fountain Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 3 hours ago, Hug said: Well Are you well, Hug? Hi @funnellegs
funnellegs Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 17 minutes ago, fountain said: Are you well, Hug? Hi @funnellegs Hi
fountain Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 59 minutes ago, funnellegs said: Hi How’s it going?
funnellegs Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 (edited) 2 hours ago, fountain said: How’s it going? It’s all good I’m just checking this thread to see if anymore reviews have been posted as I await my possible doom and you my doll? Edited February 1, 2021 by funnellegs
fountain Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 20 minutes ago, funnellegs said: It’s all good I’m just checking this thread to see if anymore reviews have been posted as I await my possible doom and you my doll? Just waiting too idk what to expect but I don’t want to see anybody go especially after waiting so long
fountain Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 Manifesting results but at this point I will probably accept anything tonight [4]
Auburn Posted February 1, 2021 Posted February 1, 2021 AUBURN’S REVIEWS Very strong round, everyone did a great job! I wish we could have a 4-person finale at this point! Sorry about being a bit late but I had a project due last night for school. Spoiler @Hug- sweet abandon / Friend No More First of all, I love the concept of switching the inspirations for your songs, it’s very creative and I wasn’t expecting it but it proved to be a risk worth taking imo. I read sweet abandon before I read your description, so at first I thought it might be about a child rejecting their parent’s love, but by the end it definitely became clear to me that it was about many people’s complicated relationship with god, and I love that it was strong enough for me to get that from it. Very nicely written. I love that Friend No More is a different perspective of Childhood Summer. I love that it feels like this person could be one of the kids from the original story, but their perspective is different than that of the original narrator. Really interesting and it all flows so well. @Rence- stanley park / freedom I love that you added a sad element to a happy song, I think it really works to your advantage because sometimes swinging too far in one direction is a bit overreaching. I really enjoy the atmosphere of reflective fondness you captured with stanley park. freedom is very haunting, I think we know this by now but again you did a great job conveying the emotions of the narrator. I really love how the chorus changes with the progression of the song to fit the story. Really well done. @funnellegs- as the dawn breaks / a love that lasts a lifetime I just love how as the dawn breaks is written like a letter to the person the narrator is referring to in the song. It feels so raw and honest, wow I really enjoyed that. Really great job! And a love that lasts a lifetime… I really think you knocked it out of the park this week. Excellence all around I don’t really have much else to say. So much feeling in this one too. @fountain- P! / O S / Hw II / S G S V I really really like P!, I just love the atmosphere that it captures, and the imagery of it all. I can feel exactly what you are describing. I think the spin you put on Jawbreaker to write O S is so interesting, and I loved exploring this new interpretation the song. Some of the wording in this song are really nicely organized for me, if that makes sense lol. I think Hw II definitely works as a love song so I’m very glad you sent it despite it not really being your thing. It embodies the carefree gleefulness of new love perfectly. Really nice. S G S V is short yet effective, and a nice closer for your round. I’m, a sucker for less structured songs, so I really liked this. Great job!
ughgabriel Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 just waiting on CL for rankings but the semi finale results will be posted tonight c:
ughgabriel Posted February 2, 2021 Author Posted February 2, 2021 also waiting on page 121 so i can post my critiques
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