MusicLoverDude Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 MLD's Critiques  @fiercE - P!nk This is the one and only time were letting the picture and song speak for themselves actually works. We see P!nk's anger in the photo and we can feel her anger in Irrelevant. What I love the most about Irrelevant is that her anger is controlled. She understands what she is angry about but she isn't becoming an uncontrolled monster over it even though the issue at hand would give her every right to be. She is mature here while still being angry and that is an AMAZING feat to accomplish. Well done.  @Legend E - Kelly Clarkson Your write-up is amazing. You sold the picture well and your song choice was PERFECT. There's a reason Never Again has remained one of the few Kelly songs I still love all these years later.  @blackoutbaby - Rihanna Another solid picture. The breast-feeding is iconic already. The song choice is also perfect.  @Dessy - Ciara Ciara's pregnancy glow is perfect here. And the song is also very happy. Nice job  @Overprotected - Mariah Carey This write-up was chef's kiss. As a grocery store employee I totally relate to how Mariah's character feels. Well done. The song was also great. You probably would have won me over even more with Without You but this is still great.  @Queen. - Nicki Minaj I'm sorry but this picture was not strong enough on its own to sell sadness. All I see without a writeup is a pretty picture of Nicki in water. There is no emotion at all and because you chose not to write anything up, you will suffer the consequences of your laziness. Your song choice is at least sad though. My only issue is the production doesn't feel sad enough at times. So, good, but could have been better.  @Kylie Verzosa - Rosalia I'll be honest, I'm not disgusted by the pic. Carrie just happens to be my favorite horror movie and the bloody look has already been done by Rihanna and Doja Cat. The disgust isnt there anymore. Your writeup however saves this from being the worst because I understand the vision. As for the song, I actually really like it, but I don't think it fits as a disgusting song. The song is very sad in nature and I feel like that's the more appropriate emotion being given off here than disgust.  @ZORBIT - Tinashe This is a very weird way to deal with disgust but ok, I can see how it fits to an extent  . The song choice honestly is pretty good though. I can totally understand where the disgust would come from because getting wasted to the point of injuring yourself or making yourself sick is very alarming. The song is still a little too uptempo but your write-up without a doubt made this entry a lot stronger than I initially expected it to be. Nice job!  @Invisibility - FKA Twigs The picture with your write-up makes perfect sense so good job there. The song choice for the most part makes sense too, although I'm not totally convinced it completely stuck the landing. Still, not bad.  @Hey Dude - Madonna Your write-up makes the picture stronger. It's great. The song could have been chosen better but I respect your reasoning for selecting it so you're still ok score wise.  Will send in my scores now. I liked every song this round so it was a matter of specific things that made the difference. Good luck to everyone. 2 2
Kern Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 There is one entry that is SO GOOD, not because it is good in general but because it's like made for me, like something I would do if I was clever 1
Kern Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 Disgust is what I feel when I see people at my work 3
CBC Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 2 hours ago, stupidjock said: VINDICTIVENESS @CBC It's a cute entry but not the type that's stands out. I don't understand what vindcitiveness means but the photo is giving 'a day in the kitchen with Azealia'. Song is horrible - tarantulas are big yikes! Lack of exmplenation also doesn't help. weren't you getting fired you stupid jock? 1 2
Yvess Posted October 28, 2023 Author Posted October 28, 2023 2 hours ago, stupidjock said: There is one entry that is SO GOOD, not because it is good in general but because it's like made for me, like something I would do if I was clever spill!
MusicLoverDude Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 10 minutes ago, CBC said: weren't you getting fired you stupid jock? I mean you're the one stanning that horrible woman so be grateful he's only dragging the example entry and not the countless amounts of times she has proven to be a horrible person.
Yvess Posted October 28, 2023 Author Posted October 28, 2023 cyber bully @stupidjockso we can get results done lolololol
Kern Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 Ok im awaken! I just gotta go to get pizza and will be back with some messy crits!Â
Kern Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 (edited) OH MY GOD Â Â I WAS WRITING MY CRITS AND WAS HALF DONE WHEN THE PAGE CLOSED AND WHOLE POST DISSAPEAREDÂ Â **** YOU Edited October 28, 2023 by stupidjock
Kern Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 ANGER @fiercE @Legend E I think both photos deserve the same score - P!nk because it's very straighforward and speaks for itself and Kelly for explanation that fits very well. When it comes to songs I think Kelly did better, more passionate job. P!nk song could use more stronger production and a bit of an edge. I actually love discovering Kelly through this game, I wasn't aware she has such unique sound and I'm glad to have another new song from her added to my library.  JOY @blackoutbaby@Dessy Yay to both photos, good choices. Nay to Diamonds the song - it's too dramatic, it lacked the care-free energy I'm looking in joy. Ciara's song slayed. This is what it feels like when your crush texted you and you're dancing in your house for the next hour like you won a lottery.  SADNESS @Overprotected@Queen.  IDK, I love Mariah description of her photo with 'well does it get any sadder than an old human resources woman...' paired with Nicki's 'NONE' and her photo looking all slayful and horny next to the pic of basically me when I'm at work. Songs section is more even for both, both are good choices.  DISGUST @Kylie Verzosa @ZORBIT I think both of you had the hardest theme, especially when it comes to the songs. Because photos slayed, specially with yous descriptions. In these songs, disgust was harder to find but I think the essays is what saved you both from me giving it lower score. I think both of you did your best with those entries.  FEAR @Hey Dude @Invisibility I think this is the first FKA entry that didn't convince me. Even if explanation help a bit with the photo, I struggle to see the fear here. Song does a bit better here. But it's Madonna who I have to say has won me completely. This is the perfect entry I was talking about earlier - it's something I wouldn't come up with myself but something that makes so much sense. Both photo and song with your explanations might be your strongest solo entry this entire season (sans the Nothing Fails fiasco I wanted to give 11/10). 1 2
CBC Posted October 28, 2023 Posted October 28, 2023 19 hours ago, stupidjock said: VINDICTIVENESS @CBC It's a cute entry but not the type that's stands out. I don't understand what vindcitiveness means but the photo is giving 'a day in the kitchen with Azealia'. Song is horrible - tarantulas are big yikes! Lack of exmplenation also doesn't help. 6 hours ago, stupidjock said: OH MY GOD   I WAS WRITING MY CRITS AND WAS HALF DONE WHEN THE PAGE CLOSED AND WHOLE POST DISSAPEARED  **** YOU  2
Kern Posted October 29, 2023 Posted October 29, 2023 55 minutes ago, CBC said:  We’re about to have a witch-off if this continues 1
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted October 29, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted October 29, 2023 Tarantula is a bop, one of Azealia’s best 1
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023 ROUND 11 Hello, TABSistrens! Welcome to the 11th Results Show of the Season!    @fiercE @Legend E @Kylie Verzosa @ZORBIT @Queen.  @Dessy @blackoutbaby @Hey Dude @Invisibility @Overprotected  @stupidjock @MusicLoverDude @CBC @lacy
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023 ROUND 11    ANGER  VS @fiercE @Legend E Spoiler  Congratulations Kelly, you won this match and is SAFE from ELIMINATION! Sorry P!nk but you are up for ELIMINATION as a BOTTOM TRIBUTE  Â
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023 (edited)  ROUND 11  JOY  VS @blackoutbaby @Dessy Spoiler  Congratulations Ciara, you won this match and is SAFE from ELIMINATION! Sorry Rihanna but you are up for ELIMINATION as a BOTTOM TRIBUTE   Edited October 29, 2023 by Yvess
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023  ROUND 11  SADNESS  VS @Overprotected @Queen. Spoiler  Congratulations Mariah, you won this match and is SAFE from ELIMINATION! Sorry Nicki but you are up for ELIMINATION as a BOTTOM TRIBUTE  Â
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023  ROUND 11  FEAR  VS @Invisibility @Hey Dude Spoiler  Congratulations Madonna, you won this match and is SAFE from ELIMINATION! Sorry FKA but you are up for ELIMINATION as a BOTTOM TRIBUTE  Â
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023  ROUND 11  DISGUST  VS @Kylie Verzosa @ZORBIT Spoiler  Congratulations to the both of you, you both won this match and is SAFE from ELIMINATION!   1
Yvess Posted October 29, 2023 Author Posted October 29, 2023 ROUND 11 Â CONGRATULATIONS @Overprotected You returned from hell and now officially you WON your first TOP TABS moment! As announced when I dropped the round brief, you will have an advantage that will impact this elimination! Will reveal it on the next post 1
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