mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 FKA Diarrhoea's Critiques Cary Messiah (feelslikeadream) Quote idk this didn't slay me I expected more. I love this song but it's already quite slow and stripped back, making it even more minimal didn't work. Jack Reid (Jackson) Quote Again, you have a nice timbre to your voice but you don't really use it, you have a clear niche and it's not even that you don't go outside of it (which you don't) but it's as though you don't consider anything like production which has proven capable of lifting entries (Tymps' The Impossible Dream in particular) Janey (Janey) Quote Wait yaaaaas this was a great choice for you, lucky sis. Your voice broke in a few bits but that complimented the glitchy backing, but you really suited her voice whilst being different and the production was a break from what you've done before. Well-produced and well-sang (a bit nasal but not hugely-so), your best by far. Jack. E (MasterXPosed) Quote Quote The intro was unneeded, and the reverb was a biT extra, but you did great with it so who cares? At times it sounds like you're trying a bit much bit, but without that you probably wouldn't give as much as you clearly do so keep on going, sis. The obvious standout for two weeks in a row. Again, this basically applies... but without the final line. Why the effects? I get that sometimes they add to the entry, but this just seems as though you're trying to hide some flaws (which you don't even need to?) and other contestants don't need this in their entries. It removes the emotional directness that others have. Tymps (Tymps.) Quote Okay so I don't think that this is your fault but the choice is a mess. The before the second verse 'oooooh!' was like the 'yeaaaaah!' in the Black Widow radio edit in terms of being jarring. I feel like you have the same niche as Jack Reid, but you're more adventurous and do it better.
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 mxtthewdelrey's "Critiques" Cary Messiah (feelslikeadream) Quote stunning. very talented guy, would like 2 know more about u Jack Reid (Jackson) Quote whew this LIVE SHOW this week with all the live instruments. queen of guitars, queen of pretty voices, queen of EVERYTHING ever. luv it! Janey (Janey) Quote oh biiiIIIIIIIIIIIITCH this is what you pull out at this stage of the competition? you doing something DIFFERENT by a complete LEGEND and SLAYING IT??? yaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAS queen I live. This is giving my life hunty. Yes mawma Jack. E (MasterXPosed) Quote This was Huge Tymps (Tymps.) Quote Pretty boy. Good fun
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 keshaspearsxo was too drunk to do critiques and Jaxswim died in a vicious and bloody car accident last week so is sadly no longer available to judge.
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 (edited) @Jackson @Janey @MasterXPosed @Tymps. @feelslikeadream Edited February 26, 2017 by mxtthewdelrey
Kelp Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 Cool so I'm in the bottom I think :/ Judges please save me! I've reread Diarrhoea's comment like ten times because I'm illiterate and I still don't understand dd. But stan for my production in my The Impossible Dream cover!! <3
fountain Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 32 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said: keshaspearsxo was too drunk to do critiques True but I love them all you and you all remind me of a young Marlene Dietrich
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: True but I love them all you and you all remind me of a young Marlene Dietrich they were all very good this week I agree! I didn't give anything lower than a 9 nnn
fountain Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 1 minute ago, mxtthewdelrey said: they were all very good this week I agree! I didn't give anything lower than a 9 nnn It's scary at this stage but I'm a loyal hoe
Janey Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 I thank @feelslikeadream a thousand times for this song choice And thank you judges for your mercy (Mess that only 2 judges submitted their critiques though. My good sis @Jaxswim betrayed me like this )
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 1 minute ago, Janey said: My good sis @Jaxswim betrayed me like this It doesn't count as a betrayal when the good sis is dead
Kelp Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 Screaming at the #1 this round being the only person that didn't choose a song choice I gave them. Come on unintentional sabotage
Jackson Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 2 hours ago, mxtthewdelrey said: it's not even that you don't go outside of it (which you don't) this is the first acoustic singer/songwriter-y song I've done in weeks so idgi
ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted February 26, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted February 26, 2017 1 hour ago, Janey said: I thank @feelslikeadream a thousand times for this song choice nnnn you're welcome sis. I really didn't expect you to pick it, but it seems like it was a good choice after all
MasterXPosed Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 (edited) I understand at the reverb. I honestly just couldn't get my mic to sound good with the instrumental so reverb smooths it out and makes it sound it's best, at least to me. Again that's all the effects i add and it doesn't change my voice, and if i get through next week i already got a new program that will fix those issues so no reverb will be added anymore. But excited for results. Edited February 26, 2017 by MasterXPosed
fountain Posted February 26, 2017 Posted February 26, 2017 Jack E's technical difficulties don't take away from his talent, y'all crazy
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 In no particular order... THE FIRST PERSON WHO IS SAFE IS... Spoiler Jack Reid (Jackson)
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 In no particular order... THE SECOND PERSON WHO IS SAFE IS... Spoiler Tymps (Tymps.)
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 In no particular order... THE FINAL PERSON TO BE SAFE IS... Spoiler Janey (Janey)
mxtthewdelrey Posted February 26, 2017 Author Posted February 26, 2017 That means.. THE BOTTOM 2 THIS WEEK ARE... Hide contents Cary Messiah (feelslikeadream) Jack. E (MasterXPosed) @keshaspearsxo @Vasectomy Judges... you have until 3pm GMT tomorrow to save one of the bottom two from being eliminated
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