swiftie13 Posted June 25, 2017 Posted June 25, 2017 On 6/24/2017 at 6:23 PM, UFO said: ffffff 7.5 is still a good score! probably higher than what y'all have given me for my songs this season. a KII Writer in the dark is the best song get some taste, clearly you have some cause of the others being a 10/10 but like it's the best song bye
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 25, 2017 Posted June 25, 2017 A part of me wants to write a bjork-esque breakup dual song called "fetish/ after sex", but the other part of me wants something anthemic, something which has that feeling of an album closer. I don't know what to do
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, swiftie13 said: Writer in the dark is the best song get some taste, clearly you have some cause of the others being a 10/10 but like it's the best song bye Nnnnnn idk. It just seems like the weakest track. It's a good song but it doesnt click with me as well as the others. And I literally don't know why I think it's cause of the piano I LOVE the "I am my mother's child" part tho Edited June 26, 2017 by UFO
ceremonials Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said: The best way to sleep is on top of a slave This white supremacy
fountain Posted June 26, 2017 Author Posted June 26, 2017 21 minutes ago, ceremonials said: This white supremacy Mouf wide open
Temporal Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: hug cleaning up the scattered remains of temporal after the feud Not when I kept her from #1, my impact!
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) I literally just finished my song. I wrote it in an hour The words just kept flowing and before I knew it, I was done. I'm definitely proud to submit it as my last song of the season (especially since my theme has been Catharsis) but I won't submit it straight away. I'll use the rest of the time left to proof-read it and make sure I'm 100% satisfied! My song this week is called: Dear Whoever Is Listening I still need to decide the artwork for it lol, I'm not really sure what image would be the best to represent it ahdkfkdksjjs Edited June 26, 2017 by UFO
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: girl delete the comma in your song title im saying this as a friend (for once) Wait why? I'm usually okay with grammar but does it really work better without the comma?
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: i mean it just flows better without it and grammar wise its objectively wrong to use it there Oh okay! Thank you nnnn It makes sense because the lyric "dear whoever is listening" in my actual song flows as one line and there's no comma
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) Dear Whoever Is Listening When I wake up the birds sing my nightmares back to me Edited June 26, 2017 by UFO
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 2 hours ago, UFO said: Dear Whoever Is Listening When I wake up the birds sing my nightmares back to me A visual artist ! Edited June 26, 2017 by FCKNAmbrosia
UFO Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 6 hours ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: A visual artist! Thank you henny I try my best when it comes to aesthetic Edited June 26, 2017 by UFO
Glassmouth Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 Is there someone who can give me some critiques on my song?
fountain Posted June 26, 2017 Author Posted June 26, 2017 Yo I'm eating pizza just thought I'd let you know
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 3 hours ago, Glassmouth said: Is there someone who can give me some critiques on my song? me
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 7-17-8-12-1 My chart run is a mess Edited June 26, 2017 by FCKNAmbrosia
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 10 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: I thought "artist" sounds better but I hadn't been swift enough to edit it before he quoted me
Glassmouth Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 4 minutes ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: me let me send it to u
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 6 minutes ago, Hug said: 1 - 19 - 7 - 4 - 2 My run slays if you ignore Candle PH 10.5 winner tbh Wait... I think that @Lane Boy has all of his songs in top 10, even top 5 if I'm not wrong
Hug Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 1 minute ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: PH 10.5 winner tbh Wait... I think that @Lane Boy has all of his songs in top 10, even top 5 if I'm not wrong Top 10 I think so, but I remember in dubtrack he said he had a song peak at #10, so not Top 5. Anyway, yeah he slayed the consistency.
FCKNAmbrosia Posted June 26, 2017 Posted June 26, 2017 I'm gonna force myself to write a good song this round just to snatch that top 5 tbh. I don't wanna be an one hit wonder
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