poll My song writing is Grammy level. Agree?

[vinster13]

1. https://on.soundcloud.com/J81EkLpMpuwx1697A

 

When I woke in the morning I knew it was over

 

don’t look me in my eyes I don’t want us to get closer

 

you tried your best to keep me in your arms but i knew that we were never written in the stars

 

 

There’s no point in trying to make this work  

 

there’s no point, both of us will both get hurt 

 

i dont wanna run away but i know im not welcome to stay 

 

when you wake up one day  you’ll think of me and say

 “he was the love of my life, my life, my life but only for one night, one night” 

 

“he was the love of my life, my life, my life but only for one night, one night” 

 

you can’t have me back cause im gone for good no you can’t have me back even if you could 

 

cause I was the love of your life, your life, your life, but only for one night one night -night

Edited November 13, 2023 by vinster13

[Davidoff]

Beautiful gowns. 

[Queen.]

Sounds lovely good job

[vinster13]

5 minutes ago, Queen. said:

Sounds lovely good job

[Rider]

[JoeAg]

omg yes!! i knew it’d be you 

 

both of us deserve grammys for our music, if u ask me

[Comedor]

***** shut the **** up you thought you ate that?

[vinster13]

2 minutes ago, Comedor said:

***** shut the **** up you thought you ate that?

Well yes! Songwriting not production 

Edited November 13, 2023 by vinster13

[Comedor]

3 minutes ago, vinster13 said:

Well yes! Songwriting not production 

Slay legend in the making, would you work with producer hit maker Dr Luke? Also leaving this here just in case. 
 

 

[tili33]

now, imagine you bump into your ex 10 years later out of nowhere, and a fire was reawaken in you... you want him back... but only for one night... 

[KingWitch]

Sounds like poem not a song. Where's the catchy chorus ?

[Laura Palmer]

Is this satirical? 

[vinster13]

5 minutes ago, Laura Palmer said:

Is this satirical? 

Yea ofc

[John Slayne]

it is but scammys also give awards to anyone so it's not a high bar to clear

[Selegend]

Yes. 

 

 

[vinster13]

3 minutes ago, Selegend said:

Yes. 

 

 

 

[Haschwalth]

[flashfox]

Hmmm now I am going to pass on this one 

[modeblock]

I think this could work if we were in 2010 

 

as it stands, the recording academy would likely PASS on this one 

[BOOMBAYAH]

Reminds me of ecco2k/blade - actually can see this being a bop in the alt rave scene, keep going!