ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 28, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 28, 2017 8 minutes ago, minho said: i haven't been able to start, this has been a busy week for me. hopefully i can get something tonight but i have yet to read the story. Honestly the wiki pages for the movie and short story are more than enough for this challenge
smholiv Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 1 minute ago, Tsareena said: Honestly the wiki pages for the movie and short story are more than enough for this challenge really? ok let me see what i can come up with then since i've read the wiki entries
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 9 hours ago, Tsareena said: okay songwriters help me out here. When you're writing, do you come up with a rhyme scheme as you're doing the first draft or do you wait till you have the first draft done then edit it to rhyme? When I try to do the former, my writing ends up being random and I lose the concept in a few lines just because of the rhyming but for the latter, some of the emotion of the verses gets lost as you edit like the Heptapod B language, I often come up with both at the same time, simultaneously, all together OT: Time to work on V1.1.4 of my song (or whatever version this is now, I've lost count) but I'm liking how it's going.
SaintWest Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 ya'll acting like this challenge is the hardest all themes/ideas explored that you could use: lemme bulletproof her for ya language communication future children love death foreign aliens space sci-fi ships words understanding things by kylie jenner stranger
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 1 minute ago, SaintWest said: ya'll acting like this challenge is the hardest all themes/ideas explored that you could use: lemme bulletproof her for ya language communication future children love death foreign aliens space sci-fi ships words understanding things by kylie jenner stranger and yet mine is something entirely different #indiecred
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 28, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 28, 2017 13 minutes ago, Aurora said: like the Heptapod B language, I often come up with both at the same time, simultaneously, all together OT: Time to work on V1.1.4 of my song (or whatever version this is now, I've lost count) but I'm liking how it's going. I love my talented seven limbed sister
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 18 minutes ago, SaintWest said: ya'll acting like this challenge is the hardest all themes/ideas explored that you could use: lemme bulletproof her for ya language communication future children love death foreign aliens space sci-fi ships words understanding things by kylie jenner stranger it's the hardest for me personally so far—doesn't mean it'll be that way for everyone tho my song involves four of these concepTs
SaintWest Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 34 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: language and communication goes hand in hand, love and death are trite and nobody wants to see them anymore, future isn't news, sci-fi encompasses aliens space ships and i guess whatever you mean by stranger and foreign didnt ask. go back to watching between the lion and reading harold and the purple ****ing crayon 20 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: it's the hardest for me personally so far—doesn't mean it'll be that way for everyone tho my song involves four of these concepTs i expect my writing credit then
SaintWest Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 6 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: you remembered my favorite color stanning for a talented hit #1 color also between the lion and harold and the purple crayon are ****ing iconic so it wasn't really a good drag to begin with, now was it.
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 Another draft finished. Will this be the final one, though? Only time will tell…
SaintWest Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 wow, i really did that and by that, i mean simply actually writing something, despite its lack of quality, instead of continually complaining about not having anything
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 5 minutes ago, SaintWest said: wow, i really did that and by that, i mean simply actually writing something, despite its lack of quality, instead of continually complaining about not having anything bahahahahaha me
touya kinomoto Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 Wikipedia ain't being a friend to me right now. Like I cannot find a good concept for my song. So I decided to download the syory and read it while on the homebound bus. Is two hours more than enough to finish reading the story? Anyone?
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 I think we have a final version, ladies! Do we stan?
SaintWest Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 21 minutes ago, Aurora said: I think we have a final version, ladies! Do we stan? inbox? open
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 “The Gift”inspired by the short story ‘Story of Your Life’ and the film ‘Arrival’, theme of regret “I caught a glimpse of something on his chair And left my youth behind without a care…”
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 3 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: did you see his vibrator
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 5 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: did you see his vibrator JAJDOSBAKHSJDJS
ceremonials Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 55 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: did you see his vibrator hot
ceremonials Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 me during the week while yall are writing me on thursday at 11:59pm
Aurora Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 4 hours ago, ceremonials said: me during the week while yall are writing me on thursday at 11:59pm It took me 4 hours to realise these were different. (to be fair I was at work on mobile, but still)
Hug Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 When I send my entries and cure the judges of depression
ceremonials Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 5 hours ago, Aurora said: It took me 4 hours to realise these were different. (to be fair I was at work on mobile, but still) N the differences are very slight but you can see a lil smile in the first!
Hug Posted September 28, 2017 Posted September 28, 2017 In honor of National Poetry Day, I figured I'd post my favorite PH entry, which I talked about yesterday. Obviously nobody cared, but we're celebrating a holiday.
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