ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 PLEASE NOT THAT POST STARTING THE NEW PAGE
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 2 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: CHAPTER X HOPE WE MAKE IT THROUGH ALERT! ALERT! THIS IS NOT A DRILL PREPARE FOR STAGE 37-B REPEATING: THIS IS NOT A DRILL "attention, passengers! our spaceship is about to get into wormhole keluvie-4. this is an extremely dangerous action, and i have to warn you all that we might not survive but this is the only way that we can make it to zuleen the only other planet that has the adequate conditions for human life ... today's the risk that we must take if we expect to see a tomorrow" the infinite darkness of space and its immense silence fills the ship everybody goes quiet everyone knows what's coming people interlock their hands with each other the wait for that very moment which could mark the end of their lives; the end of a race "dear passengers... i really do hope we all can make it through but if it isn't possible then i must say one last thing: ... it was a joy to have shared this journey with you." attention! we're about to enter wormhole keluvie-4 in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... "see you on the other side!" anyway bump
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 16 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: CHAPTER X HOPE WE MAKE IT THROUGH ALERT! ALERT! THIS IS NOT A DRILL PREPARE FOR STAGE 37-B REPEATING: THIS IS NOT A DRILL "attention, passengers! our spaceship is about to get into wormhole keluvie-4. this is an extremely dangerous action, and i have to warn you all that we might not survive but this is the only way that we can make it to zuleen the only other planet that has the adequate conditions for human life ... today's the risk that we must take if we expect to see a tomorrow" the infinite darkness of space and its immense silence fills the ship everybody goes quiet everyone knows what's coming people interlock their hands with each other the wait for that very moment which could mark the end of their lives; the end of a race "dear passengers... i really do hope we all can make it through but if it isn't possible then i must say one last thing: ... it was a joy to have shared this journey with you." attention! we're about to enter wormhole keluvie-4 in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... "see you on the other side!" Omg I always love how these are written
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 But not us jumping through a wormhole and leaving all the eliminees out there floating in space
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 (edited) Congratulations, top 5! You've made it this far and, honestly, you are all so deserving. You have prove time and time again that you are all great writers. Your talent is incredible. And while we don't doubt it at all, you all must pass what might be the most challenging round from the season. "A wormhole is a speculative structure linking disparate points in spacetime" For this round we want to see the opposite side from the one you've been showing us this whole time. We want you to show the other side of the coin and present to us the unusual you. You can take that as you wish. Some of the examples that we might give you are: -To write a song that is different from anything you've done in this competition. -To revisit one of your songs and give it a twist by showing us the opposite perspective from the original. -To write a song about a theme that strays away from what you tend to write about. These are only some examples but you can take the opposites idea as you wish as long as you stray away from an element of your usual style. The task is to surprise us and to show us a different layer of who you are as a writer. We would like to read about how you decided to take this challenge, so descriptions will be required for this round. If you have any questions about this challenge, you can always ask! But honestly, it's really up to you on how you want to interpret the challenge as long as you present another side of you! This might be your hardest challenge yet! But we believe that you all will succeed. You have until Tuesday, January 12 to submit your song here! Best of luck <3 @keshaspearsxo @Hug @Rence @8thPrince @funnellegs Edited January 7, 2021 by ughgabriel
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 interesting. This will take some thought I like it though
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 The original concept of the round was supposed to be a little more intense since we were going to be banning an element from your respective usual style, so it was kinda personalized but we didn't want it to feel unbalanced Hug was originally not allowed to use rhymes, Rence was not allowed to write an emotional song, funnel had to write a very lengthy song (350 words), pears had to write from someone else's perspective/based on fantasy and 8thPrince had to write a song with a conventional pop structure (no variations in its chorus)
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 1 minute ago, ughgabriel said: pears had to write from someone else's perspective/based on fantasy drag me, I mean it’s true though I really only write from a personal perspective. What kinda thing do you mean by fantasy though?
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: drag me, I mean it’s true though I really only write from a personal perspective. What kinda thing do you mean by fantasy though? It basically meant that your entry couldn't be inspired by any of your real life experiences nn
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 Also not 350+ being lengthy my last one was literally 1200
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: Also not 350+ being lengthy my last one was literally 1200 Their last entry had 303 words and I think that one has been one of their longest so maybe we would've gotten it up to 500 after taking that entry into consideration ?
ughgabriel Posted January 7, 2021 Author Posted January 7, 2021 In b4 y'all write with your usual style, exchange songs and make them pass as yours
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 10 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: It basically meant that your entry couldn't be inspired by any of your real life experiences nn Hmmm interesting I quite like the personalised ones, I might try to follow it. Maybe I will attempt that challenge from my season where you had to write a song without using any first person pronouns
Courtney Love Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 Congrats top 5 And to @keshaspearsxo for another #1 And like others have been saying, I’m going to be quicker getting my scores and critiques out, sorry guys. Luckily I don’t have as much going on this Jan compared to Nov/Dec.
Rence Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 3 hours ago, ughgabriel said: Rence was not allowed to write an emotional song I- I’d be here for it though Lemme write that sex bop that I’ve been wanting to send
Hug Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 This is hard for me because I'm just always doing something new and inventive!!!
fountain Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 17 minutes ago, Hug said: This is hard for me because I'm just always doing something new and inventive!!! This is a struggle I can relate to! 10 hours ago, Courtney Love said: Congrats top 5 And to @keshaspearsxo for another #1 Thank you it’s actually quite interesting to look at which songs of mine achieved this.
ughgabriel Posted January 11, 2021 Author Posted January 11, 2021 On 1/10/2021 at 2:19 AM, fountain said: Music is so otherworldly It truly is :shy:
8thPrince Posted January 11, 2021 Posted January 11, 2021 Dashing Penguin - 7 I'm Happy You're Going to Hell - 9 I Took a Handful of Sand from the Beach - 2 3-Piece Zombie - 5 Stained Glass - 1 Your Turn to Die - 3 Life is Laughing - 2 Who Owns the Sky? - 2 7-Month Calendar - 4 Debut - ???
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