fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 26 minutes ago, DatChickDoe said: I have been fighting with lyrics all week. Not sure it keeps evolvingΒ Thank you for submitting
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 25 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Finally started writing in the last hour or so and Iβm so happy. Iβve wanted to write this song for six ******* years but it never amounted to anything more than a handful of lines sitting in a note somewhere. Suddenly itβs coming together. ahh we love to see it
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 1 minute ago, hurricane326 said: I'm not sure I'm that happy with my final product. It's good but not great imo shall i anticipate a 5th submission?Β
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 Pulled a Taylor Swift and wrote a chorus that keeps the same structure and rhyme scheme but completely changes words. Β Four times. Β
DatChickDoe Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 27 minutes ago, fountain said: Thank you for submitting Β Letβs hope you feel that way after reading it. I think I went kinda darkΒ
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 18 minutes ago, DatChickDoe said: Β Letβs hope you feel that way after reading it. I think I went kinda darkΒ my reviews will be up by this time tomorrow so i fear you won't have to wait too long to find outΒ
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 2 hours ago, D e v o n said: As a heterosexual man this has been the hardest round.Β i would probably hate this round if i were in your position Β itβs hard enough as a gay manΒ 3 hours ago, fountain said: tbh it sounds like this has been your experience every round Β yet it seems to keep working out so yeah, pretty much Β i always try to start a few days before but every song so far has been 90-100% written the morning itβs dueΒ
Into The Void Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 3 hours ago, fountain said: You could always write a love song to the person in your avatarΒ you got me writing a song using his song titles as lyrics nowΒ
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 Trying to decide if this song wants a 24 line bridge or a 16 line bridge and 8 line outro.
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 23 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Trying to decide if this song wants a 24 line bridge or a 16 line bridge and 8 line outro. the 500 word challenge was last week
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 42 minutes ago, Insanity said: you got me writing a song using his song titles as lyrics nowΒ Better than not submitting!Β
Into The Void Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 (edited) 2 minutes ago, fountain said: Better than not submitting!Β im stuck on verse 2Β Β actually this song is awfulΒ Edited June 9, 2022 by Insanity
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 10 minutes ago, Jackson said: the 500 word challenge was last week Every challenge is a 500 word challenge if you try hard enough! Β Β But Iβm actually at 395 now. And I think itβs finished finished now.
Jackson Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 1 hour ago, Achilles. said: Every challenge is a 500 word challenge if you try hard enough! Β Β But Iβm actually at 395 now. And I think itβs finished finished now. your bridge must be half the song then Β bridges are always the highlight of the song though so this sounds like another top 3
Achilles. Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 (edited) 30 minutes ago, Jackson said: your bridge must be half the song then Β bridges are always the highlight of the song though so this sounds like another top 3 Last entry was my bridge song; this round is my chorus and outro song. Β I definitely think itβs my best submission so far, but weβll see if the judges agree and what the competition looks like. It would be fun to keep the top 5 streak going. Β Β Β I know that this title is very on the nose considering the theme of this challenge, but itβs called βIn The Closet.β Edited June 9, 2022 by Achilles.
Remmy Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 6 hours ago, Achilles. said: Finally started writing in the last hour or so and Iβm so happy. Iβve wanted to write this song for six ******* years but it never amounted to anything more than a handful of lines sitting in a note somewhere. Suddenly itβs coming together. Omg moments like these are the best Β There's actually a song I've been wanting to finish for around 2 years and I keep thinking about it... hopefully one of these last 2 themes fits with it. 5 hours ago, Achilles. said: Pulled a Taylor Swift and wrote a chorus that keeps the same structure and rhyme scheme but completely changes words. Β Four times. Β Hold UP!!!Β
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 7 minutes ago, Remmy said: Omg moments like these are the best Β There's actually a song I've been wanting to finish for around 2 years and I keep thinking about it... hopefully one of these last 2 themes fits with it. hmm... who said there will only be 2 in the last 2 rounds? Β
Remmy Posted June 9, 2022 Posted June 9, 2022 1 minute ago, fountain said: hmm... who said there will only be 2 in the last 2 rounds? Β
fountain Posted June 9, 2022 Author Posted June 9, 2022 1 minute ago, Remmy said: don't worry it's gonna be funΒ Β
mxtthewdelrey Posted June 10, 2022 Posted June 10, 2022 might need an extra day to submit this week cause i'm amid finals rnΒ
fountain Posted June 10, 2022 Author Posted June 10, 2022 Hey everyone, 2 hour reminderΒ Β Β @PrisonerΒ Β @8thPrinceΒ Β @βlexΒ @Hanami-BlossomΒ @RobDeWittBukaterΒ Β @ArrowsΒ Β @ughgabrielΒ Β @TylerbvΒ Β @luckystrikeΒ @OreGuyΒ Β @boubourΒ @TruGeminiΒ @JessieΒ Β @AstroΒ @JoeAgΒ @mxtthewdelreyΒ Β @Lorenzo22Β @InsanityΒ @D e v o nΒ
fountain Posted June 10, 2022 Author Posted June 10, 2022 49 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said: might need an extra day to submit this week cause i'm amid finals rnΒ Good luck with them hope to see you submit when you can
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