ultraviolence.xx Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 (edited) 5 minutes ago, Aurora said: Pull through, king. Omg what? I thought you submitted already? i did but i had some work.mp3 to do Edited September 15, 2017 by ultraviolence.xx
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 Meanwhile Jackson is nowhere to be found, so looks like the deadline ain't up just yet!
poki Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 SENT at 12:00 Lorddd Song title: I Run Away Birthstone I chose: Garnet This is the song I worked on the most out of all my songs so far in this season. I hope it turned out well Oh cool, so far it seems like half the birthstones have a song (Peridot, Aquamarine, Pearl, Amethyst, Opal, Garnet) from what I've seen at least. It would be so awesome if every stone got a song! I think I've gotten the hang of not having forced rhymes in my songs. I was also more loose with my rhymes. Last few songs I kept doing AABB so I decided to change it to make it feel more "organic" if you get what I mean. Also tried out a different meter for most of the song. It's really fun and the writing process feels smoother for me with every song I write. For this song, I just wrote down whatever flowed out of my head, and polished it into the final draft. I hope I manage to make it to Phase 2. I've been in the bottom 3 for the last two rounds now, but some people apparently quit so I guess I shouldn't feel too paranoid. xoxo PoKiTaurus
touya kinomoto Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 I will be late again. I still have to finalize the verses and find someone to read my first and final draft. How am I supposed to get a high score and progress to the next phase if I keep on sending songs late?
ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted September 15, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 15, 2017 6 hours ago, Covergirl said: The Death of the Ruby Rose Love Demon my new song Just wrote it and sent it, probably a foolish idea since I didn't read it over, but I got a creative burst and I have a huge safe net because of the previous rounds so I felt like I could take a risk! Is this really the title, sis?....
fountain Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 “Of Regret” inspired by the birthstone turquoise “A life filled with many years left to forget This must be what they call feelings of regret...”
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 12 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: “Of Regret” inspired by the birthstone turquoise “A life filled with many years left to forget This must be what they call feelings of regret...” HAVE MY CHILDREN
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 13 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: This must be what they call feelings of regret...” "these are what they call hard feelings of love" lorde is shaking
SaintWest Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 Submitted. I realized I'm not a very good writer, I'm just good at having random moments where I write something that's really good based off of a line that pops in my head.
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 2 minutes ago, Jackson said: Sent out entrie$$ where am i in the submission order? i feel like i was later than usual this week
Jackson Posted September 15, 2017 Author Posted September 15, 2017 1 minute ago, ultraviolence.xx said: where am i in the submission order? i feel like i was later than usual this week #3 n. you stay overachieving
Glassmouth Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 10 minutes ago, SaintWest said: Submitted. I realized I'm not a very good writer, I'm just good at having random moments where I write something that's really good based off of a line that pops in my head. serving emo-Gastrodonatella last mini season
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 1 minute ago, Jackson said: #3 n. you stay overachieving hghahjkdfhasdlf
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 okay but why are pears' cover, title and couplet all better than mine 8 minutes ago, SaintWest said: I'm just good at having random moments where I write something that's really good based off of a line that pops in my head. What do you think songwriting is, sis? Don't do yourself like that. "Midsummer" and "S.A.D." alone are proof that you're more than capable, and that's just scratching the surface. 2 minutes ago, Jackson said: Sent out entrie$$ We love a swift sendout!
fountain Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 2 minutes ago, Aurora said: okay but why are pears' cover, title and couplet all better than mine It's the only two lines in my whole song that rhyme aka automatic critical panning
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: It's the only two lines in my whole song that rhyme aka automatic critical panning For you, the Dr. Luke Challenge wouldn't even be a challenge. We should have a Max Martin Challenge, where we attempt to include as many nonsensical forced rhymes as possible akin to "I only wanna die alive" and "now that I've become who I really are".
fountain Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 Just now, Aurora said: For you, the Dr. Luke Challenge wouldn't even be a challenge. We should have a Max Martin Challenge, where we attempt to include as many nonsensical forced rhymes as possible akin to "I only wanna die alive" and "now that I've become who I really are". I think you mean Dr Seuss challenge!! Both dr challenges iconic tho But you're correct the Dr Luke one isn't either. I submitted two songs in your season that would qualify !
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 29 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I think you mean Dr Seuss challenge!! Both dr challenges iconic tho But you're correct the Dr Luke one isn't either. I submitted two songs in your season that would qualify ! Oh yes, Dr. Seuss was no rhymes, Dr. Luke was no repeating sections. That's right.
touya kinomoto Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 Sent my entry 3 and a half hours late. Good luck to me going through the next round. I'll post here my last song for this tournament so that you can all drag me to pits. It's fine. I already did that to myself so I'm numb.
touya kinomoto Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 EVERYONE DRAG ME!!! Spoiler [VERSE 1] I was lonely living alone In my monochromatic world My life was a sketch in a blank canvas My fate changed when you came along Armed with pallet instead of a sword To draw on color to my world at last [PRE-CHORUS] I was left breathless when I first saw you Felt like drowning in your pools of dark blue Am I hallucinating? Is it real, what I'm feeling? [CHORUS 1] We found love under opal skies Kaleidoscopic paradise You filled my world with every readiant hue All's aglow under opal skies You're my life's most brilliant surprise You filled my world with every readiant hue [HOOK] Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh [VERSE 2] Thought it's gonna be forever Kept my hopes alive in my heart When truly I was just chasing rainbows We were sailing in rough waters Our made-up world was falling apart I still saw it through rose-tinted windows [BRIDGE 2] I was left speechless when I learned the truth Felt lost trying to reconcile the sooth Am I hallucinating? Is it real, what I'm seeing? [CHORUS 2] I found you under opal skies Getting lost in someone else's eyes I wonder was I ever loved by you There you were under opal skies His rainbow words got you enticed I wonder was I ever loved by you [HOOK] Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh [BRIDGE] Got a broken heart from my misplaced trust The world we have built slowly turned to rust All I can do now is wave my white flag All I can do now is wave my white flag [CHORUS 3] I found love under opal skies Hurts to fall from the highest highs Wish I've known it was to good to be true I was dazzled by opal skies Blind to your technicolor lies Wish I've known it was to good to be true Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 If there is ever a non-rhyming challenge or some other quirk in this season, I just stumbled upon the BEST concept.
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 3 hours ago, KatyCatPH said: Reveal hidden contents [VERSE 1] I was lonely living alone In my monochromatic world My life was a sketch in a blank canvas My fate changed when you came along Armed with pallet instead of a sword To draw on color to my world at last [PRE-CHORUS] I was left breathless when I first saw you Felt like drowning in your pools of dark blue Am I hallucinating? Is it real, what I'm feeling? [CHORUS 1] We found love under opal skies Kaleidoscopic paradise You filled my world with every readiant hue All's aglow under opal skies You're my life's most brilliant surprise You filled my world with every readiant hue [HOOK] Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh [VERSE 2] Thought it's gonna be forever Kept my hopes alive in my heart When truly I was just chasing rainbows We were sailing in rough waters Our made-up world was falling apart I still saw it through rose-tinted windows [BRIDGE 2] I was left speechless when I learned the truth Felt lost trying to reconcile the sooth Am I hallucinating? Is it real, what I'm seeing? [CHORUS 2] I found you under opal skies Getting lost in someone else's eyes I wonder was I ever loved by you There you were under opal skies His rainbow words got you enticed I wonder was I ever loved by you [HOOK] Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh [BRIDGE] Got a broken heart from my misplaced trust The world we have built slowly turned to rust All I can do now is wave my white flag All I can do now is wave my white flag [CHORUS 3] I found love under opal skies Hurts to fall from the highest highs Wish I've known it was to good to be true I was dazzled by opal skies Blind to your technicolor lies Wish I've known it was to good to be true Under opal skies there was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you... ooh ooh ooh There was you Found a spare minute to read this, this is actually really cute. Whether or not it's the end of your time in this competition, you shouldn't let that discourage you because you've clearly got a good vision and understand of song and the only way you're going to get better is by keeping at it. Hoping you pull through, though! 0.3 points isn't really that much.
UFO Posted September 15, 2017 Posted September 15, 2017 I'll submit my song later today! Hopefully the penalty isn't too big nnn
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