requires some afterthought, their profit is marked with an asterisk, and theirs is at the end their power is twice as powerful as the othersβ, and theirs is alone their power is measured by the pound, their power is very important! while their power is great and true~ Β a lone afterthought, a power in the 39th percentile, an isolated power, and a power combined, form a percentile at the threshold when the asterisk returns at long last, another asterisk provides their power their percentage of profit is fair, while their percentage is powerful their power is at its limit, while their percentile is unmatched, and their profit is not one final, lonely asterisk, an afterthought at last~
GentleDance Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 4 hours ago, Aurora said: Hey Hitmakers, I know I said I was going to try and do hints but honestly I just wasn't feeling up to it. Instead, I wanted to share this poem I wrote. I know it's a little unconventional, but I think it's a bit of a cultural shift if I do say so myself! βtildeβ I never underestimated the power of an asterisk, and they should never underestimate an asterisk either the percentage of asterisks here is unusually high, why settle for one asterisk? have another asterisk their power instead comes from profit, an asterisk for themΒ may also lead to profit their power requires some afterthought, their profit is marked with an asterisk, and theirs is at the end their power is twice as powerful as the othersβ, and theirs is alone their power is measured by the pound, their power is very important! while their power is great and true~ Β a lone afterthought, a power in the 39th percentile, an isolated power, and a power combined, form a percentile at the threshold when the asterisk returns at long last, another asterisk provides their power their percentage of profit is fair, while their percentage is powerful their power is at its limit, while their percentile is unmatched, and their profit is not one final, lonely asterisk, an afterthought at last~ Β Really liked this, made me think of Borderline from Joni, but they're actually very differentΒ
Aurora Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 57 minutes ago, GentleDance said: Β Really liked this, made me think of Borderline from Joni, but they're actually very differentΒ Β I'm going to get some rest now, but live results are expected to begin at 6PM EDT (about 9.5 hours from this post). Hopefully Element will have some reviews for you also, and of course there are fountain's hints on page 65 if you haven't already seen those. Again, truly sorry I wasn't feeling up to doing hints this week, but I hope my poem shifts some creativity within you all for the ATW10MVTVFTV challenge!
Julia Fox Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 (edited) Just finished my song x itβs about reborn and seeing yourself after a shitty period of lifetime x 520 words tho Edited May 29, 2022 by Julia Fox
fountain Posted May 29, 2022 Author Posted May 29, 2022 7 hours ago, Aurora said: βtildeβ I never underestimated the power of an asterisk, and they should never underestimate an asterisk either the percentage of asterisks here is unusually high, why settle for one asterisk? have another asterisk their power instead comes from profit, an asterisk for themΒ may also lead to profit their power requires some afterthought, their profit is marked with an asterisk, and theirs is at the end their power is twice as powerful as the othersβ, and theirs is alone their power is measured by the pound, their power is very important! while their power is great and true~ Β a lone afterthought, a power in the 39th percentile, an isolated power, and a power combined, form a percentile at the threshold when the asterisk returns at long last, another asterisk provides their power their percentage of profit is fair, while their percentage is powerful their power is at its limit, while their percentile is unmatched, and their profit is not one final, lonely asterisk, an afterthought at last~ Iβm feeling enlightened after this, I wonder who else will? Β
fountain Posted May 29, 2022 Author Posted May 29, 2022 1 hour ago, Aurora said: Β I'm going to get some rest now, but live results are expected to begin at 6PM EDT (about 9.5 hours from this post). Hopefully Element will have some reviews for you also, and of course there are fountain's hints on page 65 if you haven't already seen those. Again, truly sorry I wasn't feeling up to doing hints this week, but I hope my poem shifts some creativity within you all for the ATW10MVTVFTV challenge! It is a shame you couldnβt do hints this round. I liked your poem though. Oh well, Iβm sure it can always be figured out. Iβm excited for results.Β
Julia Fox Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 (edited) 1 minute ago, fountain said: Iβm feeling enlightened after this, I wonder who else will? Β Send your shite entry kween x and Iβll give you a preview of my song endrophyΒ Edited May 29, 2022 by Julia Fox
fountain Posted May 29, 2022 Author Posted May 29, 2022 10 minutes ago, Julia Fox said: Send your shite entry kween x and Iβll give you a preview of my song endrophyΒ
Julia Fox Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 (edited) ENDROPHY by Julia FoxΒ (artwork actually painted by me and itβs a masterpiece if I do say so myself x) Β Quote A stranger that you thought you know, thatβs what love was for me used to dream with it, but never felt it under my skin Always said 'when I will find what I'm looking for so long?' But in reality it was always there, but I never knew it till todayβ¦ Β Edited May 29, 2022 by Julia Fox
DatChickDoe Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 8 hours ago, Aurora said: Hey Hitmakers, I know I said I was going to try and do hints but honestly I just wasn't feeling up to it. Instead, I wanted to share this poem I wrote. I know it's a little unconventional, but I think it's a bit of a cultural shift if I do say so myself! βtildeβ I never underestimated the power of an asterisk, and they should never underestimate an asterisk either the percentage of asterisks here is unusually high, why settle for one asterisk? have another asterisk their power instead comes from profit, an asterisk for themΒ may also lead to profit their power requires some afterthought, their profit is marked with an asterisk, and theirs is at the end their power is twice as powerful as the othersβ, and theirs is alone their power is measured by the pound, their power is very important! while their power is great and true~ Β a lone afterthought, a power in the 39th percentile, an isolated power, and a power combined, form a percentile at the threshold when the asterisk returns at long last, another asterisk provides their power their percentage of profit is fair, while their percentage is powerful their power is at its limit, while their percentile is unmatched, and their profit is not one final, lonely asterisk, an afterthought at last~ This is gorgeously written.Β
DatChickDoe Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 I am going to take a risk and avoid a chorus.Β Days Spill On Like Blood Β Channeling my inner Disturbed stanΒ
Julia Fox Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 2 hours ago, Julia Fox said: ENDROPHY by Julia FoxΒ (artwork actually painted by me and itβs a masterpiece if I do say so myself x) Β Β Is this that bad that no one is talking about this masterpiece if I do say so myself? X
Remmy Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 2 hours ago, Julia Fox said: ENDROPHY by Julia FoxΒ (artwork actually painted by me and itβs a masterpiece if I do say so myself x) Β Β beautiful lyrics queen Β and the painting makes me want to get back to putting myself in dangerous situations!!! let me go do some rooftop parkour later today
Julia Fox Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 1 minute ago, Remmy said: beautiful lyrics queen Β and the painting makes me want to get back to putting myself in dangerous situations!!! let me go do some rooftop parkour later today ya thank you queen, let me join you because life has been harsh later because my son said he wasnβt gay and i actually felt depressed if I do say so myself x smoking a blunt to start dissociating because life has no sense if my son is not gayΒ
Better Mistakes Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 Might submit a page from my MSc. Dissertation βcause Iβm stumped and into mindless pop songsΒ
Remmy Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 15 minutes ago, Julia Fox said: ya thank you queen, let me join you because life has been harsh later because my son said he wasnβt gay and i actually felt depressed if I do say so myself x smoking a blunt to start dissociating because life has no sense if my son is not gayΒ awww that's sad!! but leave the trauma dumping for your music Β bless up
fountain Posted May 29, 2022 Author Posted May 29, 2022 1 hour ago, DatChickDoe said: I am going to take a risk and avoid a chorus.Β Days Spill On Like Blood Β Channeling my inner Disturbed stanΒ Props to anybody who tackles the challenge in this form Β Weβve been easy with it allowing people to write whatever they want, but personally this is how I envision and what I hope for this challenge, so anybody who does this gets my respect
DatChickDoe Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 16 minutes ago, fountain said: Props to anybody who tackles the challenge in this form Β Weβve been easy with it allowing people to write whatever they want, but personally this is how I envision and what I hope for this challenge, so anybody who does this gets my respect I will do my best not to let you downΒ
Prisoner Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 This round looks exciting. Currently listening to American Pie for that lengthy inspirationΒ Β
Hug Posted May 29, 2022 Posted May 29, 2022 I don't know how I'm going to do this entry and not have it sound like a high schooler stating what could be said with 5 words in 30 words just to meet word count. Β
ATRL Moderator Element Posted May 29, 2022 ATRL Moderator Posted May 29, 2022 OMG shut up at you doing Elio @Jackson Β I love her sm. Went to her show a few weeks ago and met her afterwards!! She's so nice.
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