firecrotch Posted October 23, 2020 Posted October 23, 2020 Yay #6 again! Glad no one was eliminated, everyone left is such a strong writer! And omg this new round looks so fun! Excited
8thPrince Posted October 23, 2020 Posted October 23, 2020 4 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: me when @8thPrince got the #1 my zodiac being about never getting enough and yours being about failure.... prepare for a repeat next week!
fountain Posted October 23, 2020 Posted October 23, 2020 3 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: my zodiac being about never getting enough and yours being about failure.... prepare for a repeat next week! Always the bridesmaid, never the bride
fountain Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 @ughgabriel @Courtney Love @Auburn @Prisoner do you feel like the double entries take away from each other at all? I’ve found it fulfilling creatively but I don’t know if it may become distracting or obnoxious or something at a point, especially because I tend to be long to begin with? I’m just wondering how it’s coming across.
Hug Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 Just realized this challenge is the PERFECT opportunity to use a title I have wanted to use for a while.
ughgabriel Posted October 24, 2020 Author Posted October 24, 2020 3 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said: @ughgabriel @Courtney Love @Auburn @Prisoner do you feel like the double entries take away from each other at all? I’ve found it fulfilling creatively but I don’t know if it may become distracting or obnoxious or something at a point, especially because I tend to be long to begin with? I’m just wondering how it’s coming across. Not really; I think you’ve found ways of connecting your dual entries! Whether it is by tying the two stories or writing different meanings to the same title. I think they’ve worked because of these connections you’ve had on them! I think my only advice would be to make sure that both parts are crucial to your entry and to make both of them as great as possible to the point where it’s going to be hard for you to choose a favorite or to guess which one would be the judges’ favorite. I think that’s a good sign that you’ve written two masterpieces in one entry!
ughgabriel Posted October 24, 2020 Author Posted October 24, 2020 3 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Not really; I think you’ve found ways of connecting your dual entries! Whether it is by tying the two stories or writing different meanings to the same title. I think they’ve worked because of these connections you’ve had on them! I think my only advice would be to make sure that both parts are crucial to your entry and to make both of them as great as possible to the point where it’s going to be hard for you to choose a favorite or to guess which one would be the judges’ favorite. I think that’s a good sign that you’ve written two masterpieces in one entry! I just wanted to add, because I might have used the wrong words, I’ve enjoyed all your double entries. I just said that because during the last round you had some expectations on which song would be better received. So I think it would be even better if you think both songs are that good that the judges won’t even be able to decide which one is their favorite
Auburn Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 4 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said: @ughgabriel @Courtney Love @Auburn @Prisoner do you feel like the double entries take away from each other at all? I’ve found it fulfilling creatively but I don’t know if it may become distracting or obnoxious or something at a point, especially because I tend to be long to begin with? I’m just wondering how it’s coming across. I don't have a problem with double entries, I usually love songs like that. As long as the songs are related and it doesn't feel like it drags too much by the end then I'm all for it!
fountain Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 45 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Not really; I think you’ve found ways of connecting your dual entries! Whether it is by tying the two stories or writing different meanings to the same title. I think they’ve worked because of these connections you’ve had on them! I think my only advice would be to make sure that both parts are crucial to your entry and to make both of them as great as possible to the point where it’s going to be hard for you to choose a favorite or to guess which one would be the judges’ favorite. I think that’s a good sign that you’ve written two masterpieces in one entry! 31 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: I just wanted to add, because I might have used the wrong words, I’ve enjoyed all your double entries. I just said that because during the last round you had some expectations on which song would be better received. So I think it would be even better if you think both songs are that good that the judges won’t even be able to decide which one is their favorite I should probably stop saying anything because when I do I feel like it gets misinterpreted
Hug Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 So the song title I wanted to use will just have to be put on hold, I think I have a different idea that I could probably write about easier ????
ceremonials Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 11 hours ago, Hug said: Just realized this challenge is the PERFECT opportunity to use a title I have wanted to use for a while. This Pyramidhead tea, silent hills impact
Hug Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 Okay I have something but I'm not submitting it yet ?????
ughgabriel Posted October 24, 2020 Author Posted October 24, 2020 2 hours ago, ceremonials said: This Pyramidhead tea, silent hills impact That’s what came to my mind as well!
8thPrince Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 This round is so interesting but not sure how I want to approach it since I've had darker themes for like the last 3 or 4 rounds... I wanna write something cute again, eventually!
fountain Posted October 24, 2020 Posted October 24, 2020 19 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: This round is so interesting but not sure how I want to approach it since I've had darker themes for like the last 3 or 4 rounds... I wanna write something cute again, eventually! I feel like, at least the few that I looked at, have room to not just be darkdarkdarkdarkdarkdarkdarkdarkDARK!!!, they say something positive too. Plus I don’t think all of the traits mentioned are specifically negative or bad to have either, it just depends on how you use them personally.
Hug Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 I've yet to write anything dark, and mine is literally just about anger idk how to make that cute.
Hug Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 My entry this week ✨✨✨✨ ?REC 2: Snuff Tape [Hug x Bad Guy Hug Li] Spoiler [verse - Bad Guy Hug Li] First it was a sex tape This time it’s a snuff tape ?REC 1 and ?REC 2 Make you do a double take Now I’m serving two-faced (like a Gemini) If it’s eye for an eye I’ll still have three of mine You picked the wrong guy and you picked the wrong time If you wanna pick a fight you’re not in your right mind I’m a prison complex I got bars bars bars I got the game locked down I’m the jailer and the guard I got lyrics, I’m The Bard Yeah my Harper’s Bazaar All my HITS have been IT Call me Bill Skarsgård The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines ‘round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go [verse - Bad Guy Hug Li] Coming for your neck, better brace yourself Pop you in the jaw, better brace yourself You made a mistake, can’t erase yourself You can lie in the bed that you made yourself You double-crossed me like my name was Chris And the T’s even Christ can’t save you from this You act like a kid, but it’s not Make-a-Wish Man I’ll spit on your grave then I’ll go Take-a-Piss I’m a basilisk and you pissed me off I’m not a Beyblade but you ripped me off I have some real ones and they tipped me off Now I’m a red light and you must be stopped The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go [bridge - Bad Guy Hug Li] Hug Li, bad guy You always gave me bad vibes Now look who’s the bad guy Now who’s fucking mad right? You thought I was mad blind You thought we were mad tight But I saw the red flags Don’t you see the red light? Flashing flashing Lights lights Think I’ll cut your hands off Since you stabbed me in the back Then I’ll cut your tongue out For talking so much trash I’ll bust both your kneecaps Since you like to run around Then I’ll make your nose red Since you like to be a clown The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines ‘round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go
fountain Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 4 hours ago, Hug said: I've yet to write anything dark, and mine is literally just about anger idk how to make that cute. uwu
Prisoner Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 28 minutes ago, Hug said: My entry this week ✨✨✨✨ ?REC 2: Snuff Tape [Hug x Bad Guy Hug Li] Reveal hidden contents [verse - Bad Guy Hug Li] First it was a sex tape This time it’s a snuff tape ?REC 1 and ?REC 2 Make you do a double take Now I’m serving two-faced (like a Gemini) If it’s eye for an eye I’ll still have three of mine You picked the wrong guy and you picked the wrong time If you wanna pick a fight you’re not in your right mind I’m a prison complex I got bars bars bars I got the game locked down I’m the jailer and the guard I got lyrics, I’m The Bard Yeah my Harper’s Bazaar All my HITS have been IT Call me Bill Skarsgård The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines ‘round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go [verse - Bad Guy Hug Li] Coming for your neck, better brace yourself Pop you in the jaw, better brace yourself You made a mistake, can’t erase yourself You can lie in the bed that you made yourself You double-crossed me like my name was Chris And the T’s even Christ can’t save you from this You act like a kid, but it’s not Make-a-Wish Man I’ll spit on your grave then I’ll go Take-a-Piss I’m a basilisk and you pissed me off I’m not a Beyblade but you ripped me off I have some real ones and they tipped me off Now I’m a red light and you must be stopped The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go [bridge - Bad Guy Hug Li] Hug Li, bad guy You always gave me bad vibes Now look who’s the bad guy Now who’s ****ing mad right? You thought I was mad blind You thought we were mad tight But I saw the red flags Don’t you see the red light? Flashing flashing Lights lights Think I’ll cut your hands off Since you stabbed me in the back Then I’ll cut your tongue out For talking so much trash I’ll bust both your kneecaps Since you like to run around Then I’ll make your nose red Since you like to be a clown The truth is I’m brutish I’m ruthless I’ve made up my mind The truth is it’s fruitless You’re useless It’s your turn to die I got your name Your number And zero compassion I got the lights The camera I’m ready for action [pre-chorus - Hug] You’ll wish karma found you before me It’s over once the camera starts recording ‘cause I don’t make threats, only promises I keep And I promise my revenge is gonna be eversweet [chorus - Hug] Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go Are you ready for your name in headlines ‘round the world? Once the red light flashes you’ll get you deserve Don’t let it get to your head But you’ll look good bleeding red Are you ready for your lead in your only starring role? Once the red light flashes it’s ready, set, go
Hug Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 Just now, Prisoner said: This means you're stanning yes?
Prisoner Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 Just now, Hug said: This means you're stanning yes? also a bit scared
Hug Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 2 minutes ago, Prisoner said: also a bit scared I did kinda turn into Eminem a bit at the end there
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