fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 5:13 PM, DatChickDoe said: I have been fighting with lyrics all week. Not sure it keeps evolving Expand Thank you for submitting
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 5:15 PM, Achilles. said: Finally started writing in the last hour or so and I’m so happy. I’ve wanted to write this song for six ******* years but it never amounted to anything more than a handful of lines sitting in a note somewhere. Suddenly it’s coming together. Expand ahh we love to see it
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 6:00 PM, hurricane326 said: I'm not sure I'm that happy with my final product. It's good but not great imo Expand shall i anticipate a 5th submission?
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 Pulled a Taylor Swift and wrote a chorus that keeps the same structure and rhyme scheme but completely changes words. Four times.
DatChickDoe Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 5:40 PM, fountain said: Thank you for submitting Expand Let’s hope you feel that way after reading it. I think I went kinda dark
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 6:09 PM, DatChickDoe said: Let’s hope you feel that way after reading it. I think I went kinda dark Expand my reviews will be up by this time tomorrow so i fear you won't have to wait too long to find out
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 4:35 PM, D e v o n said: As a heterosexual man this has been the hardest round. Expand i would probably hate this round if i were in your position it’s hard enough as a gay man On 6/9/2022 at 4:10 PM, fountain said: tbh it sounds like this has been your experience every round yet it seems to keep working out so Expand yeah, pretty much i always try to start a few days before but every song so far has been 90-100% written the morning it’s due
Into The Void Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 3:46 PM, fountain said: You could always write a love song to the person in your avatar Expand you got me writing a song using his song titles as lyrics now
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 Trying to decide if this song wants a 24 line bridge or a 16 line bridge and 8 line outro.
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 7:29 PM, Achilles. said: Trying to decide if this song wants a 24 line bridge or a 16 line bridge and 8 line outro. Expand the 500 word challenge was last week
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 7:25 PM, Insanity said: you got me writing a song using his song titles as lyrics now Expand Better than not submitting!
Into The Void Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 (edited) On 6/9/2022 at 8:08 PM, fountain said: Better than not submitting! Expand im stuck on verse 2 actually this song is awful Edited June 9, 2022 by Insanity
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 7:53 PM, Jackson said: the 500 word challenge was last week Expand Every challenge is a 500 word challenge if you try hard enough! But I’m actually at 395 now. And I think it’s finished finished now.
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 8:09 PM, Achilles. said: Every challenge is a 500 word challenge if you try hard enough! But I’m actually at 395 now. And I think it’s finished finished now. Expand your bridge must be half the song then bridges are always the highlight of the song though so this sounds like another top 3
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 (edited) On 6/9/2022 at 9:37 PM, Jackson said: your bridge must be half the song then bridges are always the highlight of the song though so this sounds like another top 3 Expand Last entry was my bridge song; this round is my chorus and outro song. I definitely think it’s my best submission so far, but we’ll see if the judges agree and what the competition looks like. It would be fun to keep the top 5 streak going. I know that this title is very on the nose considering the theme of this challenge, but it’s called “In The Closet.” Edited June 9, 2022 by Achilles.
Remmy Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 5:15 PM, Achilles. said: Finally started writing in the last hour or so and I’m so happy. I’ve wanted to write this song for six ******* years but it never amounted to anything more than a handful of lines sitting in a note somewhere. Suddenly it’s coming together. Expand Omg moments like these are the best There's actually a song I've been wanting to finish for around 2 years and I keep thinking about it... hopefully one of these last 2 themes fits with it. On 6/9/2022 at 6:03 PM, Achilles. said: Pulled a Taylor Swift and wrote a chorus that keeps the same structure and rhyme scheme but completely changes words. Four times. Expand Hold UP!!!
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 11:39 PM, Remmy said: Omg moments like these are the best There's actually a song I've been wanting to finish for around 2 years and I keep thinking about it... hopefully one of these last 2 themes fits with it. Expand hmm... who said there will only be 2 in the last 2 rounds?
Remmy Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 11:47 PM, fountain said: hmm... who said there will only be 2 in the last 2 rounds? Expand
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 On 6/9/2022 at 11:49 PM, Remmy said: Expand don't worry it's gonna be fun
mxtthewdelrey Posted June 10, 2022 Posted June 10, 2022 might need an extra day to submit this week cause i'm amid finals rn
fountain Posted June 10, 2022 Author Posted June 10, 2022 Hey everyone, 2 hour reminder @Prisoner @8thPrince @☆lex @Hanami-Blossom @RobDeWittBukater @Arrows @ughgabriel @Tylerbv @luckystrike @OreGuy @boubour @TruGemini @Jessie @Astro @JoeAg @mxtthewdelrey @Lorenzo22 @Insanity @D e v o n
fountain Posted June 10, 2022 Author Posted June 10, 2022 On 6/10/2022 at 1:04 AM, mxtthewdelrey said: might need an extra day to submit this week cause i'm amid finals rn Expand Good luck with them hope to see you submit when you can
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