Kylie Verzosa Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 35 minutes ago, Yvess said: THE LEADERBOARD (R1-R9 COMBINED) @Invisibility @Queen. @Overprotected @khalyan @Hey Dude @blackoutbaby @Dessy @Legend E @fiercE @Kylie Verzosa @ZORBIT Is the top 3 all from the same camp? 1
Kylie Verzosa Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 @ZORBIT @Yvess and @Kylie Verzosa in one frame 1 1
Kylie Verzosa Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 45 minutes ago, stupidjock said: I need @Kylie Verzosa to help me w that Once 3LIXIR's debut promo cycle is done this Friday, I will fly straight to Poland bb. We will do bb and make lots of babies. 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 YVESS CRITIQUES #MarIca @Overprotected @khalyan GIRL GROUP NAME: THE EMPRESSES cute name, very regal sounding so you will really expect classy presentation for their debut. GIRL GROUP ADDED MEMBER: KYLIE MINOGUE @Psycho must be very proud to be part of this vocal group! great pick and kylie exudes goddess, royal vibes so that is just a no-brainer to add her on your girl group GIRL GROUP DEBUT LOOK leather looks are fine. like it but I'm not in love with it. GIRL GROUP DEBUT SINGLE: IRRESISTIBLE This is your strongest suit, i like how you guys fit in two tracks with the same title. That for me is witty and i see it going well with the lyrics from Kylie too. FINAL THOUGHTS This girl group did good in terms of presenting themselves as royalties in the girl group scene. Kinda wished the looks were more gaggy tho. 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 YVESS CRITIQUES #CiaRihDonna @blackoutbaby @Dessy @Hey Dude GIRL GROUP NAME: SISTER RIFF CLEVER NAME TO GO FOR WHEN YOU HAVE GREAT WOMEN JOINING FORCES. GIRL GROUP ADDED MEMBER: SHANIA TWAIN ok i was shocked to see her here but i think it is in a good way, it is so exciting to see how she will fit in this GG. GIRL GROUP DEBUT LOOK I love that you guys went hard for the country look and what sold me the look the most was the explanation. FEMINISM DONE WELL ESP IN A MUSIC GENRE DOMINATED BY MEN! SLAY! GIRL GROUP DEBUT SINGLE: MUSIC! A VERY STRONG SINGLE! I THINK I LOVE HOW CIARA AND MADGE'S PARTS WERE VERY COHESIVE while CIARA AND SHANIA are also cohesive to each other. So, when i look at the overall song lyrics, it didn't look weird or forced. Good job! FINAL THOUGHTS The only four-girl member group of the round slayed and it really surprised me! I kinda feel like this is also your redemption since three of you got into bad rounds lately. Good job! 3
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 YVESS CRITIQUES #TwiCki @Invisibility @Queen. GIRL GROUP NAME: DREAMERS I like the name that you went for, makes me believe that the three girls are not just relying on beauty but more on their dreams to make it big in the industry as a girl group GIRL GROUP ADDED MEMBER: JANET JACKSON this choice was very smart and knowing how much of a legend she is, it is going to be so fitting to have her alongside your pair. GREAT CHOICE! GIRL GROUP DEBUT LOOK You guys lived up to the fantasy, dream-like aesthetic to match the gg name you guys have and for that, I am so pleased and it is more than enough for me. GIRL GROUP DEBUT SINGLE: GRATITUDE This is giving me 90's vibes in terms of the theme and I am here for it. I guess this kind of single will do well to introduce your trio to the audience who are looking for new idols to stan. The lyrics you chose for each member are powerful and impactful. It is very clever to put in Janet's beloved single as a chorus because it gives this single the needed push to make it big if ever this fantasy girl group happens in an alternate universe. FINAL THOUGHTS I love that you guys went for a strong and solid debut choice for your girl group. I love everything from the name, looks, and song parts of each member! You guys did THAT! 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 YVESS CRITIQUES #RoNaLia @ZORBIT @Kylie Verzosa GIRL GROUP NAME: ELIXIR i am slayed. that name is very iconic for me. SUCCESS ELIXIR methinks! GIRL GROUP ADDED MEMBER: SUDAN ARCHIVES ICONIC. SLAYFUL. UNEXPECTED. SMART CHOICE. GIRL GROUP DEBUT LOOK you girls know how to slay this round esp this part because you chose gifs that stand out! I love the GIFS! The beauty they possess in those looks will always be the death of me. THIS IS EVERYTHING I WANTED FOR AN ENTRY WHERE WE GO WITH CREATIVE ROUNDS LIKE THIS ONE. GIRL GROUP DEBUT SINGLE: CUUUUuuuuuute Love (OMG) #1 DEBUT SINGLE CONFIRMED FINAL THOUGHTS Hey queens! RoNaLia, you have done it again. Constantly raising the bar for us all and doing it flawlessly. I’d say I’m surprised, but I know who you are. I’ve seen it up close and personal. Girl, you make me so proud, and I love you, 1 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 ok im done now just cyber bully the other judges then @stupidjock @MusicLoverDude @CBC @fountain @lacy GUEST JUDGE: @dweebz
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 EVERYONE DELIVERED NO ONE FLOPPED IN MY HEART
Kern Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 That one group already knows I’m about to praise and stan 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 1 minute ago, stupidjock said: That one group already knows I’m about to praise and stan THE COLLAPSE!
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 53 minutes ago, Kylie Verzosa said: @ZORBIT @Yvess and @Kylie Verzosa in one frame we ate that cover
Invisibility Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 @Yvess really said: Ty for the critiques! 1 1
Invisibility Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 My only complaint with the clear concept/fashion queens group is that they seemed to show two looks each (banner and gif)
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 30 minutes ago, Invisibility said: My only complaint with the clear concept/fashion queens group is that they seemed to show two looks each (banner and gif) hmmmm. the banner for the girl group falls under the gg name element. gg name element is constant 1/1 for everyone. so technically, all 4 GGs got a 1 for that element with or without the banner.
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 for the looks part, the ones that were stated to be their debut look are the only ones who will be judged for the look element.
ZORBIT Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 9 hours ago, Yvess said: where's my autographed copy Our sales demand has skyrocketed unexpectedly & we’re backed by an indie label, we bumped your order to our priority list so give us about 2-3 business days
ZORBIT Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 7 hours ago, Invisibility said: My only complaint with the clear concept/fashion queens group is that they seemed to show two looks each (banner and gif) We analyzed the brief differently by taking the visually creative route spotlighting another acclaimed alternative artist Good luck Dreamers x 1 1
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 55 minutes ago, ZORBIT said: We analyzed the brief differently by taking the visually creative route spotlighting another acclaimed alternative artist Good luck Dreamers x PLS FIGHT jk
Yvess Posted October 18, 2023 Author Posted October 18, 2023 1 hour ago, ZORBIT said: Our sales demand has skyrocketed unexpectedly & we’re backed by an indie label, we bumped your order to our priority list so give us about 2-3 business days oh yes please put me in priority list tysm or else i will give u 4.5
Kern Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 1 hour ago, stupidjock said: I guess it's time for my crits I guess that caused error 500
Kern Posted October 18, 2023 Posted October 18, 2023 (edited) stupidjock's essays Spoiler ROUND 10 @Queen. + @Invisibility presenting us: DREAMERS FKA TWIGS / NICKI MINAJ / JANET JAKSON I really like conceptual vibe of the name. It's mysterious and gives a lot of ideas on what you can expect from the group. Janet addition felt a bit random to me and that's where your explaination helps a lot becasue without it I'd just feel like y'all chose from a legends hat so I'm glad there is a description. I think y'all went with a very good and simple concept with the looks that fits the name and shows cohesivness to your entry. Unfortunately that cohesivness is what I miss in the song. I feel like it would be better with a different concept, something more specific where every girl would show her best side. This is giving me more of an album track than a debut single from this power group. @Overprotected + @khalyan presenting us: THE EMPRESSES MARIAH CAREY / JESSICA SIMPSON / KYLIE MINOGUE When it come to the name I'm not really feeling it, I feel like it's more of an album name than a girl group. It's hard to imagine someone saying "now onto the stage give it up for the EMPRESSES" - it sounds awkwards to me. But don't worry, it won't affect the scoring in any way so I just wanted to share that as a side note. Now onto the praise - I love the description! I think this is the first time someone went meta in this game and I've been waiting for this moment. Kylie addition was such a good idea, this trio making a song together irl would be an absolute collapse! Both looks and the song is giving me this late 90s/early 00s vibe and I really love it! Very good, out of the box, creative entry overall. @blackoutbaby + @Hey Dude + @Dessy presenting us: Sister Riff Madonna / Rihanna / Ciara / Shania Another name I struggle to like but it doesn't affect the scoring so it doesn't matter tbh. Overall I'm enjoying the country concept, it's a clever way to make this entry cohessive and that probably wasn't easy with 4 girls. So Shania was a perfect choice for that and whole entry feels quite grounded in reality thanks to her. My only complaint about the song is that it's too short! Give us this 4 min. bop girls! @ZORBIT + @Kylie Verzosa presentig us: 3LIXIR ROSALÍA / SUDAN ARCHIVES / TINASHE After Shakira deprature girls sat down and started thinking - what the hell we gonna do now? Rent is due, top 10 is just around the corner... We DON'T want to end up like her. Let's make sure we deliver, said one girl - say no more - answered the other. One call to good friend SA and here is how it started. Now trio stands on the TABS stage delivering something no judge has seen before - a perfect blend of alternative, experimental side with ability to simply serve cvnt. This entry screams LOOK AT ME and that's what I wanted to see - something that dares to stand out but also shows playfulness, fun and creativity. What a way to enter TOP 10. k, bye Edited October 18, 2023 by stupidjock 4
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